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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, a sense of competition is considered important by some people to be encouraged, while others argue that children who are educated to collaborate rather than compete tend to be more successful in the future. Through this essay, I will ventilate both views and give my supportive opinion towards collaboration that should be possessed by children.

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Some people think that exams are a good way of assessing a a student's level, Other people believe that they put unnecessary pressure on young learners and tell us very ittle about their actual ability. Discuss both views and give your own opinior

Some individuals believe that examinations are a better method of analyzing a pupil's level while others feel that they give extra pressure to youngsters and do not mark their real strengths. I believe that exams pressurize students unnecessarily without judging their real capabilities as it builds anxiety among young learners.This essay will

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The government should spend money in promoting sport and art in school, rather than sponsoring sports and art events in communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While some people believe that authority should provide financial support to schools to promote arts and sports, others argue that it is better to focus on arts and sports events in communities. I completely agree with former opinion as amples of reasons are present to substantiate it.

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Many people around the world use social mdeia every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events . Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Social media have been used to keep in touch with other people around the world by many individuals. In my personal view, the positive aspects that using social media provides for humans is more outweigh the pessimistic aspects .

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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People nowadays definitely get married later than in the past. Currently, the new word 'Dink' shows up, which means people who chose not to have children. Siblings were common when I was young, but nowadays, I can come across only children more often. In my opinion, having a baby has more disadvantages than advantages. We will illustrate the reason why people choose not to have a baby in this essay.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In this modern society, social networking sites have become widely used for connecting community and accessing current affairs. This writer believes that the benefits of getting various news and facilitate global interactions outweigh the drawbavks of potential social isolation.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disavantages.

In today's interconnected world, the pervasive use of social media has revolutionized how individuals communicate and stay informed about current events. The question of whether the advantages of utilizing social media outweigh the disadvantages is a pertinent issue that warrants careful consideration.

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Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problems?

Currently, there is a rise in the distance between the wealthy and needy people. The root causes of this is due to the differences of not only opportunities but also lifestyles, yet it can be tackled by government who provide social welfare for the poor.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, there is a trend that more and more people want to live in cities, rather than the countryside. Personally, I think it is a negative development in both areas.

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Many people around the world use social media every to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

From all over the world, individuals take advantage of social networking sites to contact with friends and access news. This writer believes that the benefits of exchanging skills to avoid being a backward person compare to the drawbacks of being addicted.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages otweigh the disadvantages?

Social media is a topic which bears some consideration. It is from the writer's point of view that this development brings more benefits to keeping in touch with humans and getting news events outweigh the lack of confidence in reality.

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many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

the majority of people on the earth always use social networking sites , which help them connect with individual and catch up on new occasions. this author believes that the benefits of convenience and improved relationship outweigh the drawback of isolating themself from society.

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9.Full-time university students should spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is common knowledge that university students are becoming busier than ever. Some people think that despite this, students should participate in other activities aside from only studying. I strongly agree with this statement.

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the best way to sovle world's environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The cost of vehicles is a hotly debated topic that often divides opinion. While some people believe that maximising the fuel cost is the best way to save money, others think there are also other solutions. I think that, despite the convenience it brings, people should not raise the cost of fuel vehicles too much.

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Scientists tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people still continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions for this?

By the human developing, many harmful activities are broadening by the time passed. Maybe some of them do not damage peopleʼs health much, however, a few ones, such as smoking, alcohol, drugs and sugary food consumption are affecting their healthy lifestyle perceptibly.

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school shoub get exam from stuest what is your openion

Up to this day, taking exams and tests are procedure to check the understanding of students. Therefore, several people believe that a lot of exams should be given by students. In my opinion, it is highly important that the education system has exams during their study because it makes it easy to compare students at their level. However, it has some negative impacts.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In many nations today, the popularity of crime novels and TV crime dramas has experienced a significant rise in recent years. This essay aims to delve into the reasons driving this increase in popularity. From my perspective, crime fiction and TV crime dramas should be appreciated and valued for their impact.

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All chirldren should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this day and age, a plethora of people believe that it should be mandatory for young generations to learn a foreign language as much as possible at an early age in school.I completely agree with this point and give my triggers below. In addition, I shall give my personal opinion on this view.

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All children should study a foreign language in school in school, starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this day and age, a plethora of peoplebelieve that it should be mandatory for young generations to learn a foreign language as much as possible at an early age in school.I completely agree with this point and give my triggers below. In addition, I shall give my personal opinion to this view.

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One of the most pressing problems the world is facing today is overpopulation. What are the causes and effects of this problem?

In recent times, overpopulation Has been a major issue in some countries. Poverty and miseducation are the main causes while Healthcare and access to water are the principal effects of this problem.

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