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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some say that music, art and drama areas important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, art studying is more important than other subjects at lower education levels. I strongly agree with the proposition that studying academic subjects is more important than arts areas when students are young.

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Some school leavers choose to travel or work for a year before going to university. What might be the reasons for this? What are the disadvantages of this practice?

It is common practice nowadays for many people ending high school to take one year of travelling or working before joining post secondary studies.There are many reasons why now a lot of students take a break from studying after GED12, and this essay will showcase a few of them.

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Advantages and disadvantages of educating boys and girls in the same class at schools.

Nowadays,when our society is in the stage of rapid transformation, some people argue whether boys and girls should be educated in the same class or it is better to separate them. It is agreed, that the main advantage of this issue is the ability for children to understand the difference between opposite genders and how to communicate with each other; however ,the main drawback is the possibility of misunderstandings and negative consequences. This essay,firstly,will discuss what positive sides this problem has,followed by an analysis of negative influence,before coming to a reasoned conclusion.

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Nowadays there is a tendancy to relocate overseas for lucrative jobs.While a faction of people holds the notion that this movement is challanging (?)for juveniles, others argue that it is better for children.

While a faction of people holds the notion that relocating to overseas for employment purpose is challenging for juveniles, others believe that it is beneficial for children. This essay will delve into both viewpoints and explain my support for the latter view with relevant illustrations.

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In many countries, there are a lot of students who commit suicide each year. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?

A lot of research and data have mentioned the rise in suicide rates each year among students worldwide is increasing. I believe that to every problem, there must be a solution.

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Some people believe that teenagers should always follow the example of the older people. Others believe that teenagers should question what older people say. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One of the most critical and important stages of a child's life is teenagehood. many life-changing decisions are taken in that period and the experiences are long-lasting. Some folks say that teenagers should always follow the older ones' advice, while others believe that they ultimately have to think on their own to find the correct way. In my point of view, the latter opinion is more logical and suitable for teenagers.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that due to the difference between sexes,men are suitable for caertain jobs while women are not. However, I argue that jobs are chosen by people, despite their gender because of social help and their own opinions, even though there is a disaprity in strength between 2 sexes.

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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. Do the advantages of this for their study outweigh the disadvantages?

Numerous individuals hold the opinion that some school leavers have a tendency to seek employment or travel instead of going straight to college. I am firmly of the opinion that its strengths are weightier than its shortcomings.

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Many young people today spend too much time following the latest fashion trends in areas such as clothing and technology. Do the advantages of this trend outweight the drawbacks?

Fashion has become a major part of our lives. Some individuals spend much of their time arranging new clothes and gadgets. In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons and give my opinion, along with some relevant examples.

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Sport is becoming a business. More and more companies are getting involved in sporting events. Do you thing that is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays sport is a new field of business and you can see lots of businesses’ and companies’ advertisement while you are watching matches, I personally think this development has both upward and downward side effects.

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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. Do the advantages of this for study outweigh the disadvantages?

While spending a period of time traveling or working instead of going directly are increasingly popular, they continue to be rather controversial because the benefits are hard to quantify exactly. There are valid arguments on both sides, which I will discuss now.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think students should spend time on important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The discussion regarding whether students should engage in the study of food science and culinary skills or concentrate exclusively on core subjects has been a long-standing point of contention. Both viewpoints have their merits, and it is crucial to weigh the advantages and disadvantages of each stance.

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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports center now and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below illustrate a current university’s sports center and its future redevelopment plan. Overall, there will be a radical transformation especially for the outdoor courts which will become all indoor area and some additional features attached to it such as a caffe and sports shop.

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The only way to improve road safety is to have stricter punishments for driving offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The prevailing belief among the majority is that the most effective strategy to enhance road safety is to enforce stricter punishments for traffic offenders. This author wholeheartedly agrees with this viewpoint and urges governments to implement more robust laws to address this issue.

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Today more and more people are using mobile phone and computer. Thus, the communication ability is losing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Mobile phone and computer are becoming popular nowadays. While it is believed that these electronic devices make people lose their communication skills, I disagree with this belief due to two main reasons.

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Today more and more people are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Thus, there is no need to print newspapers, books, or magazines anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, with the prelevance of digital devices using, it is much easier to access the information online or through the other digital platforms, such as computers, smartphones and iPads. Although some people believe that this infomation revolution allows people to consume information in more eco-friendly and efficient ways, I argue that the traditional newspapers, books and magazines should still be preserved.

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online shopping seems to be replacing the traditional method of buying. however some buyers are sceptical to this practice. discuss both benefits and risks associated with online shopping

Nowadays, there are plenty of methods of shopping than previous time, which as online shopping. Consumers prefer this technique for many reasons although there are a lot of problems that might be lead to when using this method.

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some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is often argued that with the development of e-books, it is not far away when paper books will disappear while some disagree as for them it is an impossible thing to believe. Despite the mass use of e-books, I still think that traditional paper books are not going anywhere.

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What are the causes and effects of rising divorce rate?

One plausible reason contributing to the surge in divorces is the evolving societal norms and values. Modern societies often witness shifting paradigms regarding marriage, where changing perspectives on individuality and independence might lead to diminished tolerance for marital conflicts or compromises. For instance, the increased prioritization of personal fulfilment and career aspirations may inadvertently strain marital relationships, making couples more inclined towards separation. A potential solution to mitigate this trend is the emphasis on pre-marital counselling and education programmes. Encouraging couples to undergo counselling sessions before marriage can foster better understanding, communication, and conflict-resolution skills, thereby fortifying the foundation of the relationship.

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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all student can afford them so some think that university education should be free. Do you agree or disagree?

Getting into university is highly expensive lately and the students who want to be in higher education must pay an expensive tuition fee. Some people think the fees should be affordable because not all prospective students can afford it. In this essay, I will examine why I completely agree with the statement because I believe everyone deserves the same opportunity to get into university.

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