IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 364

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people prefer to go to health clubs and gyms for health care, some say the walking and climbing stairs are more effective. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, working out has been of much interest to the general public. Some assert that going to the gym can be beneficial for health care. However, others deem that running and climbing stairs in daily life are more effective instead of going to the gym in person.

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Some scientists believe that studying the behaviors of 3-year-old children can predict their criminality. To what extent do you think a crime is a product of human nature or is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?

In the modern era, some scientists came to the conclusion that by analysing a 3-year-old child's behaviour, they can see the potential behaviour for criminal actions in the future. Some argue that it is impossible to predict child's unlawful actions at this age, while others think the opposite. I strongly agree with the former statement, and this essay will explain why.

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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT UNPAID COMMUNITY SERVICE SHOULD BE A COMPULSORY PART OF HIGHSCHOOL PROGRAMS. to what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Most people think that voluntary community service must be mandatory for secondary students as a part of their curriculum. Which I strongly agree with and support.

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Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success?

Many people deem that being successful is related to be satisfied with personal life, others think that it depends on how much money someone earns. In general, it is possible to see that this conception is not cristalyzed. Therefore, this essay believes that this understanding depends on diverse factors, and being a success is a combination of expectations and goals.

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Some people believe that governments must apply high taxes to provide good public services for everyone. Give your opinion

Debates around appropriate tax rates have long been in existence. While some people are of the opinion that higher tax rates are required for governments to provide great public systems for citizens, others are of the opinion that higher tax rates do not equal great public services. This essay will argue in favour of the former, that higher tax rates do indeed equate better public services, although not all classes of individuals and companies should be taxed equally.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweight the disadvantages?

It is known that risks pose an important step in building strong professional and personal lives. While others may think that taking such hazardous decisions could present a threat, I do believe in the remarkable importance of taking risks in order to advance in the path of professionalism and personal journey.

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in many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. do you think this is a positive or negative developmen

In this era, many rural people or individuals from the countryside are moving to cities. Hence, the population in the cities are growing significantly. In my opinion, this case has several negative aspects, however, it has some positive development as well.

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as transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments are encouraging business to move to rural areas. do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

It is true that the world's largest companies are located in large cities. In the city many people expect to find better employment opportunities, often with bigger, secure companies. as cities become overcrowded, problems relating to housing and transport arise, because of which some people suggest that the larger companies should relocate to the countryside. while this may have some advantages, i firmly believe that the disadvantages would be far more than the advantages.

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Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference.

A part of the society believes that the guardians and friends are the best mode of learning about life principles but remaining agree on the fact that personal experience could be the better option for learning about life. I wholeheartedly agree with the second notion because committing mistakes and then improving them at next stage could be a excellent choice, along with this when humans try to learn by themselves this is a better option to explore individuals own qualities.

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The increasing housing problem in big cities has social consequences. Some people say that only governments can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Owing to the rise in population and the polarization of people towards urban cities, there was a scarcity of houses in metropolises. To encounter this issue, some shortsighted people raised the argument that only the government can solve this problem.I'm of the opinion that people at an individual level and the government should work together to resolve this issue.

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Some people say education is the only critical factor to the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The Multifaceted Development: Beyond Education

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in some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

Citizens of some countries believe that buying a house is more important as opposed to renting it, and there are various reasons for this opinion. I think this circumstance is a positive one.

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People who do not use social media networks will always fall behind in career development opportunities. To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?

Social media networks play an increasingly basic role and are one of the important ways to communicate with each other. People who use these ways can raise the speed of their work and do it faster than doing it in person, while it is an exaggeration to say that ignorance from these systems restrict our career’s advancement.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Owners of cars have risen so fast during the last three decades and it has caused serious vehicle congestion. The government should take the necessary steps to tackle this burning status.

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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays entertainers get paid more than politicians. what are the reasons for this? is this a negative or positive development?*

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Some people think increasing the cost of fuel is the best way to solve global environmental problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people use a lot of fuel, because of the large number of cars, the impact of fuel on the environment is very strong, but despite this, people continue to pollute the environment. Currently, various solutions are being considered by the government to prevent this, an example of this is the increase in fuel.

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Nowadays as a part of the education process students are working for a company for a short period of time without pay. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Today, plenty of students are participating in short-time projects during their education process, and as a rule, they are working for free. This trend has its positive and negative aspects. I am convinced, the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks. In this essay, I am planning to substaintiate my points.

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Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many actions can be taken to reduce the impacts on the environment related to the air pollution. In this scenario, governments around the world play a relevant role which can bring many positive results in the way that cities tackle this global problem.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

People punish their children in different ways. Childhood is really important for them to know what can be done and what cannot be done. In this essay, I will explain why I disagree with this phenomenon.

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In recent years,” responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environmrnt of the places thay visit. However, some poelpe say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A group of people believe that it is possible foster responsible tourism when visitors committe themselves with the visited spot. Others, however, do not believe that it is possible, as far as the tourism practice implicates exploring environment and cultural aspects from a group of individuals. This essay deeply agrees with the former position and this point of view will be developed later on.

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