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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Currently, majority of people are willing to travel around the world to visit the sight seeying places because it is much more easier now as apposed to past. There are several benefits of tourism and there are outweigh the drawbacks.

A plethora of people travelling to the European countries to see the beautification of the world. The tourists are travelling to different places because of too many tourism facilities available now. However, the question is whether the benefits of the excursion are higher than the demerits or not. The following paragraphs will explain further.

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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Disscus this topic and give your own opinions.

Some individuals believe that exist intelligent life outside our planet, and a group of people agree that we should try contact, while others are against any kind of approach. This essay will discuss the two different points of view, and I will give my opinion about this subject.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can is better for their overall skills development and creativity than reading.To what extent do you agree?

Some people hold the view that engaging activities with students enhance their comprehensive skills progress and imaginative ability more than reading. In my opinion, I believe that both activities are necessary for children's development.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays, we are encountering a growing phenomenon of immigrating to more developed countries with different spoken language for better education or working opportunities. Although residing in a country with a different language of your mother tongue could contribute to some difficulties, I wholeheartedly believe that the benefits compensating the potential drawbacks.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While it is true that money doesn't solve all the issues or eradicate poverty but there are significant changes that can be done with money. Fortunately, we live in a world where money can buy anything and everything and can give the opportunity for the poorer country to fulfil their specific needs.

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Currently, majority of people are willing to travel around the world to visit the sight seeying places because it is much more easier now as apposed to past. There are several benefits of tourism and there are outweigh the drawbacks.

Tourism is very important in many countries ,and tourism is the main income of their countries. At present, many people prefer to visit this amazing place. So, some think that this action will be valuable ,but some believe that this situation may be harmful to places. This essay will discuss both views and will give reasons.

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Some people believe that unpaid company services should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A plethora of individuals think that volunteering should be obligatory for the school curriculum. This essay completely agrees with this statement, because thus, children will learn crucial things like why helping is so important. Moreover, it will give them an advance when it comes to a future job or university.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

It is crucial for juveniles to know the dissimilarity between good and bad. Penalty is required due to a better discipline. This essay completely disagrees with the latter statement. Children should be treated with respect and raised with love and conversations and not with threats and violence. In my opinion, no kind of punishment should be permitted.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that the phenomenon of dealing with the health problems without professionally medical adivice is more and more common. While some argue that alternative treatments for diseases may be more helpful, I firmly believe that seeing a doctor when people feel uncomfortable is a better choice. There are two reasons I do agree the idea of finding a doctor to get assistants.

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Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people believe it is necessary, but others think that it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Nowadays, directors of large organizations earn more salaries than ordinary employees do. As a result, a handful of people feel it is inequality for them, however, there are still some who believe that is essential. In this essay, I will consider both perspectives before giving my point of view to this statement.

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"In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. " Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

World is changing around us. Our media industry is also affected by this change. As a result of attention catching graphics and real life like acting, many people prefer to see crime movies and read its novel. It offers fascinating experience , and also assist in the growth of knowledge about our surroundings.

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"In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. " Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both th

Students have different opinions about whether to learn new subjects in addition to university subjects, or just stick to university subjects and dedicate all their time to them. While focusing on university subjects is of great importance, I personally believe that learning new skills could be really beneficial for students.

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Today people are travelling more than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

People are travelling more than ever before in recent times. Achieving quality education from abroad is the main reason for this, and the major benefits of travelling for the traveller are they will be entertained by watching exciting things around them and personality development.

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Societies produce more and more waste as they become more developed. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

The more a society develops, the more its waste piles up. Why is this worldwide phenomenon inevitable and how can we tackle the problems rising from the increasing amount of waste?

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Some Countries have implemented mandatory community programs for young people. In these programs, children aged 16 to 18 do charity work, help old people or work with animals. What are some advantages and disadvantages for this for young people?

it has been a topic to discuss further on whether children aged 16 to 19 do charity work such as helping elders and working with animals falls into mandatory community programs rather than mere additional social program. I personally think that the obligation may include advantage and disadvantage for children, especially if the community program is considered as a subject to mark in determining children's path to higher education.

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These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In today's rapidly evolving society, individuals are presented with a luxurious lifestyle and numerous successful traits, which have amplified their ambitions for career and income promotions. For many, taking multiple jobs or frequently changing careers are ways to achive their desire. However, these decisions carry both merits and demerits. In this essay, I will explore both sides to draw some conclusions.

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In many countries, people wear more Western-style clothes (e.g. jeans and T-shirts) than their traditional clothes. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

Individuals in many nations prefer clothing derived from western countries instead of dressing themselves in clothing based on their culture.This essay will initially discuss the causes of this trend,followed by my firm opinion that it is an adverse development.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and insterets whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Interviewers sometimes ask for personal data from the people who applied for the job. Including the hobbies they have, their interests and the marriage status. Others say that this data may be appropriate and beneficial. Others disagree. In my opinion, personal information should be always private unless the job position can be improved with these data.

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Governments should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extent do vou agree or disagree with the statement?

Congestion is one of the biggest problems in several countries. Many countries have thought that the problem of congestion is because of governments are spend more money on infrastructure for roads more than railways. I partly agree with this opinion, but I will discuss both sides of the argument.

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