IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 53

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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A report indicated that many children between 7 and 11 years old watch television and/or play video games too much. How does the problem affect? What measures can be taken to control it?

A report showed that a lot of children who are between 7 and 11 years old excessively watch television and play video games and this can lead to unhealthy habits and damage physical health. However, this situation can be tackled by raising awareness among their parents through government-sponsored campaigns.

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In the future more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, a significant number of people are migrating to different countries. Hence, during vacation time most of those people prefer to spend time in their home country rather than traveling to other foreign places. To a greater extent, I agree with this notion as people will favour their own country due to the emotional connection and to maintain good relationships with their family relatives.

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Some children are home schooled. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of home schooling?

Several children are studying at home rather than going to school. In my opinion, there are more drawbacks to homeschooling than benefits. My viewpoint is justified in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures What measures should be taken to reduce this pressure

Today, kids have to endure more stress in compared to past generations about things like education, the economy and being in society. there could be hundreds of causes for this problem like higher competition for university entrance exams or low self-esteem caused by financial problems and overuse of social media. reducing exam-based pedagogy and focusing on practical education instead of academics, teaching financial management and reducing their materialism, and parental control over social media use can reduce their stress and pressure.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to maintain a healthy lifestyle in today’s life. Some people believe that it is a positive aspect of our lives while others are of opposite belief. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that crime is dangerous in the world and many individuals consider that crime cannot be done to prevent it. It is undeniable that crime has become an unnecessary part of life. In this essay, i will discuss both these points of view and disagree with this opinion.

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Some people think that developed countries have higher responsibilities to climate change than developing countries. others believe countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment . discuss both sides and give your opinion

The responsibility for climate change has advanced countries or developing countries.

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Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?

In today's technological era, few aged individuals face challenges when using digital devices such as mobile phones and laptops, as they often lack sufficient knowledge about how to use these gadgets. Additionally, due to the effects of aging, they also have physical limitations that make it difficult to operate electronic devices. This essay will explicate the reasons for this situation and also provide the essential steps to address this issue.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as the main source of income. unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if not managed properly. do you think the benefits of tourism outweigh its disdvantages

Many locations around the globe depend on tourism as a significant source of income. However, tourism can also lead to many negative effects if it is not controlled properly. Some advantages of tourism include a better representation of the country, increased funds, and greater diversity. On the other hand, tourism can also lead to environmental damage as well as an increase in crime. I believe that the advantages outweigh the drawbacks in the majority of circumstances.

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Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With development of internet services, many individuals notice that they include a high variety of sensitive and harmful content. Most people think it is the responsibility of the government to ban such materials. In my view, this should be controlled by both government and the populations themselves.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is said that, in the future, nobody will purchase newspapers or books because they will be available without any payment. I agree with this statement to some extent, as I believe that reading from a physical material will remain a preference for some people, while reduction in this trend will be inevitable.

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At the present time ,the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults ,compared with no of older peoples .do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays, the population of youth is increasing worldwide. It is a hotly debatable subject if youth advantages more than old people, and according to me I do agree that youth benefits a lot in the long run but the input of older people is also mandatory.

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Some people believe that professional like doctors and engineers , should be required to work in the country where they training .Other believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish . discuss both side and give your opinion

The professional class is an important part of each country to contribute in building and shaping a community in a well-direction .Training medical doctors or engineers has burned a huge amount of time and resources to build them into effective individuals ,so , Training abroad for professionals must be done based on specific rules and protocols that their immigration will bring adequate achievement for their home country and not an abuse method of the destination as well .

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Driverless vehicles saw a surge in demand in recent times.The future is transforming towards driverless cars,buses, and trucks which will result in the only people travelling inside these automobiles being passengers.This essay will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of such transformation.

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1. In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

It is often argued whether kids should be raised strictly or freely. There are countries where youths are given freedom whereas in others one is under a lot of prohibition. Notwithstanding children’s tendency to break the rules, they may know the boundaries that should not be crossed.

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Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern life,some people advocate that medical services should be provided to the public free of charge rather than being operated by profit-making companies.In my opinion,the drawbacks of private healthcare outweigh the merits.

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Some people believe that using animals to test the safety of human medicines is cruel and unwarranted, whereas others feel it is a medical necessity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

It is a contentious issue whether we should test products on animals or not. Some say it is the necessity, others believe there are no reasons to harm these beings. In this essay, I will elaborate on both points of view and share why I opt for limiting the usage of human medicines on animals.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Learning native languages at school often can be less significant than learning English. So many local languages are endangered if they are not taught. In this essay, I will provide my own state about the importance of learning English and also I will give the solution to ensure the survival of native languages.

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Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Please try to

There is no denying the fact that acoustic has many benefits in our life. While it is commonly held belief that it plays a crucial role in our society. There is also an argument that others believe that it is just one of the entertainment forms. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion. On the one hand, opera has a powerful impact. In other words, songs have hidden melodies that affect people in multiple ways. It can control our feelings and our actions such those who listen to sad rap will directly affect their mentality, but playing happy and exciting songs has a completely opposite impact. In addition, there are some melodies that help on focus and allow us to have a peaceful time.For example, the American Educational Association survey indicated that 80% of people who listen to tune while they are working have a sense of creativity and clear mentality.

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Some Industry leaders belive that children should learn computer programming in primary school.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

In the era of technological advancement, many executives think that school children at the elementary level should be computer programming literate. Although globalization has made computer knowledge a necessity due to virtual assistance, I completely disagree with an opinion, because, kids that age should focus on other subjects, such as quantitative reasoning and communication skills. This essay will explore these options.

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Doctors, other health workers and teachers make great contribution to the society and so should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebraties. Do you agree or disagree?

It is a highly controversial statement which suggests that professionals such as doctors, teachers, and other health workers should be paid higher salaries than the entertainment and sports celebrities. I, personally agree with this view as the noble professionals make a huge difference in society and make a reasonable contributions to health and other categories to build a strong nation.

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