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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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It is expected that there will be a higher percentage of older people than young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

It is often argued that the ratio of the young generation will take a sudden downturn in the future and the older population will be dramatically high. The trend, however, shows that it will affect the holistic development of the country.

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Some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both view and give your own opinion

Recent advancements in technology make it easier to purchase a car than years ago. There are several compact cars available in the market at a reasonable price that people continue to buy increasingly. Over the past 3 decades, traffic congestion has shown a dramatic increase in major cities worldwide by automobile owners. There are several avenues that can be taken by authorities to diminish this uprising problem.

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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this i a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

Nowadays it is common that teenagers have jobs while they are attending school. In my humble opinion, I believe that this is a good idea. In fact, there are several advantages that the youngest can have if they work, such as earning their own money, understanding the value of time and developing different skills.

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Some children spend a long time each day on their smartphones

Smartphone addiction has been a common problem among children.

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Many students now have the opportunity to study in other countries. Studying abroad can some benefits to some students, but it also has a significant number of disadvantages.

An increasing number of students are deciding to study overseas and many find the option very attractive. Because studying in abroad have more opportunities for students. But it also has some disadvantages.

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childhood besity is becoming a problem throughout the developed world. Because of this, some people think that adverts for fast food, sweet sugary snakes should not be allowed in schools and colleges. what extent do you agree or dis agree with this?

Nowadays, obesity is becoming a huge threat to kids in first-world countries and due to ,this some people agreed that fast food or unhealthy snacks advertisement should be prohibited in schools and colleges. I strongly agree that sugary products and fast food shouldn't be promoted in schools. This essay will discuss it with relevant examples.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

The modern environment requires modern solutions, given the fact that our nature suffers from fossil fuels that automobile burn. That is why I completely agree with replacing regular cars with electric ones. Undoubtedly, it will help to get rid of polluted air and much less cash will be spent on fuel so people will be able to save their salary on gas.

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Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behaviour while others say the amount of time children spend watching TV influences their behavious. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

I have recently graduated from the University of Glasgow, The United Kingdom, majoring in International Accounting and Financial Management (MAcs), where the main emphasis of my studies included the financial statements of corporations and the concepts of management, which essentially includes the basic functions of business development. This alone could be a reason to consider my job application. Moreover, I am Google certified Digital Marketing Specialist, hence, this would only enhance my deep knowledge of business development and facilitating the entity on social platforms. Working on numerous projects helped me to improve my Excel, PowerPoint, and other skills involving the design and analysis of information. In addition, I am now in the process of learning Python 3 and HTML basics, which would only strengthen my analytical skills in general.

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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

ONE PART OF THE WORLDS POPULATION APPEARS TO BELIEVE THAT LEISURE ACTIVITIES OF CHILDREN MUST INCLUDE EDUCATIONAL ACTIVITIES, AND IF THEY DO NOT THEN THEY ARE A WASTE OF TIME. IN THIS ESSAY I AM GOING TO TALK ABOUT MY OPINION ABOUT THIS TOPIC AND GIVE REASONS WHY. FIRST OF ALL, PERSONALLY, I BELIEVE THAT LEISURE HOURS SHOULD DEPEND ON THE CHILDS MOOD AND SCHEDULE. SO I DO NOT AGREE NOR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT. BASICALLY MY POINT APPEARS TO BE THAT IF A CHILD HAS ALREADY BEEN RELAXING ALL DAY THEN EDUCATIONAL ACTIVITIES INCLUDING: READING, EDUCATIONAL GAMES AND EVEN PUZZLE SOLVING SHOULD BE INCLUDED IN THE CHILD LEISURE TIME. HOWEVER IF THE CHILD HAS ALREADY HAD A TIRING DAY, THEN THE LEISURE ACTIVITIES SHOULD BE CHOSEN BY THE CHILD AND BE ACTIVITIES THAT MAKES THE KID MORE ENERGIZED. THE USUAL ACTIVITIES CHOSEN BY THE CHILD INCLUDE: PLAYING VIDEO GAMES, WATCHING VIDEOS OR MOVIES AND FROM TIME TO TIME THE CHILD EVEN CHOOSES TO SLEEP. THE REASON FOR THIS STATEMENT APPEARS TO BE T...

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In many countries, people are living in a "throwaway society" where things are used for a short time and thrown away. what are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?

Climate change is a global issue, and we must work together to save our world. what is the exact meaning of this change? Climate change begins with the increasing level of CO2 and recorded in the1950s in the period of industrial revolution. Although it is destroying our environment including water, soil ,and air, we cannot overcome it. This rapid climate change can be caused not only using of sprays , and cars but also by using chemicals to grow the soil in farming. In addition, burn of fossil fuels provokes the emission of greenhouse gases - mostly carbon dioxide (CO2). These gases trap the Sun's heat and cause the planet's temperature to rise. The world is now about 1.1C warmer than it was in the 19th Century - and the amount of CO2 in the atmosphere has risen by 50%. Drought and higher temperatures kill the soil. Besides this, the tills also destroy the soil where a lot of microorganisms live but chemicals turn it into a desert areas. This process is also called desertificat...

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In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for fewyears, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss and give your opinion.

Most of the cities are equipped with better educational institutions and hospitals when compared to village areas.Mortality rates in these areas are high ,due to the lack of health centres .Also, most of the children are in the habit of discontinuing their studies after primary education,since many of the high schools and colleges are not easily reachable.Some population opine that, it should be made mandatory for teachers and doctors to work in rural settings for a specific period of time while others argue that ,it is their right to choose their place of work.This essay shall discuss the merits and demerits of the above-said matter.

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Many people today, especially in the developed world, are choosing to have fewer children, or none at all. Why is this happening, and do you think it is a good trend?

Nowadays, couples in rich countries choose to have one or no child. In this essay, I will elucidate why I strongly support this View.

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some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In this modern epoch, many issues that leads to environmental problem. Some people admit that loss of plants and animals is the main part of this issue. However, others believe that there are many aspects that cause of the problem. I believe that there are many aspects that can be problem in environment. Thus, in this essay, the explanation will be further elaborated.

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Some people believe that museums and historic sites should be open for free for children under 18 years of age. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It stands to reason that museums and historic sites play a crucial role in educating the public of every age group and preserving cultural heritage. However, there is a subject of debate that these institutions should ensure that pupils have access to valuable educational experiences, regardless of their financial situation. I couldn't agree more with the idea to offer free admission to children under 18 years of age for a museum or historic site visit.

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Some people believe that museums and historic sites should be open for free for children under 18 years of age. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

These days, public debate has been going on over whether museums and historic places should be free for youngers. I tend to believe that the benefit to visit these places without paying would be helpful for their learning for the following reasons.

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Traditional schooling is out of date, boring, and stifles a child’s natural talents, various professionals have pushed for an education revolution. Are there alternatives in the education system? Is traditional education doing more harm than good?

A huge evolution has been witnessed in the field of education with each passing day. So many professionals want to see an innovative way to conduct schooling, rather than old schooling methods which hamper children's progress. In this essay, I will shed the light on some alternative ways to conduct studies, moreover, I will elaborate on the reasoning for the traditional education defacement. First and Foremost, Online schooling is considered to be a boom in the old-fashioned way of education. This trend caught attention when Covid hit in 2020 not only it impacted the economy but also it was considered to bring an evolution in the educational field. As a result, it gave students ample time to focus on their progress at their own pace. Furthermore, the culture of punishment in school should be prohibited to some extent. Because then pupils do not enjoy going to school there is always a constant fear, which is not good for kids' mental stability. One of the main reasons for t...

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would say that parents should teach their offspring how to be good members of society, while others are of the opinion that school is the best in this regard. This essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite the practical experiences that parents give their children, school lessons can give deep insights into what it takes to be good citizens.

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some people think violent films have negative effect on people and should be banned. Other think they are just relaxation. Discuss both sides and give opnion.

The number of movies, which have violent scenes is dramatically increasing these days. Some argue that these movies have negative influences on people and are required to be banned while others believe that people can enjoy them for leisure purposes. In this essay, I will discuss both ideas although as far as I am concerned, they are for relaxation.

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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, The most vital part of human's life is internet, which assisted people in obtaining the news from anywhere and anytime in the world. Even though Internet is modern and technology based, Newspapers are traditional and genuine. I strongly agree that newspaper remains significant source of news.

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Nowadays, more teenagers want to become famous actors or singers. Why do you think this is happening ? Is this a positive or negative development ?

The development of social media makes become a famous actor or singer easier than in the past. As a result, this is the dream job of many people, and this phenomenon is caused by dream of becoming famous, and rich easily with little effort. In many humans opinions, this trend may harm for development.

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