IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 535

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people are concerned that children spend too much time on computers playing games, chatting and watching videos but all this time is actually good preparation for children, who will have to spend many hours working on computers throughout their education and their working lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to advancements in the information technology, a major shift can be observed in the educational and workplace environment. According to some people's opinion, youngsters sitting on their laptops or computers most of their times will help them to get used to it because in the future, it will be beneficial in their studies and work-based life. I agree to this upto some extent but there are some adverse effects on childrens' physical and mental development.

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In many countries, some people earn very high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country. Others believe that the government should not allow people to earn salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this modern era, many people could earn a high salary from their working place. Some people argue that this phenomenon is good for the country, while others believe that the government should take action to control people’s salaries. This essay will discuss both points of view, and I argue in favor of the former.

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The number of people who choose to get married is likely to be lower in the future than that is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Married is arguably one of the most oldest tradition that ever been to happen in the human history. In the recent years, certain of people believed that younger generations are not interested anymore to that tradition. This scenery could be seen in some developed country like England, USA, and Japan due to the plummeting of marital status. But, it is happening around the globe, or it is just in some countries?

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Many countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. Is this a positive or negative development ?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the amount of consumption of a large food from other countries in all around the world.This fact has both pros and cons .However its disadvantages cannot shadow its advantages.

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High school students are usually not good at managing money. What are the reasons? What are the solutions?

These days, high school students are rarely good at managing money. This essay will analyze several causes of the problem and suggest some possible solutions that can be carried out to improve the situation.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

People have different views about how to face our ups and downs in our lives, whether we chose to accept it or urge to find solutions to change the situation. While there are good arguments in favor of accepting the worst situation, I personally believe that we should by no means to adopt the situation, then intend to figure out solutions and finally overcome it.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The earth is the place that we called green planet is the home of many types of animal ,plant and human. That is why every problem makes our planet's environment become worse and worse. So there is nothing that will be strange when we have some debate about environmental problems some people say that the main cause of environmental problems of our time is the loss of particular plants and animals while others argue that there are more important environmental problems. To explain their opinions just follow me in the under paragraph.

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technological innovations have affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree?

People are beginning to realize that science and technology have deeply affected our daily life. I very much agree with this statement.

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It is commonly believed that nowadays the main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s world, many people believe that several factors can affect children’s growth, from media to pop culture, and interactions with relatives. While there are also another perspective that family are play a dominant role. I will discuss both views in this essay.

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Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many companies prefer to move from megacities as business centers to regional districts. The industry has thought of this ruling well so there will be more connections rather than staying in one place. However, there are more advantages to select the notion and move away from the city.

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion. In this globalization era, technology is really useful in many sectors, one of them is in education. While this offers some drawbacks, there are also several merits that will be discussed in this essay.

To begin with, there are two paramount demerits of utilizing computers in education. Firstly, the students’ vision will damage slowly. Using computers means requiring students to watch the screen for a long-time. If the students are used to learning from computers, it might harm their eyes and reduce the eyes’ functions such as the cornea, pupil, and lens. Secondly, the togetherness in the education setting will not be well-connected in the real world. The presence of technology could separate the relationship between teachers and students. It is because the teachers assume that the students can find many lessons on the Internet so they have no duty to teach directly and vice versa. Consequently, there might be no educational conversation between those two parties.

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Machines are taking over more and more jobs previously done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

In various nations around the world, there has been an increasing number of sophisticated machines that have replaced and handled human jobs. While this phenomenon offers some benefits, there are also some downsides. I personally think that advanced machines bring more drawbacks to society.

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n some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In this Perpatually transforming approach. There are a plethora of individuals who are very keen to know about History regarding their living space. A fraction of individual have so much curiosity and Different techniques to found out about particular building, monuments and house's history. In forthcoming paragraph, I have elaborated few queries regarding this issue.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Most Indonesians prefer to consume foreign films rather than local films. There are numerous reasons as to why this may be. These reasons could be used to help understand what makes foreign films more desirable.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Some individuals pick outside movies as a favourable one rather than local movies. It happens owing to many abroad producers can make wonderful films so that people worldwide can relish them. To make local citizens are interested in watching local movies, the government should furnish more funding to home-grown corporation in generating interesting films.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothing. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, a few people argue that it is fair to judge a person's culture and nature by the style of his dressing. Well, I completely disagree with this point and in the following ,paragraphs I will put forth, why I support my view.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays there are people who still prefer same-sex schools justifying their answer on the student's academic level, while there are others who say that in a mixed ,institute children could learn other knowledge than academics which will be useful for their life as adults such as sharing and caring for each other. I believe more in this one but through this essay I will have a view from both sides.

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Learning abaut the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this period of modernity, many people believe that history is a non-essential subject that has no value in this era. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this notion and my opinion will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable example.

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Exposure to international media, such as films, TV and magazines, has an impact on the local culture. What do you think of these impacts? Do you think that the advantages of these impacts outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Globalization facilitates the way of communication. As a result, people are tending towards foreign cinemas and magazines as well as satellite programs. According to the experts, this tendency affects regional culture, though I suppose, it is beneficial for skill development, language learning and also for entertainment. Here, the following paragraphs aim to highlight various advantages of foreign media in support of my argument.

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Some educationalists argue that non-exam, arts-based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft should be compulsory in the secondary school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many schools around the world, teachers are teaching The Arts to students and the curriculum of the secondary schools include this. Many people say that these art-based subjects are unnecessary and pupils have to focus on science subjects but some people disagree and they believe that teaching art can help them. This essay explains why it is beneficial for them.

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