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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some think that having ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

Humans are greedy creatures. Nothing will be enough for them. Although, it is a good quality to possess. And they want to achieve more and more heights in their life. So, being ambitious is significantly important for everyone. They can surpass their own limit and prove their worth. However, being too ambitious in life also detrimental to them. In this essay, I will delineate its importance as well as its benefits and drawbacks.

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Some people think that schools should give prizes for academic successes. Others argue that it is more important for schools to give prizes for other achievements (for example, for sports, music and behaviour). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A prize is an award form which encourages people, especially children, to gain a success. Therefore, a group of community believes that school heads should grant their students due to their academic results, while others insist on the importance of honour for other achievements on focusing to talent. Personally, I agree with the both ideas and this essay wil discuss my point of view in the following paragraphs, including some examples from my own experience.

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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individual and society.To what extent do you agree or disagree？

It is true that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society .Although it has some positive impact ,I would argue that the negative impact is outweighed.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

One of the heated issues is there are less students following science-related subjects in university. Many people think that this situation cannot cause any negative effects. However, I do believe that the lack of science students might cause severe consequences on society. In this essay, I will give my own opinion on the reasons and causes of the shortage of science students.

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Schools should stop using books for teaching to learn as they find them boring, and use films, TV, and computer instead. To what extent do you agree with this?

Nowadays, education institutions utilize various methods in teaching such as books, films, and computers. Although these modern techniques like videos and snaps are effective, I do not agree that we should replace books with it. In this essay, I will elaborate on my viewpoint with relevant examples.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In current world, a great number of products which are being produced in the food industries realm have a cosiderable amount of sugar while consumption of this processed food’s common ingredient can result in severe diseases for human beings. Whereas there is somebody who opines that as these types of products become overpriced, the number of individuals who will purchase these goods will decrease, I wholeheartedly disagree with this conviction based on some compelling reasons which will be discuss in detail.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Risk is an essential aspect of both personal and professional lives, carrying the potential for both rewards and dangers. While hasty decisions can lead to regrets and failures, embracing risks is necessary for progress and development. Though some fear losing what they have, the advantages of taking risks often outweigh the drawbacks.

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All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects?

The rate of obesity around the world has increased dramatically in recent years. This issue comes from many reasons, and it could bring about a wide range of impacts on human life as well. This essay will discuss the causes and effects of this trend.

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In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this do you think? Is it a positive or negative development?

Today businesses are extremely common kind of activity therefore most businessmen do their best for clients choose them. They use the blatant way of making their product popular - saying that products are new which, from my point of view, is quite appropriate way of advertising.

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One of the most widely debated issues nowadays is that the number of traffic congestion is growing in almost every country year by year

One of the most widely debated issues nowadays is that the number of traffic congestion is growing in almost every country year by year. Personally, I believe that this kind of problem ought to be solved urgently, and this essay will further discuss how traffic on roads occurs and solutions that can be taken in order to reduce the number of traffic at community and individual level.

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One of the most widely debated issues nowadays is that in some countries using private transportation is prohibited in particular urban centres

One of the most widely debated issues nowadays is that in some countries using private transportation is prohibited in particular urban centres. Personally, I strongly believe that this kind of action ought to be taken in most cities, as it has plenty of benefits for both citizens and environment.

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Some people think that the best way to stay fit is by joining a gym, while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of social concerns today relates to stay fit. While it is widely believed that the best way to stay fit is by joining a gym, others believe doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient.In my opinion there is a lot of lesson in gym for keeping fit for everyone

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that economy is the main factor to convert developed contry to advanced country. While it is a commonly held belief that rich nations occasionally donate money to poorer nations, but it rarely consider as a solution for poverty, so they should help them in another way rather than financial aid. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilitiesTo what extent do you agree or disagree?

While accept that this perception is somewhat justifiable, I believe that the business generates profits and they do not use public responsibilities. From my perspective, I agree with this view and this essay will address the reasons for my views.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

These days the items made of the plastic such as bottles and packaging are becoming a huge threat to our environment. These non biodegradable materials have detrimental effects on the fertility of soil and purity of air as well as water. Authorities and people should take stern steps like banning the use and manufacturing of plastic items as well as implementing the concept of reduce and reuse.

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Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle. Other believe that government should take care of it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nowadays the majority of people hold the opinion that a healthy lifestyle is the responsibility of every individual, whereas others think that the state should take care of it. I totally agree that it is our own responsibility. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the present time, individuals around the world take the view that routine is preferable to any changes. In contrast, others believe that change has a beneficial role in our lives. The objective of this essay is to discuss both of this and give my own perspective with relevant examples in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

After developments and generation change, the use of mobile applications for daily transactions has increased by leaps and bounds. Also, it has been popular in many countries around the world. However, there are some advantages and disadvantages I would like to provide in the following paragraph.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many youngers waste their time on smartphones nearly every day. Because they have no interests doing anything and also children do not any housework, if adults do not manage to them. This means that they are addicted to their phone. As far as I am concerned, this is a negative development. Because several renegers spend their much time on this technology.

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In many countries students' concentration in the classroom has decreased. What are the reasons for this? What are some possible solutions?

Nowadays, in some ,countries it has been observed that the students' focus in the schoolrooms has declined. Explaining the cause of this problem can assist in finding suitable solutions to help resolve it.

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