IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 553

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a widely held perception in many parts of the world today that nowadays more and more food and drink products contain high levels of sugar.They are very harmful to our health.They can cause many health problems.Some people think that sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage individuals to consume less sugar.I definitely disagree with this statement.There are other ways to resolve this situation.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicls will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

Nowadays, There is a serious debate on driverless cars, and these vehicles will move passengers without any driver. At the same time, there are some drawbacks associated with driverless machines. I believe the main benefits are more substantial.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicls will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

Nowadays, There is a serius debate on driverless cars and these vehicles will move passengers without any driver. While there are some drawbacks associate with driverless machines. I believe the main benefits are more substantiale.

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Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately.

One can safely assume that in every learning , the environment there is at least one student who is boisterous and has behavioural problems. Some people are of the opinion that they can have a negative impact on their colleagues. Putting them all together in a group is an effective way to create a conducive learning environment. However, apropos of the statement, I am in consummate discord with it. The bases for my opinion are psychological and academic.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation?

A large number of experts like engineers,doctors and teachers migrate from their destitute countries to have good careers in rich countries.This tendency has gained big popularity worldwide.Although brain immigration leads to several issues in poorer countries.Solutions exist to tackle this problem.

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Internet technology means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In tandem with the development of the Internet, people nowadays have several new ways to learn about foreign life. While many people assume that the Internet can replace the role of travelling to other nations, travelling in person is still obviously an important way to learn about other cultures.

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Schools should teach subjects that are needed for academic success and to pass examinations. Practical life skills such as cookery, dressmaking, and wood crafting should be taught at home, by family and friends. Do you agree or disagree?

There has been a long debate whether the educational institutions are supposed to only provide the academic subjects for preparing assessment such as math, science, and English and the life skills are only provided at home. In this essay, there will be several arguments that oppose the statement that practical life skills should be only taught at home. Firstly, practical skills like cooking, clothes-designing, art and craft are crucial skills that need to be mastered to survive in the world after school. Secondly, not my parents are able to teach practical skills at home due to their time availability or the incapability of training their children in those skills. This essay will explain those two arguments consecutively along with the conclusion.

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Some people believe anyone can make art (paint, music, poetry) while others believe people with specific ability can. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern life, these should ya talent to create an art . Many people believe that young teenagers of art such as painting, poetry,music requires special qualities, while others indeed that any individual can create one. In this essay I will discuss both sides and give my opinion.

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Some people believe that childhood is the best stage of happiness. While others believe that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary world, the best stage of happiness is experience during childhood. Meanwhile others believe that an individual can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life. In my opinion, I believe that a person can enjoy happiness regardless of what stage. It depends on the how the person defines his happiness.

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These days,a considerable amount of advertising is directed at children.Should it be banned because of the adverse effect?To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern epoch, the trend of the advertisement has increased in world. However, some opine that few ads should be restricted for children.because it has detrimental effect on hair. I discuss both sides in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Many people get little or no exercise either during the working day in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why many working people not get enough exercise? What can done about this problem?

Nowadays, most individuals are lacking of physical activities not only in weekdays but also in weekends and this will lead to various health issues such as obesity, diabetes, high blood pressure and so on. This is happening due to most of the people don’t have enough time to do exercise for themselves. And in this essay, consequences of worrying this trend will be examined .

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the free communities aim to support to pour people or young talent have to be on the mandatory base in high school programmes. I exactly a fun of such movements, first, this activities improve a mental health of person who act it and second people which get a support of course get a great chance for success in life.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people if different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Music has been with humans from long times. It has been helping us in many ways. Most of the people believes that it has very important role bringing different cultures and various ages together. While others says that it's just a form of art and totally disagree with their opposition side. In following paragraph I putting both sides argument as well as my views.

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teelevision is dangerous because it destorus family life and any sence of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Televisions throughout the years have developed and had various versions along the way. The TV most people use today have the most advanced technology, and they can watch almost anything on it with the help of the internet via wifi. In my opinion, having a big screen and not having divided hours to watch with families, causes a rift between everyone.

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People are surrounded by advertisement which has an increase effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effect of this outweigh the negative effects?

Nowadays, people live in a highly informational time where advertising influences people. I believe that advantages of advertising outweigh disadvantages since promotion is a big force in our world. This essay will examine merits and demerits of commercial and give reasonable conclusion.

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Write about the following topic: In many parts of the world, shopping is no longer a way that people buy things that they need, and it has been developed into a form of entertainment. What are the reasons for this development? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present world, shopping has become a form of enjoyment and self-satisfaction rather than a necessity. There can be several reasons for this change and this essay will explore the reasons for the changes and discuss the positive or negative development associated with it.

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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT PARENTS SHOUL ENCOURAGE THEIR CHILDREN TO TAKE PART IN ORGANIZED GROUP ACTIVITIES IN THEIR FREE TIME. OTHERS SAY THAT IT IS IMPORTANT FOR CHILDREN TO LEARN HOW TO OCCUPY THEMSELVES ON THEIR OWN. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR ON OPINION.

It is often argued that parents should have their offspring partake in organizational activities, while others might propose that children are encouraged to solve problems by themselves. This essay will discuss both these points of view and conclude a logical conclusion.

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The cost of flying as decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made overseas travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

The world has become a global village as travelling cost has reduced drastically over the last 10-20 years. There are certain benefits as well as setbacks. Although import-export among countries has improved their Income and reserves, the increasing number of accidents has become a drawback.

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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While it is sometimes believed that alien life that potentially exists on other planets should be contacted, others warn against doing this. Even though alerting aliens to our existence might be asking for trouble, I believe that this is highly unlikely. In my opinion, we should try to contact extraterrestrial forms as they can bring technologies enhancing our life.

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In many countries today young people are forced to get a job which they are not suited to or passionate about. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause?

Nowadays, in a number of nations throughout the world getting an unfavourable job has forced the youth to work which they are not well qualified for or even more passionate. In my opinion, Having these jobs unwillingly is because of income issues and unawareness of self abilities also there are troubles like the disappointment of teenagers and financial costs for employers due to this situation.

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