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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT NOW WE CAN SEE FILMS ON OUR PHONES OR TABLETS, THERE IS NO NEED TO GO TO THE CINEMA. OTHERS SAY THAT TO BE FULLY ENJOYED, FILMS NEED TO BE SEEN IN A CINEMA.

A certain number of individuals illustrate that digital devices such as smartphones and iPads are perfectly adequate for watching movies. From my perspective, the factors affecting the choice of a method to watch movies are completely subjective and my viewpoints shall be substantiated in the paragraphs below.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Studies have shown that many teenagers today are more inclined towards socializing online rather than meeting in person. There could be several reasons behind this trend. Firstly, the proliferation of smartphones and social media platforms has made it easier for teenagers to connect with a wider network of friends and acquaintances without the constraints of physical distance. With just a few taps on their screens, they can share their thoughts, pictures, and videos with anyone, anytime, anywhere. This has made socializing more convenient and accessible for them.

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- Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organistaion. Why might this be the cause? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In the present day, several people prefer to have their own job instead of working for other corporations or organizations. This might have several reasons, while choosing this approach might bear some drawbacks.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, individuals are spending a huge amount of time in their workplace and giving a lesser duration for relaxation. Whilst there are clearly some benefits to doing so, I personally believe that the drawbacks are more significant as they do not have adequate time for balancing between career and personal life.

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Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are some who believe that boxing should not exist in the present as it usually results in physical injury. I strongly disagree with the statement and the reason will be explained in the essay.

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Some people say that now is the best time in histroy to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Nowadays, some folks argue that today is the best time for living throughout in history because of technology and they can live comfortable. This essay will outline my opinion on this view and suggest another time in history for living.

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According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourist in the 1960s and 70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture. Why do you think this happen? How was tourism different in the past?

It is said that back in the day, travellers were more optimistic and tried to fulfil their trips with remarkable memories, whereas tourists in the digital world usually lock themselves in luxurious hotels and hardly come outside. The main reason for these passive actions is that the infrastructures of the resorts are too attractive and comfortable, in contrast with the tourist attractions. This also makes huge differences in the attitudes of explorers in the past compared to now.

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More and more plastic waste is polluting cities, countrysides and oceans on the world. What problems does it cause? What are the solutions?

The usage of plastics in human life has increased over the past centuries and caused pollution in land and oceans. This essay will discuss problems caused by plastic waste including blockage in sewage lines and complications in sea creatures. This essay will also suggest solutions to problems how plastic can be collected for recycling and switching to paper products.

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Today many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and business.

In present days, majority of population are using online transactions money to their acquaintances. They doing this process by harnessing digital technologies. I presume it is postive development. This way of transferring is economically friendly and far more convenient in comparison with conventional way.

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"Different types of environment pollution seem to be affecting an increasing number of people in the world. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what solutions would you suggest?"

Nowadays, the most global problem is enviromental pollution. Some individuals argue that enviromental pollution can be lead at the fact that we faced with terrible affects in the future. However, in this essay I will tell about causes and solution of this problem.

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In today’s world, people spend a lot of money on appearance because they want to look younger. Why does this happen? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, individuals lavish so much funds on their bodies just to look much younger than they really are. I believe, to some, it is a norm whereas others might have a different opinion. Nevertheless, I think such a bad lifestyle. Although, taking care of yourself is good, however, been extravagant in other to cheat nature is a waste and unwise decision.

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Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your experience.

Many individuals are of the opinion that public servants ought not to be active in service as they reach retirement years. I strongly concur with this option that, the elderly who are on the verge of completing their period of work shouldn't be encouraged to go ahead working. This is because the older they get the less productive they become and also vulnerable to occupational hazards.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is phenomenonal that more and more commercials are made to promote that the products are new one, and that is driven to satisfy the demand of customers, primarily to fulfill their sense of superiority complex. And I think the drawback of that trend overtakes the benefits. This essay will discuss about the reason for this trend and why I consider it is a negative development.

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The government should spend money in promoting sport and art in school, rather than sponsoring professional sports and art events in communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The investments devoted by the government to professional sports and art events in communities should be invested to promote sports and art in school. In my opinion, I agree that sport and art ought to be sponsored by the government as they will greatly benefit society.

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Topic: In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?

In many countries, the number of older people is rapidly increasing. While this trend brings some challenges, such as increased healthcare costs and a potential strain on pension systems, it also has several positive impacts on society.

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Buying things on the Internet such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present days, technology and Internet which are developing rapidly bring many benefits to people and one of the benefits is online shopping. In this essay, we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of buying things on the Internet.

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Many countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In contemporary society, having diverse cultures and ethnic minorities seems prevalent in many countries. This phenomenon may originate from various reasons. From my perspective, it is an incredibly positive development.

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Many parents send their children abroad to study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the phenomenon.

Nowadays, most parents prefer their students to study outside the country as a result of which they send them abroad for further academic qualification.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views arid give your own opinion.

Friendship is nothing but a confluence of souls with like-minded demeanour. Opinions differ as to whether people should prefer friends who perpetually agree with them or ought to select friends who sometimes have different opinions. I believe that a true friend is a person who both appreciates and criticises a friend when needed.

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

It is rather often that businesses have to endure the cut-throat competition for attracting customers and for increasing sales as well. In order for their products to either stand out from the crowd or to emphasis how unique their products are, companies usually use advertising as a tool attracting customers. In my opinion, marketing and branding strategy for boosting sales by means of advertising new and unique features of a product is mostly negative development.

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