IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 613

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some young people like to copy the behavior and clothes of famous people today Why might this be the case What problem can this cause

It seems argued that most guardians provide their children with everything they desire and also grant them the liberty to carry out decisions without supervising them. This essay will discuss why I believe this is not an appropriate method of upbringing as it can result in overdependence and other menaces.

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nowadys many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.what might this be the case.what could be the disadvantages of being self-empolyed.

It is undeniable that in contemporary ,society individuals are choosing to be self-employed instead of working in companies. This behaviour may be related to the necessity of having the time better scheduled by some people. ,However this initiative may cause financial problems for people who do not manage such time well.

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The job market today is very competitive and it is best to choose a career or field of study early in order to get a good job later in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A competitive market has led many people in believing that it is best for them to choose a career of study earlier to get a better opportunity later onwards in life. Though this might sound quite pragmatic, I disagree with the above statement for two reasons.

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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of these fashions?

These days nations are becoming one global village at the same time people show the same interests regarding food,clothes, and TV channels. So, I agree to a great extent that this trend has more pros than cons.

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Some people think that the (government should provide (assistance) to (all kinds of artists) including painters, musicians, and poets. However, other people think that (this is a waste of money). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that it is significant to provide any form of help to any artist and alike, such as abstract and graphic painters, music artists, and in poetry. While others would argue that funding them is just a waste of money. Personally, I believe that artists share an imperative role in the country's culture and identity. Financing them will keep their spirit to continue to showcase local arts around the world, which lead to economic prosperity.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

In this era and age, we are observing a situation where we have an overproduction of consumer products with a consequent surplus of things that remain unused and then thrown away. This vast numerosity of offers that cannot be satisfied has an awful impact on the ecosystem because we are not able to recycle and give them a second life. This essay enlightens the possible causes such as lack of responsibility and the propension of developing countries to collect the developed countries’ garbage. Moreover, in the second paragraph, will be analysed the possible solutions of the previous causes.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would say that parents should teach their offspring how to be good members of society, while others are of the opinion that school is the best in this regard. This essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite the practical experiences that parents give their children, school lessons can give deep insights into what it takes to be good citizens.

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The development of technology has resulted in more employees working from home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people residing in different nations have hard contrasting views about the effects of working at home. Improvement in technology has caused a new system called home office working. In my ,perspective this development has so much positive effect. This essay will touch upon to positiveness of online working.

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The spread of multinational companies and the increase in globalization produce positive effects for everyone. Do you agree or disagree?

Some would say that the development of international associations and the rise in globalization generate optimistic results for everyone. This essay also agrees with this initiative because it increases employment and is also beneficial for the nation’s economy through import/export.

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Due to increase use of aeroplane, air pollution is increasing more and more airports are constructed. Some people say that government should reduce air traffic by taxing it heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

In the last decade, air travel became more popular, and it is a short way to reach their home countries. Due to this fact that there are many airports are building in different locations by authorities. From my point of view that gives a negative impact on environment. I disagree that government needs to tax a high amount to pay airlines for reducing the problem. I have discussed above both points in the below paragraphs and the conclusion is deduced.

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Even after the Covid-19 pandemic is over, some companies are thinking of using a hybrid approach when it comes to working from home and on-site. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working on-site?

The past 3 years of Covid-19 have completely changed the way we used to work in our organizations. As the situation is getting better, companies are moving towards a hybrid model of working from office. While proponents of remote working argue that going to office is a sheer waste of time, there are also some underlying benefits, such as team bonding and better collaboration on work. In this essay I will discuss both merits and demerits of working on-site.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

Nowadays more and more professionals that play a key role in the social stability and development, including in the spheres of education and medicine prefer to find a job in more developed countries that provide more opportunities. Evidently, it creates a deficiency and lack of professional help in the above-mentioned spheres. This essay will address the problems such situation causes and conceivable solutions to redress it.

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Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the last decades, there have been immense advanes in advertisement business and the most of them have attempt to get children's attention. It is blieved by some that it has influenced negatively to them by advertisement companies. However, each coin has two sides. In this essey, I will explain why it should not be let them announce products in front of them.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Is it beneficial to step out of your comfort zone and try something utterly new? This has been a hot dispute among an avalanche of scientists. Some of them strongly opine that undertaking new challenges is pivotal for anyone whether privately or in the workplace. I personally believe that the perks of this action outweigh its downsides due to a combination of factors.

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Many cannot speak or present well in public. Some people think that it is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in society, most people are not able to introduce themselves and give a speech properly. It is believed by some that is so imperative to present in the community and this ability should improve at school time. However, in my opinion, each coin has both sides. In this essay, I will explain why it is important to talk about any topic in public and when people should begin to build their speeches.

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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disatvantages?

Having one government for all the world is better than having one for each country. The huge advantage of this idea is that there would not be many problems because of the disagreements between the countries governments. Overall, in this essay I will be mentioning the advantages and disadvantages of having a singular government for all the earth.

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Some think that reading stories from book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

First of all, I would like to tell about something which is the vital thing in our life. Children will represent our future what i mean is we have to consider the education of children and guide them. I totally agree with this statement.

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Some people believe that young people bring more profits to a company. Others say that older people actually bring more profits. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Opionions of society is divided between whether a fresher gives high performance or an experienced one in a company. Both views have their own reasons which are discussed at a length in following paragraph. I will give my opinion after explaining both point of views.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In this contemporary world, globalization has become a common phenomenon, and more people start to learn a foreign language. Some people believe the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work abroad, while others oppose it. In my opinion, Although going abroad for some purposes is the main reason to study a foreign language, there are some other reasons worth learning it.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different views about the solution to prevent traffic accident. Some people believe that the government should increase the minimum legal age for driving vehicles. I am of the opinion that it is not a best way. In this essay, I will discuss reasons and examples of my view.

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