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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Robots‌ ‌can‌ ‌free‌ ‌people‌ ‌from‌ ‌difficult‌ ‌and‌ ‌dangerous‌ ‌work.‌ ‌However,‌ ‌some‌ ‌people‌ ‌are‌ ‌worried‌ ‌about‌ ‌the‌ ‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌ ‌robots‌ ‌may‌ ‌create. ‌‌Discuss‌ ‌the‌ ‌benefits‌‌ ‌of‌ ‌using‌ ‌robots‌ ‌and‌ ‌the‌ ‌‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌‌ ‌from‌ ‌it.‌ ‌

The importance of robots is increasing day by day when they complete more complex tasks in a short span of time. However, there are certain disadvantages to using robots as they lack decision-making skills. This essay will discuss both views.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Having a gap year after graduation has become common nowadays. Although this is advantageous owing to the fact that graduates become more prepared for the future, there are also drawbacks that should be taken into consideration.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reason for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, people are focusing on their health and body, therefore people always trying to maintain their daily health habits, there are a lot of ways to do that, people can play some sports or do exercise or some people hire a personal fitness trainer, In this ,essay we can discuss, what are the positive or negative impact of hiring a personal trainer.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

In modern era,one of most controversial issues around the worls is technology.And many items that related to that.Technology is double-edged sword.it has a numerous negative or positive points on peoples life.In my view,advancement in technology has their own advantages and disadvantages.In this essay I will explain more about topic with some examples.

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Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons of long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer?

Nowadays there are many couples who live far away from each other and it is becoming tough to preserve a long-distance relationship. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons for long-distance relationships and suggest some things done to make a better relationship.

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In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. do this development have more adavantages or disadvantages?

In recent times, it is most controversially trending that the majority of jobs at various places will be accomplished by a number of robots than humans this essay will discuss do this development have more advantages or disadvantages, and will conclude at the end.

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Parents give more freedom to their children nowadays than they do in the past. Is this a negative or positive development. Answer with reasons and personal experiences......

In the present year, families give more freedom to their kids than in recent years. In my opinion, I strongly believe that in the modern world children who have more freedom will be successful more than unfree children. This essay will highlight the benefit of student freedom.

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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

People have different views on how to achieve success some believe that we should take risks for being successful, while others think measured planning is the key to success. The following essay will discuss both views in detail.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather then buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Many people, in a few countries, desire to stay in their homes on rent instead of buying them. This discourse ahead will state the relevant pros and cons linked with this trend.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believes the money should be spent on improving exisitng public transport.

Although some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on constructing new railway lines for fast trains between cities, others strongly argue that money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

It has been a disturbing condition to the general public that there are more crimes recently than in the past. I identify a number of factors which contribute to this phenomenon, and we can propose several ways to improve the safety condition of the society.

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Some people prefer hobbies that require technology, while some people hobbies does not require technology. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

People have different ideas and tastes about their hobbies,some tend to the amusement that new devices or modernity created for them while others prefer activities that do not depend on technology. Both types of activities have their advantages and disadvantages, l believe that nowadays we need both types of activities.

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Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace. With today’s technology this process is happening at a greater rate. Technology is increasingly responsible for unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, the unemployment rate has been increased drastically when compare to the olden age because most of companies dependent on highly advanced machineries for work. Presently, only around 50% of duties were carried out by human beings. The below paragraphs provided with examples how technology impacted todays generation.

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Computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that IT is playing an ever-increasing role in schools and universities and one day teachers will be obsolete. It disagrees that technology will one day replace educators. This essay will discuss, firstly the limitations of technology in education and secondly, the essential role teachers play in maintaining discipline in the classroom, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days poverty has not declined in the developing nations, although developed countries support them financially. However, many individuals argue that different kinds of economic help should be provided to the poor countries by the advantaged ones. Personally, I believe that rich countries could supply healthy-water for them and rebuild their residential areas instead.

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The internet has as many disadvantages as it does advantages. To what extent do you agree whit this statement?

In the cutting-edge era, society of people depends on technology for professional work, academics, and entertainment. The Internet has numerous drawbacks and some benefits. I largely agree with this notion due to some reasons which I discuss in upcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays a large amount of advertising aimed at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that advertisement which is considered detrimental to target minor audience should be stopped. I strongly disagree with this statement because it has positive impacts on children and will generate more bankruptcy if it is banned.

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Now people performed everyday task such as banking shopping and business transactions without meeting one another. What possible effects in individuals and society. what are socialized drawbacks on this concept against benefit. Give reason for answer.

Nowadays, people tend to perform everyday tasks like banking shopping and business transaction online with no need to do it individually. Technology plays a major role in affecting individuals and society as it has advantages and disadvantages. Not to mention that doing these tasks do not take a lot of time unlike the past. As a matter of fact, it also makes people lose the ability to interact with each other.

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Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film. Do you think this trend is positive or negative?

Although many years ago, movies were only made by big organizations, people could create films by themselves at the moment. While there are some drawbacks of a such trend nowadays, I think it has more beneficial sides that can facilitate the making-film industry in today’s world.

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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of media. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.

Media is one of the trending concept ongoing all over the world, wide variety of information can be collect through different modes. Although, from every corner of country huge social data circulates at faster rate by means of Internet connection. Advantage and disadvantage of media has provided in upcoming paragraphs.

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