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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Young are encouraged to take a year off after finishing high school in before the university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

Many young people are suggested to work or go on a journey a year before the commencement of University. The recommendation for this essay will be that the experience of gaining and earning money for tuition fees or extra expenses are great benefits, however, decreasing emotion on studies and delaying careers are dominant disadvantages.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In last few years, medical treatment has surely become a sort of luxury, rather than a necessity. Many people may hold on to the view that paying money up front provides faster treatment. However, I belong to the group of individuals who concur with the idea that having free health service is more beneficial. This essay will articulate my opinion and agreement regarding the benefits of free medical treatments.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern scenario, people have to pay entrance charges for many public places. Even a number of museums are charged, while rest are free of charge. It is agreed that benifits surpass the drawbacks of applying tickets for entering to museums since, conjestion would be reduces as well as money could be allocated for renovations.

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Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, teenagers tend to spend the majority of their leisure time in huge shopping complexes. Some people hold the view that this trend is creating a negative impact on both, the population and the community, I firmly agree with this notion because of the following arguments.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the coming years, automatic vehicles will be operated technically. Passengers will be the only people who will be using these cars, buses and trucks . Unemployment issues which arises from this phenomenon cannot be compared to the improving in the adequacy of time and safety of passengers. This is what my essay shall be discussing.

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2. Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The discussion of who might give the education to juveniles regarding the consequences of crimes has always been in the limelight. It is proposed by some that the reformed ex-prisoners can best serve this role. However, I cannot agree with this proposal because reformed ex-offenders may not have specific communication skills to teach teenagers, and instead, police officers are more suitable for this role.

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Today the high sales of popular consumer products reflect the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The increment of selling products is absolutely contributed by effective and popular advertisement. This indicates that the more famous it is, the higher possibility of profit will be. Nevertheless, Company will eager to create more and more interesting advertisements. On the other side, people who purchase things could be persuaded by those short videos on television, rather than their needs. Therefore, this essay will elaborate on the relationship between increased sales and people's behaviour in buying something.

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Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Do you agree or disagree

With the advancement of technology, few people believe that television has restricted communication among companions and parents. I partially disagree with these statements due to several objectives which will be discussed in impending paragraphs.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve search situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the recent period, the majority of individuals have been discussing satisfaction. A bulk of people think that. Individuals should be satisfied with their status to safely live, , The other side of habitants rejects this notion, due, they think a person must strive to change his condition trend best. It is safe to assume that, the individuals must endure promoting their situation for two

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Government should provide benefits to the log time job seekers. Is it good or bad. Given reasons and examples

It is a crucial thing that everyone should be employed, as the governments provide special privileges for the job seekers by giving them unemployment funds. This essay will demonstrate the reasons along with examples whether it is beneficial that long-time job seekers should get government benefits or not.

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Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while others believe that children learn teamwork. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sports are commonplaces among adolescents and children, there are classes at school or facilities at the public to encourage children to do sports. While people have diverge opinions on sporting can encourage children to compete or to work as a team, I believe both of these benefit can be learnt by children through sporting.

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Some say that at all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, a lot of time is spent learning the facts and not enough time is devoted to practical skills. Do you agree or not?

Generally many people argue that in the hull educational journey : starting from primary school and finishing with universities, there is much time spent on learning facts while there is a bit of time devoted to daily life skills. Personally speaking , I strongly agree with this argument for several reasons .In this essay I am going to outline why I strongly agree that interpersonal skills are undermined all along the educational journey .

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Recently, a growing number of multinational companies have been established in developing countries. Thanks to these companies, many workers in developing countries can get more opportunities to get jobs. However, in contrast to positive effects, there are considerable problems in terms of heavy workloads and lack of welfare for employees by multinational companies.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Technology has always been the key driver of human development, but especially in the last years it has crucially impacted our lives in many different aspects. The benefits of cutting-edge technologies in any field such as communication, science, or for industrial purposes have fueled the most recent changes in the workplace and schools.

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Cycling is a healthier and more environmentally friendly form of transport. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular. What are the reasons of this trend? What can be done to make cycling more popular?

Indeed, using cycle for commuting has obvious advantages not only for the environment but also for the population. However, the trend of cycling has become decreasing nowadays. This essay will discuss potential reasons for this declining trend and also suggest some simple measures to popularize this activity again.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give opinions

Opinions are divided on whether people should accept the hardships in life or whether people have to find a way out of such situations and strive for better living conditions. Though I understand the reasons for which people tend to move towards acceptance of their difficulties, I am still in favor of the latter point of view.

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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some believe that people recently have no interest in sustaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still significant to people that we protect a traditional way of life. This essay discusses both ideas and gives a conclusion.

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Some people think that coins and paper money will vanish in a few years. We will only use plastic cards or some other form of electronic currency. Is this a positive or negative development.

Advances in modern technology have allowed us to change traditional trading systems over the course of time. some believe that physical money will disappear in the upcoming era and other forms of payment mode will be used in everyday life. I strongly opine on this trend as, not all individuals are well versed with electronic transactions and also, coins and paper are environment-friendly.

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Do you think that advertising encourages people to buy things that they don’t want?

Advertisements these days have taken various forms. We see new, innovative as well as creative advertisements for products and services in different medias. However, does advertisement encourage people to buy things that they do not want? While some may agree that it does, I believe it does not.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays, the travelling gained popularity more than ever before. Also, there are many people who travel to places where the situation is tough like Sahara desert and the Antractic. Going to these places has several postive outcomes in addition to drawbacks.

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