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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in city while other believe a bicycle is a better way. Discuss both both view and give your opinion.

Throughout the last century, the number of people using cars in metropolitan areas as their first choice of transportation has been increasing, ,however nowadays people are starting to stir up a new discussion arguing that bicycles are a better choice for everyone. In my opinion, both ways of going around have their perks and cons and we should consider a means of balancing them.

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Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the tactic to handle with lawbreakers. Some hold a strong view that imprisoning perpetrators is the best approach to tackle them. Meanwhile, the opposite makes a statement that schooling and employment coaching will help criminals become a better person. While the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the latter.

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Some colleges encourage students to create businesses while they are still in school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a common belief that students should begin bussiness while they are studying. However, there is a persuasive argument that starting business brings more disadvantage than its benefits, because of time requirement for the job, strees and hard to have good performance at the college.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best media to learn and get information from while others believe that the internet is a better source. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, everyone easily learns and gets information in many ways. Some argue that newspapers are the best choice to learn and get information while others believe that the internet is much better than that. In this essay, I will look at both views and give my opinion.

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Nowadays many adults have full time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent on work is very high. Some of them are under high stress and ignore their other. What are cause and effects?

Nowadays,stress has become a crucial issue in many countries around the world.It leads to physical and mental health problems.This essay is a detailed discussion of the causes and effects of stress.

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides.

The number of commited crimes is increasing every year. Some would argue, that the most clear way is to use death penalty as a deterrent, while others say that other measures will be needed. While, killing criminals is the quick and easy solution, my perspective is that the punishment must be reliant on offence was commited.

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The key solution for the environmental issues is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an inevitable truth that the environmental issues has become a controversial talk of contemporary era. Since today has constructed diverse industrial companies and also lifestyles, conditions cities, transportation... has changed, consequently some believe that the key solution for this problem is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future people. The main agenda of the impending composition is to elaborate my certitude with befitting examples.

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Some people think that geting a degree frome university is the best way for guarantee a good job,others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discusse both side and give your opinion.

Some people believe that getting a degree from a university can be the best way to get a job, and another group believes that experience is the main factor to get a job and you should spend time to get experience without wasting time in the university; Instead of getting a degree, they entered the job market directly.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As a member of modern society, I am cognizant of the fact that there are a plethora of options available to individuals, yet simultaneously, I also believe that there are a multitude of limitations that restrict our choices. On the one hand, globalization and advancements in technology have brought about a plethora of options for people to choose from. For example, the proliferation of manufacturers in various industries has led to a vast array of options when it comes to purchasing goods such as clothing or food. Additionally, the decreased cost of air travel has made it possible for people to travel to nearly any location they desire. In the past, vacation options were limited due to the lack of efficient transportation, however, in present times, one can fly to London and return in a single day. Furthermore, throughout one's lifetime, there are more options available, from the type of educational institution to attend to the company for which to work for. The availability of opti...

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Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge . To what extent is this a positive or a negative development ?

In this contemporary era, everything is easy beacause of new technologies such as the Internet, and, artificial intelligence. It is also provided music and books which are copyrighted and pupils download free music from websites . In my, opinion this notion has some advantages and disadvantages. In this, essay we will further elaborate on the positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Many young people nowadays are imitating celebrities in sports and movies. In your opinion, is this good or bad? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.

In recent times, all the artist in the world is role model for all generation especially for the youth. I believe it have good impacts for the teenagers in their social life.

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Many family moves to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the world is interconnected more than ever before. As a result, more and more people are migrating to another country as a means to get a better life condition. Although this might be true, some people think the children would find it difficult to adjust their life in their new country. I will explore the different arguments from both views and draw conclusion from there.

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17/08/13: Do the advantages of the government spending their money on college and university fees for students outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that the tuition fees of pupils are supported financially by the legal bodies in several parts of the globe. From my perspective, this practice is valid to a certain extent, thanks to the equality of education opportunities and benefits for society. The following paragraphs would shed light on my viewpoint.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

This is certainly true that everyone experiences hardships and challenges in his life at any stage. Most people believe that it is essential to embrace any bad situation by considering it as an opportunity. Whereas, others contradict this by saying that we should make more efforts to improve the current situation. In my opinion, we should look for betterment even in the worst conditions.

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Many young people nowadays are imitating celebrities in sports and movies. In your opinion, is this good or bad? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.

The scheme of allocating money is hotly-debated topic in modern life. Several societies have notion that keeping the budget in a bank is preferable, meanwhile, the other groups say that we should use it every moment when we have it in our wallet. This essay shall elucidate those paradigms and peddle up the reason why the first contention is more valuable than the last option.

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:Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time managment. Do you agree or disagree?

Time management is an important skill to teach children from a very young age. However, I do not agree that the freedom to choose when to study and when to engage in leisure activities should be practised. This essay will discuss the reasons for the above statement.

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Today’s teenagers struggle with many social issues. Some people think that is because their parents are spending more time at work than at home. Do you agree or disagree?

Mental health is an underrated issue in people's life, normally this issue is not taken into consideration but is as important as any other personal problem. Nowadays, with the exponential grow of social media applications and the use of this, the need for social skills has underdevolep among teenegers, thus, more teenagers struggle with social issues, affecting their mental health which might lead to possible traumas. Therefore it is argued that social isuses in teenagers might be an effect of absent parents while other say it does not have a correlation.

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Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, a number of people think that, History is one of the most significant educational subject, while others believe that, at the moment, subject related with Science and Technology are more vital than History. In my opinion, in modern life subjects such as Science and Technology are more important since they are improve our lifes. This essay will examine both views.

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It is beneficial for people to spend some time living in a country where they must speak a foreign language. Do you agree or disagree?

Language is a crucial tool for people for communication. Pupils get a chance to learn a second or even a third language at school besides the native one. These days, there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether it is beneficial to live abroad where they must speak a foreign language; in this essay, I will explain why I agree with this statement.

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Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in the city, while others think that bicycle is better. Discuss both points and give your opinion.

It is often argued that cars are the better mode of travel because it provides multifarious benefits to human while travelling,however few ponder that the bicycle is the most effective way of travelling owing to its indigenous benefits to human health. This essay will discuss both given notions as far as I am concerned I am in the favour of former notion.

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