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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Happiness is a main aspect and goal of anyone’s life, living just a way of life shouldn’t be the lifestyle of any human being. Everyone should be feeling happiness the way of lifestyle they choose over the other things. Then only we will be able to justify for our life. In order to achieve this few argue that having more money would lead to a happy life compare to other things. Contrasting, to this others believe it’s not only the money which makes people happy there are other things that could bring joyful in one’s life like it could be a living creature or non-living creature or it could also be a beautiful nature.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Nowadays, when everything is losing its meaning, we need to realize the importance of language. Some people think that studying English is more necessary than the learning local ones. Other individuals claim that there is too much risk of dying out of these languages. I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? Give reasons for your answer and include any r own knowledge or experience. evant examples from your

It has been universally acknowledged that the problem of obesity is escalating at an alarming rate in the current scenario. This problem has been a depressing magnitude. Although a plethora of reasons are there yet some sensible solution is there yet some sensible solutions are also available to curb this grave concern.

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Technological developments leads to lots of environmental issues. Some people think a simple life style can preserve the environment. While others argue technology itself can solve it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that modern technology resulted in various environmental problems. There are some concerns about how massive this trend affects on the environment , indeed to suggest simplifying lifestyle will save it . This essay will argue , however,that technology itself can soon tackle this problem in terms of advancing success.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are some who think that people on their childhood ought to require to do community work without profit on their free time. This could bring advantages to teenagers also for the community. I believe and agree that having young people in the work force at early stage it could bring many advantages for them and the community.

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In some parts of the world people try to find out one's own family history. Why do people do this? Do you think it is a positive or negative? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Certain people in worldwide area consider to identify their own family's history. My reason why some individuals tend to take an action on this journey and I think this could bring about optimistic results to human race will be elaborated in this essay.

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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people assert that governments should raise the tax on fast food because eating such food too much leads to health problems. There are two reasons to support this idea: firstly, this action will discourage people to have unhealthy food and secondly, governments will be able to allocate amounts of money to health care.

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A new generation of entrepreneurs believe that privately funded space tourism will be the next exciting development in space exploration. How true do you think this is? How would space tourism affect space exploration as we know it today? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Although it may still sound like a scene from a science fiction film, reality is that commercial space tourism already exists. In fact, many experts believe we might be standing at the brink of a new trend which will send more and more tourists into space. If this turns out to be true, it is essential to consider to what extent this development may influence space exploration.

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As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that drivers should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Undoubtedly, the increasing count of private vehicles has risen the safety concern regarding the roadways systems. It has been argued among individuals whether authorities or car owners ought to be responsible for bearing the expense of road development. This essay will not only discuss both sides of the argument but my viewpoint will also be highlighted while concluding it.

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With the increase of digital media available online, the role of the library has become obsolete. Universities should only procure digital media rather than updating textbooks. Please discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this position.

Nowadays, the importance of online digital media has become more significant than before. Some scholars say that universities should only procure digital media or resources instead of updating library textbooks while some educators believe that updating the textbooks in the library is still important for all universities. This essay will elaborate on both the positive and negative effects of procuring digital media and updating textbooks and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Should Government funding be spent on education and health care systems? What is your opinion?

Every government has a budget for the whole year the state decides its priorities and spends on different sectors. Government should spend a good chunk of its funds serving the basic needs of the public like education and health care.In my ,opinion Government funding must be spent on education and health care this is crucial for the human development of the state.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, some scholars have to work while studying due to various causes. This situation results in increasing pressure on them and a lack of time for university tasks. This essay will examine the main causes of the decision to nine-to-five while studying the possible solutions to this problem.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.

I personally believe that before making an important decision it is important to speak with people who can give us advice. In this way, we can see another point of view, receive support and speak with those who have more experience.

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Some people believe that teenager should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can be benefit teenagers and the community as well.

Teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. Doing community service can be character-building for a teenager. The community will also deal greatly from unpaid work.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information , such as their hobbies and interests , and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful . Others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opnion

Occasionally employers are asking applicants for private information, for example, their hobbies and interest areas. Sometimes they are also asking about relationship status. One part of the population is saying that these questions may be suitable and beneficial. In this ,essay I will discuss the pros and cons of the topic.

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Global warming is one of the various climatic issues. Discuss the possible causes and offer measures to control the damage caused.

Over the few decades, there is dramatically changed in the environment due to which earth is damaged day by day more.In this essay I would highlight various reasons of causes and their outcomes.

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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.

There is no denying that discipline plays a pivotal role in the shaping the future of the community. It has been a topic of debate for many years with some arguing that culture gives opportunities only for individuals to find jobs with high salaries, while others argue that it gives multiple advantages to the whole civilization. In this , an essay I will consider both sides.

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```Many people think that the world should speak one language, others argue that countries should have its own languages. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some people argue that using a universal language is better than maintaining the nation's unique dialect. It is discussed that one language makes communication easy. In contrast, the uniqueness of country's language preserves their culture. I believe that using a universal language is most important in effective communication.

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Students at schools and the university learn far more from lessons with the teachers than from other source (such as internet and television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Knowledge is the one of most important things to make the best quality of life. Some people argue that learning something is dependent on providing resources. I think, it depends on the situation, in school is more convenient for the student to get learning from their teacher, however the older student who is more confident can get information everywhere.

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As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibilty towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say money can not buy happiness but with , the money you can buy many things that make you happy.Businesses should not just look to only make money but serve society in any way.I think is important that business should help society to evolve and grow instead of just creating wealth.

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