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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world today suffers from consequential health disorders such as obesity, resulting from junk food and leading sedentary lifestyles. Across the globe, the masses are facing serious health concerns due to their bad dietary habits. Thus, to prevent further loss of health, authorities must levy tariffs on food distributors. I am a strong advocate of given affirmation and my point of view is elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?”

In the contemporary epoch, there is an irrefutable debate about whether museums should charge entrance fees. While there are advantages and disadvantages associated with this topic, my perspective is the positive aspects take precedence over the drawbacks.

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Task 2- this will be the end of our discussion on "negative or positive development essays. More and more people today are becoming overly dependent on the internet and phones. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, individuals are increasingly becoming addicted to the internet and the use of mobile devices. However, in my opinion, it is a negative development and i will explore my reasons.

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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Many people all over the world find curious to compare different epochs and to choose the best of it for life. Modern world is often calls as the most pleasant time for life. I totally agree with this point view, despite the fact, that 19th century also seems me very attractive for life.

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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this ? what could be done to solve this problem ?

Nowadays, a certain section of the world of citizens does not reuse materials such as bottles or newspapers. In this , context I will elaborate on the rationale behind this statement and provide solutions to overcome these issues, which I believe can change the world.

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How people are benefiting from VPN? What are the consequences of using VPN in terms of security and data protection? Do you think the government should bring strict law to control of usage of VPN?

By advancement of technology some services have been provided network users which VPN is one of them. VPN stands for Virtual Private Network, in this essay some beneficial functions of VPN and securities which come from using the VPN will be discussed; Also, whether the government should regulate the strict legislation to control of using of VPN or not will be summarized as follows.

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teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think it is advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Educators believe that there are benefits that school teenagers can gain from exchanging. In this , essay I will discuss both views and express my own view.

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Some people think that countries should limit the amount of food that they import and mainly eat products from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that the consumption of local food products is more beneficial for the economy. In addition, importing foodstuff overburdens the government's balance. In my opinion, countries should mainly depend on their production of vegetables and fruits.

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Research shows that some activities are good for health and othe are bad.Desapite knowing that millions of people engange in unhealthy activites. What is the cause of this? What can be done?

Investigation and analysis of activities , that affect the health of people in both positive and negative ways, are made. However , people keep their involvement in such activities , even if they are aware of the detrimental effects it has on their lives.This essay will explain two main reasons , first , a company of bad people and second , addiction to harmful activities are explained. In addition to that , the essay explains the actions that could be taken to prevent or lower the rate of people engaging in negative activities , too.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the modern scenario the differences between the nations in the globe have shrinked since their duwellers have equal opportunities to purchas similar items from where they live. In this essay , I will discuss the pros and cons about this trend and explain why I belive this development is beneficial.

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Chloe warming is one of the biggest threat to our environment What causes global warming what solutions are these to this problem

Nowadays, in this modern era the Earth has been warming day by day there are many reasons of it. Chlo warming is aslo threat to our nature. I completely agree with this phenomenon that I will discuss some causes and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.

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In many developing countries,there is a problem with declining qaulity of air and water from both indsutry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this.

Construction and Industries now have become the major part of developed country. Countries are trying to open various industries in their neighborhood so that their country can become more developed. But with this rise in industry and construction over the decade have caused the reduce in the air and water quality of the country.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing? Do you agree or disagree?

In one day, all shops in towns and cities will be closing due to the increase in online shopping. I disagree with this statement because certain products are best purchased at shops and many people shop to socialize.

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Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A plethora of folks believe that individual’s achievements are mostly related to the fortune. I am firmly opposite to that statement due to two main considerations, such as hard work and skills. This essay will shed light on both reasons to get better apprehending.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

All around the world, we hear various music genres. For some people, music can be a means of leisure, entertainment, and even a tool to help individuals express their feelings. Although international music is very popular nowadays, I think it is very important that the traditional music of a country should not be forgotten.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent times, a number of people are in a tendency to use medicines without a proper diagnosis by a medical practitioner. In my opinion, I believe this is a negative development as it will lead to various kinds of negative impacts on a person's life. The following paragraphs of this essay will analyze two factors which will contribute to my opinion.

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Inspite of advances made in agriculture still some people remain hungry.what are the causes of this

Agriculture plays vital role in providing food to the glob, inspite of the advancement in agriculture many people in the world are still hungry. There are many reasons behind this problem.Here in this essay, I will discuss the reasons of insufficient availability of food and their solutions.

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Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Leadership quality is the important factor in society to be a successful person. There is group which believe that leading ability is the talent that exist in a person by birth, on the other hand there is another segment of people who are confident that leadership quality can be adopt by hard work, skills and passion. However in my opinion leadership quality could be by birth and could be developed by hard work.

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The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars famines, accidents and crime. Why do you think that is? Do you think the news should be a balance of both good and bad news?

A lot of journalists have provided more negative news rather than positive ones these days. It seems to me that the reason why they take the consideration is to attract a higher number of viewers. However, I totally disagree with the phenomenon because I believe that they should be professional by showing equal facts both good and bad.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this, and how could it be tackled?

Obesity is not a relatively new phenomenon, but it has grown among people in the new century. ,Obviously this phenomenon is rooted in many factors, whose investigation can help us to adopt the right solution.

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