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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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A huge amount of money goes towards children's education. In some countries, the government pays some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Education is not only becoming more and more important but it is also getting costlier. A significant amount is paid for the education of the children. It is seen that in many countries, the administration pays little or the full amount of education costs. The advantages of doing so will definitely outweigh the disadvantages which will be discussed thoroughly in the following paragraphs.

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some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time .This can benefit teenageers and the community as well .to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often said that getting teenagers involved in volunteer work after school is beneficial for both teenagers and the community. In my view, I mostly agree with this opinion for a number of reasons.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Having a home is becoming more popular in many parts of the world these days. This essay will examine the causes related to this tendency.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enoung

There was an old saying if you really want something hard enough the result might not be far off. These day children have been told they could archive everything the most important reason is they try hard enough. If the question about dream is address it will be challenging for us to reach our decision on this controversial issue. The advantage is out weight the disadvantage and the reason to support argument will be cover on this topic

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would say that parents should teach their offspring how to be good members of society, while others are of the opinion that school is the best in this regard. This essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite the practical experiences that parents give their children, school lessons can give deep insights into what it takes to be good citizens.

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Some colleges encourage students to create businesses while they are still in school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a common belief that learners should begin a business while they are studying. However, there is a persuasive argument that starting a career brings more disadvantages than its benefits, due to the time required for the job, stress, and hard to have good performance at college.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

In modern society, some folks argue that letting children take their own choices on day-to-day needs ( such as food,clothes and entertainment) will lead to a society full of selfish individuals while other people consider that it is vital to take the decisions of children themselves. In my honest opinion, I believe that children should be able to make their own decision on everyday matters while understanding the consequences.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this.

Buying homes is considered a high expense so many are concerned in finding the past history of their residences. In this essay, I will discuss how people exercise their minds researching their own home and how it could be beneficial in adding more value to the house or in the deciding the suitability of the architectural and neighbourhood influence.

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Some people think that the media have to right to publish detail of people’s view, while other thinks it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

In the era of Digital media,everyone wants to know about the real life of a public figure.In order to,keep their channel rating higher the representative of media agencies always try to invade the personal space of well-known people.However,it is argued by the general public that permission should be granted to media agencies to reveal the personal details of popular stars.Meanwhile, other groups of people think that this trend needs to be hampered.

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Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?

In the previous decades, as the stone and the middle ages, people used to do more physical activity since the fact that they had no innovations as nowadays which allow working and doing other convenient things from the house. However, today individuals can use technologies’ benefits and even not walking out of the room. I am a strong advocate of the opinion that this lifestyle totally destroys people’s state and leads to hazardous consequences. In this essay I will highlight the issues with which the population face due to this.

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Most of all businesses will get gregarious duties inclusive of earning money. I am completely in agreement with this view of point.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Considering the rate of people immigrating to other countries than their own, the importance of knowing the spoken vocabulary of the host community becomes more prominent. I strongly agree with the statement that the inability to communicate in a new language will cause both social and professional burdens.

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Nowadays, more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Is this is a positive or negative development?

The staggering role of modern technologies is vital.In today's world, our daily housework and duties are accomplished by robots.I strongly believe it is a positive improvement.Analysing both generating more time for studies and eliminating dangerous functions for humans will show this.

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In some countries, the number of people who visits art gallery is declining. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem?

In the earlier days, visiting art galleries and museums was considered a day-out picnic. Nonetheless, today it is evident that some countries still continue to enjoy the fragrance of art, while, some other countries are witnessing footfall in their visitors. Today, I will discuss the reasons for the depleting of the number of visitors and a few ways to overcome this problem.

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Some feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the genders ought to be separated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In the current world, where gender equality is now being one of the highest priorities in many countries. Because of that reason, most schools nowadays are mixed with both genders learning in the same class. However, there are still some others who consider male and female ought to be separated; and in my opinion, I do not agree with the second view.

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It is important for people to take riske, both in their professional lives and their personal lifes. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Firstly, it is common sense that big risks are always associated with substantial benefits. Therefore, people should embrace adventure if they want more. But I do disagree with such logic because they simply ignore the reason and the whole movement behind it.

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While some feel that GMOs are harmless and are essential to providing the world with an ample supply of food, others argue that GMOs are not safe because they pose serious health risks. Discuss.

Today, maintaining good health is very essential. Half of the people mention GMOs are safe and do not bring any harm to consumers. While the other half feel GMOs invite a lot of health-related issues making GMOs dangerous to consume. GMOs have brought a lot of benefits to society and to farmers in several ways. However, we have to analyse both sides of the coin to understand it better.

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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years other think students benefits more from having new teachers each years which do you think is better? Give specific reason to support your opinion.

Education is the most vital part of our lives. Few parents remark having the same teacher for a couple of years is better for the students while others argue having different teachers is good. According to my opinion having the same teacher for a few years can attract a lot of benefits. I will discuss the pros and cons of the same further.

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should human adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Discuss both views and give your point.

Nowadays, technology becomes needs in human life. Some people say that technology could make human to be more intelligent, but others say the opposite, that technology brings human's intellectual to be more weak. In this essay I will give explanation about two views and give examples.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that a loss of biodiversity is the most pressing enviromental issue. While others argue that there are more serious problems than that. In this essay, I will argue that extinction of certain plants and animals can have an impact on our well-being, but more crucially that the danger of global warming is much more important.

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