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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Nowadays the way many people interact with eachother has changed because of technology. In what ways has teechnology affected the type of relationships people make? has this become a positive or negative development?

In this technological epoch, people have a good bond with each other because of the internet facilities. The majority of the public communicates with each other through the advert of current innovations. In the upcoming essay, I will elaborate on the various techniques that affect relationship among people and will discuss positive development at the end.

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Large companies use sporting events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, large companies pose a great power in society and always have huge competition in the market to take over other industries. While some people concur that large companies promote their products by taking advantage of sports events is a negative impact on sports. I tend to stand with the statement that does hold valid ground. I will expand on more details and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, most people think that children should be punished when they commit crimes, while others believe parents should be punished rather than their kids. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and will favour the latter view.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subject like Sciences and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views. And give your own opinion.

There is an arguable discussion about which subjects should be given the main focus on children's education. On the other hand, some people believe that history has to be given more highlight whilst others opine that science and technology are far more principal than any other subjects.

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It has been suggested that all young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Would the drawbacks be greater than benefits to the community and the young adults themselves?

In this day and age, community service has become an unreplaceable part in -> of our life. It is suggested that every teenager should be forced to take part in volunteer work to help people in society. From my point of view, the disadvantages have outweighed the advantages and the following essay would help to strengthen my point.

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Medical sectors are always considered to be a major phenomenon, in which methods of curing are usually important issues that draw great attention from publicity. While many people still feel resistent to new medical innovations, I strongly support the positive trend that more and more individuals are choosing alternative medicines and treatments.

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Some feel that punishment should focus more on rehabilitation instead of long prison terms. Others feel prison terms are important for social stability. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Opinions are divided on whether rehabilitation should be the primary goal of punishment or whether imprisonment is the better option for the sake of social stability. I believe that the answer may vary, depending on the severity committed.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than local films. Why is this the case? Should government invest money in local film industry?

Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than local films. There are many reasons of that. First off all it depends on country where you live. For example, I live in Azerbaijan. On my opinion movies here are boring and in Azerbaijani language. I prefer watching films in Russian or English languages. In addition not all films are wonderful and interesting, it means that it also depends on movie. Moreover there are plenty of different types of films: horror, comedy, fantasy, fantastic, datective and others. People prefer watching different types of films.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagreee. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, when employers offer jobs they tend to require personal information of employees, in which give regards to hobbies, interests and if the individual is single or married. Some might claim that these information could be pertinent and beneficial while, some may not agree.

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Some people think that all entertainment TV programmes should educate people about the importance of social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Social issues are important research topics, because they help people to understand that there are many ways to think about and how to approach them. Some people think that entertainment TV programmes should educate the people about the essential of social issues, as for me I agree to the point and elaborate more in this essay.

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Some people think that government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists, while some others think it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

There are a few industries that are sponsored by the party which allow the development of the country. Some believed that the Government should provide assistance to artists, while others think it is a waste of money. In this essay, I will give reasons for both and I will add my opinion about this topic .

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In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main type of rubbish. They cause water and land pollution, so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree?

Recently, there is a significant increase in the production of plastic bags all around the world. Some argues shopping bags made from plastic should be banned as it contributes to pollution, while others claim they are important for every day uses. In my opinion, the use of plastic bags should not be encouraged and this essay will discuss the reasons in the following paragraphs.

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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

In this present world, the usage of automation is constantly on the rise. Even classrooms are among the many places that enjoy the usage and benefits of machinery. It disagrees that classroom faculty will be totally substituted for technology. Analysing the incapability of disciplining classroom enlistment with technology, as well as the limitation in the learning process of students taught with automation will prove this. Firstly, a robotic teacher made with artificial intelligence would lack sufficient control over its classroom students. For instance, it is widely known that kids need to be thoroughly watched by their team to be sure that they take their classwork seriously and do not fool around when classes are going on. Sadly, this is a task robotic work force will be incapable of carrying out. Therefore, this makes it clear that classroom tutors will never be totally substituted for tech. Secondly, the learning process of students would be disrupted if they are ...

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Increasing number of people are choosing cosmetology surgery to improve their appearance. What are the reasons? Do you think is it a positive or negative development?

It is irrefutable fact that these days a vast amount of people are preferring to use cosmetology surgery . This thing is for their beauty. what cause of it . I personally believe that cosmetology surgery's drawbacks far outweigh its benefits. This is reasons are twofold.

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Nowadays, more and more people decided to have a children at later age what do you think major reason for this do advantages of this trend out with disadvantages

In today's transforming epoch, the nuclear family is become a trend among word. In ,current more and more masses prefer to have offspring at the late 30 age. I have given some reasons and I have discussed the advantages in the forthcoming paragraph

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At the present, the population of some country includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, in some countries' a significant proportion of the population is younger adults compared to old age society. Some community consider it as negative aspect of a agrarian. In my opinion, I think that having more young folk in a agrarian can bring about more advantages than disadvantages it might bring.

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At the present, the population of some country includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In the recent years, some some countries' significant proportion of the population are young adults compared to old age people. Some people consider it as negative aspects for a country. In my opinion, I think that having more young people in a country can bring about more advantage than any disadvantages it might bring.

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University students should pay all the costs associated with their education because having a degree benefits them individually more than society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought that the benefits of having a college degree to an individual far outweigh those to the whole society, some people, therefore advocate that students should pay all their education costs, rather than paying partially. Personally, I entirely disagree with this statement because I tend to believe the whole human society can benefit from more graduates.

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Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

Educatio is the backbone of a country’s future, while a good job is a key factor for a better life. This topic is of particular importance because it affects everyone’s life. This essay will discuss whether the pupils should complete their higher education or to start work after school.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foriegn language can cause serious social as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement.

It's true that speaking a language different from the mother language of the country you are in may cause many problems, bearing in mind you won't be fluent in that language.So, I agree that one has to face so many social problems as well as practical problems, in this essay I'll illustrate some points for you.

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