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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many companies prefer to move from megacities as business centers to regional districts. The industry has thought of this ruling well so there will be more connections rather than staying in one place. However, there are more advantages to select the notion and move away from the city.

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion. In this globalization era, technology is really useful in many sectors, one of them is in education. While this offers some drawbacks, there are also several merits that will be discussed in this essay.

To begin with, there are two paramount demerits of utilizing computers in education. Firstly, the students’ vision will damage slowly. Using computers means requiring students to watch the screen for a long-time. If the students are used to learning from computers, it might harm their eyes and reduce the eyes’ functions such as the cornea, pupil, and lens. Secondly, the togetherness in the education setting will not be well-connected in the real world. The presence of technology could separate the relationship between teachers and students. It is because the teachers assume that the students can find many lessons on the Internet so they have no duty to teach directly and vice versa. Consequently, there might be no educational conversation between those two parties.

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Machines are taking over more and more jobs previously done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

In various nations around the world, there has been an increasing number of sophisticated machines that have replaced and handled human jobs. While this phenomenon offers some benefits, there are also some downsides. I personally think that advanced machines bring more drawbacks to society.

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n some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In this Perpatually transforming approach. There are a plethora of individuals who are very keen to know about History regarding their living space. A fraction of individual have so much curiosity and Different techniques to found out about particular building, monuments and house's history. In forthcoming paragraph, I have elaborated few queries regarding this issue.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Most Indonesians prefer to consume foreign films rather than local films. There are numerous reasons as to why this may be. These reasons could be used to help understand what makes foreign films more desirable.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Some individuals pick outside movies as a favourable one rather than local movies. It happens owing to many abroad producers can make wonderful films so that people worldwide can relish them. To make local citizens are interested in watching local movies, the government should furnish more funding to home-grown corporation in generating interesting films.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothing. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, a few people argue that it is fair to judge a person's culture and nature by the style of his dressing. Well, I completely disagree with this point and in the following ,paragraphs I will put forth, why I support my view.

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Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays there are people who still prefer same-sex schools justifying their answer on the student's academic level, while there are others who say that in a mixed ,institute children could learn other knowledge than academics which will be useful for their life as adults such as sharing and caring for each other. I believe more in this one but through this essay I will have a view from both sides.

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Learning abaut the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this period of modernity, many people believe that history is a non-essential subject that has no value in this era. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this notion and my opinion will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable example.

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Exposure to international media, such as films, TV and magazines, has an impact on the local culture. What do you think of these impacts? Do you think that the advantages of these impacts outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Globalization facilitates the way of communication. As a result, people are tending towards foreign cinemas and magazines as well as satellite programs. According to the experts, this tendency affects regional culture, though I suppose, it is beneficial for skill development, language learning and also for entertainment. Here, the following paragraphs aim to highlight various advantages of foreign media in support of my argument.

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Some educationalists argue that non-exam, arts-based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft should be compulsory in the secondary school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many schools around the world, teachers are teaching The Arts to students and the curriculum of the secondary schools include this. Many people say that these art-based subjects are unnecessary and pupils have to focus on science subjects but some people disagree and they believe that teaching art can help them. This essay explains why it is beneficial for them.

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it is common these days to see celebrities advertising different products. do the advantages of this development outweight the disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

The rise of celebrities advertising products has become a common trend in today's society, with many companies opting to use popular figures to promote their products. While this development brings several advantages, it also has its disadvantages.

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Some people thinks computer games have negative impacts on children.To what extent do you agreee or disagree ?

In this contemporary era,there is heated argument over issues that number of individuals believe in artificial intelligence games have bad impact on pupils.A majority of society favour that mentioned phenomenon.However,I fully accord with this statement.I will discuss the logical conclusion in the upcoming paragraph.

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In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students in a classroom. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There were times when teaching by lectures was the most traditional way but now this technique is being replaced by new technologies bringing easy access to information, however this could turn into a negative aspect just for the same reason: most of the students do not need to make an effort to research for something because everything is just one click away.

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some country pay extremely high salaries for people. Some people believe that the country must not do that and make a limit for the salaries. Do you agree or disagree.

In this era, many countries pay huge salaries for company workers, while some believe that is not necessary and will make hardship for the countries. This essay agrees that the nation should give a numerous amount of salary to employees but it depends on some categories.

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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. Comics, books, radio, television, film, theater.

These days, there are a lot of media that can be used for entertainment or education purposes, for example, books, television, and movies. This essay will elaborate on the advantages and disadvantages of these media for obtaining information purposes and give my opinion regarding the most effective one.

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These days people are using the Internet for shopping, work and to communicate with others without the need for face to face meetings. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

People follow the global culture, which is an amalgamation of technology. The Internet is one of the biggest blessings given by Automation and Applied Science. Although in-person attraction is very important, after the Covid-19 situation, a group of people more likely preferred to shop online, communicate through zoom, and some offices allowed their employees to work from home. This essay will discuss why physical meetings are eventually diminishing day by day.

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The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the most effective way for children to learn how to cooperate with one another is to engage them in team sports at school. Personally, I completely agree with this idea and will outline several reasons why in the following essay.

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Scientist ssy that in the future, humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development

In the present age, people speak different languages all over the world. Scientists believe that human beings will speak a common language in the future, and the variety of languages will disappear. From my perspective, this trend has more benefits than drawbacks.

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Some people believe that education success mostly depends on teachers. Others however say that it depends more on the attitude of student and their willingness to study. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Education is an integral part of both student and teacher's life and personality. Students are like the clay which an instructor uses to mould into beautiful potry. So, according to some people, teacher plays an inevitable part in deciding a scholar's future. On the other hand, some argue that its student who's dedication and interest in studies made him succeed. My opinion lies towards teacher's pivotal role in building student's future.

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