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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In most successful companies, some people think that communicaton between employers and workers is the most important factor. Other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued by some that dialogue between co-workers is very important for a profit of foundations, while others some people support that other subjects are more important. I believe, communication is the most effective thing for the corporations success.

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In most successful companies, some people think that communicaton between employers and workers is the most important factor. Other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued by some that dialogue between co-workers is very important for profit of foundations, while others some people support that other subjects are more important. I belive, communication is the most effective thing on corporations success.

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Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Music is an essential factor of every nation. It is argued that music can be considered as the reason for keeping us united no matter what culture or age group.This essay would shed light on both agreement and disagreement, also discuss the writer's point.

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Many people believe it is prohibited to use his platform for proofreading your piece of reflection and some of them think otherwise. Discuss both advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

As if you didn’t wish to make up a quarrel As if your heart didn’t tremble when you saw the notification As if you didn’t find out about the first attempt As if you weren’t constantly worried As if his name was not something that came up to your mind as soon as the pair of stranger’s hands wrapped your waist in the darkness As if you don’t blame yourself for such a weird body response by present days As if you were finally set free, well, at least you thought you were. As if you stopped thinking about him completely As if he didn’t apologize for all the things he has ever did or said wrong As if you didn’t text each other all night As if you didn’t find yourself suffering from insomnia again As if you didn’t doubt the relationship you’ve had by that moment As if he wasn’t a fucking machiavellian he actually is and didn’t ask for a kiss and wine As if you didn’t want to kiss him As if he didn’t have a starring role in your dreams afterwards “Now I can bargain for wine...

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are different kinds of people in this world, and some of them seem to thrive on change, whilst others prefer to live simpler and more predictable lives. This essay will discuss the two perspectives and argue that it is better to live a life filled with changes.

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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

Destroying forests around the world has a great impact on the environment. The main reasons for it are the necessity to vanish territories for the future development or activities of logging companies. In this essay, I will outline some problems related to it and also offer solutions in order to tackle these issues.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, the regime spends a large part of its budget not only on public services, but also the arts. Although I agree that it is important to spend fund on public services, I do not think spending on the arts is a waste of wealth.

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The movement of people from villages to cities for work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

Nowadays, urbanisation is commonly happened in the world and lead to some issues in the rural and urban areas. There are several problems why people choose to live in cities than villages and certain specific ways to solve the problems.

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Universities should take the same number of man and women in each major. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement

Some individuals have opinions that all universities have taken students by similar numbers of male and female people. Personally , I completely disagree with this view.

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Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertising can be all around us in many different forms nowadays. In my opinion, it is partially true that it has some advantages. However, I agree that it could bring along more of the disadvantages. This essay will elaborate on my point of view.

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The movement of people from villages to cities for work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

The movement of people from remote villages to urban areas can put both the landscapes at risk. While potential problems such as poor air quality, unemployment are the city related concerns, farming lands are left alone in the countryside.So,possible measures should be taken at the earliest.This essay examines both the problems and the essential solutions in detail.

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Essay Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying that highly processed food and drinks containing a great amount of sugar have brought a siginificant impact on people’ health. Some believe that we should raise the price of sugary products in order to solve this problem. This essay will discuss why I disagree with that since it is not an efficient way and may cause more serious issues.

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Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same roads causes some problems. What are the problems and what can be done to reduce them?

It is true that when motorists and cyclists share the same roads, accidents involving these road users are common. While this is a serious issue, there are measures that can be implemented to reduce the dangers. The major problem is the likelihood of accidents on roads which are used by both cyclists and car drivers. Such accidents frequently result in grave injuries, particularly to cyclists who are particularly vulnerable, even when wearing a helmet for head protection. While cyclists are sometimes responsible for causing accidents when they do not abide by the rules of the road, motorists often fail to be aware of other road users. For example, car drivers may not leave enough room when they overtake cyclists, or they may turn left or right without realising that this could put a cyclist at risk. Since cars frequently travel at high speeds, cyclists have little chance to react in such situations. In order to reduce the number of road accidents and save lives, n...

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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people reckon that young people are not appropriate for vital positions in the governmental sector, while others believe it is a good idea for them to hold these positions. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give out my opinion.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers .They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes.What things will they be used in future?Is this dependence on computer a good thing or should we more suspicious of their benefits?

Due to highly sophisticated ,,machinery the ground of using computers has been widely increased . although performing daily training such as business,hospital jobs and crime searching, the sophisticated device of automation will operate in future likewise driverless cars which would be conducted by efforts of the computer.I am no doubt about advantage of computer and it bought substantial facilities for the family.in this ,essay i will examine the pros and cons of operating computers.

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is the primary right of students. Many universities offer different programs to encourage students to take part and learn different skills to grow in life. However, some people believe that everyone has a right to access university education and governments should make it free for all the students despite their financial background. I partially agree with the above statement.

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`Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better. Do u agree or disagree?

As the world witnesses the enormous growth of the private sector, an increasing number of firms are being established every day. This increase is accompanied by a higher demand for labor, particularly in executive positions. Some argue that positions of authority in an organization should be given to young people instead of older people like they traditionally have been. Personally, I disagree with this opinion.

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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is much discussed and debated whether students should study alone or study in groups. There are some advantages regarding studying independently; however, it is clear to me that group work would lead to better productivity

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

It is believed that majority of the masses from few nations, are curious enough to explore into the past of their dwellings. This essay will elaborate and consider the reasons behind this and discuss the possible way of the findings.

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Most people work hard, day in and out to strive to be happy. Though the definition of happiness varies from person to person - as some get it from money some from love and affection - there is a some commonality among all of those who wish for a fulfilling and satisfactory life - which is peace within oneself.

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