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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In order to reduce crime, we need to attack the causes of crime such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. It is enough to simply have more police on the street and put more people into prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The rate of crime has evidently increased in the past times. And surely we need to aid its causes by taking some effective measures. However, merely having more police appointed on the roads and incarcerating more people is not enough, and therfore, I certainly disagree with the satement and furthermore, essay will discuss what policies should government introduce and increase the awareness of ethical and moral valuesn to aid the cause.

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Many proceeded foods and ready-made meals contain preservative and chemicals. What are the advantages to this. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

As we know, big foodstuff companies are providing ready-made or deep-frozen foods in supermarkets. That's why, fast cuisine became more popular last in twenty years. Many people prefer to buy ready food due to it is cheaper than cooked meals. The fast snack companies are so big that you can see them everywhere in your country. It seems to us it is very important for people especially who are working a lot and can not find free time to cooking. On the other hand, we should say this, ready foods contain a lot of preservatives. Moreover, these preservatives have many chemicals. We should not consume fast meat regularly. We should cook in our homes as much as we can. Or we can eat an organic meal rather than ready-made meals. As we know, big foodstuff companies are providing ready-made or deep-frozen foods in supermarkets. That's why, fast cuisine became more popular last in twenty years. Many people prefer to buy ready food due to it is cheaper than cooked meals. The fast snack com...

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think students should spend time on important subjects.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are different opinions about the importance of study. While some argue that students need a science of food Its process, others claim that about the influential of formal education ought to outlay time for students. I, on my part, believe that learner should teach academic disciplines to study.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

In the modern day world the use of the internet has changed the way that information is spread and absorbed. That resulted in problems that were not relevant in the past. The most concerning problems are the widespread misinformation and falling into addiction.

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It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn’t worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

In the present world, it is of common trend to construct structures with complex designs inorder to create scenic beauty which is often not necessary till the structure serves its own purpose. Personally, I completely agree with that and i will be reasoning my stands in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.

It is widely argued that people who are professional such as doctors and engineers are obliged to work in the country where they graduated. However, other individuals believe they should be free to choose their work where ever they want. In my estimation, people are able to find appropriate occupations in all countries worldwide.

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Some people believe that anyone can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In this world, every person is blessed with a special talent and can have it in form of art, sports, acting, teaching etc. Do you think people with special abilities can only create art or any simple person can develop the same expertise over time? In my opinion, any person who is focused towards their goal can learn any form of art.

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In the developed world, average life expactancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that caould be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

In the present world, with the development of medical science the average age of living has increased. Seemingly, it may look positive but actually this is creating some other unavoidable issues towards the community. Complexities of increased number of elderly persons and probable solution to decrease the effects will be discussed in the subsequent pharagraphs.

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Some people think that dangerous sport should be banned while others believe that people should be free to choose.Discuss both views and give your opinion

Around the world, dangerous and adventurous sports are garnering popularity among the younger generation. Some people believe these sports should be banned at the global level while others believe it should be a personal choice of the people. In this essay, I will go through both sides and present my opinion.

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. The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Life is like a piece of music. It depicts people's life stories, struggles, successes, and dreams. It helps reduce people's stress in various ways. Music has different genres and rhythms, and its goal is to entertain and inspire people.

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Some people think that parents should be punished if their children commit crimes because they are responsible

A great number of people advocate that the mothers and fathers of criminal juveniles should be blamed for the offences that their children offended since it is their responsibility that how their children behave which I completely agree with this statement since it is the parents who have to provide monitorization and care to juveniles.

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Some people believe that a police force carrying guns will encourage a higher level of violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I disagree with the statement that an armed police force would promote a greater degree of violence. A

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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

There is no doubt that day’s rise of humans percentage in the world is in soaring. The question is, the cause of the human is dangerous in this world? In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my own conclusion.

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The best way to solve world’s traffic and environmental problems is increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion?

Some people argue that the most efficient way to protect the world from huge traffic and issues associated with the environment is to rise the fuel cost. In my view, it is not the best way to solve those problems.

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Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men’s, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career… It is said: “A woman’s place is in the home.” What do you think?

Women can do alot of things that men do or even better.They have got ability to do work that men can not.Eventhough do not look their work valueable like men however, women do more sacrify to their family,it always said women place is home.I completely agree the above statement.Women can do different work at the same time man can not do such as:house holding,work out side to get raising up economical their family.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about taking risks in their professional and personal lives. However, whether people should take risks is a controversial debate. My view is that people should be brave enough to take risks.

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As more and more information is available online, the role of textbooks has become obsolete. Therefore, universities should replace traditional books with digital materials. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

many people believe the internet great source of a lot of information and many students use it to get any e-book or paper also, many universities and schools use the internet as a guide for learning and submitting homework or assignment, which is a better e-book or traditional book?.

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Some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

First of all I don't agree with that,Although raising the minimum age for drivers can make drivers mature.Some people think that older people have more maturity and judgment than teenagers.So they think they can better deal with unexpected situations on the road.In order to reduce the occurrence of accidents.But these arguments have the following flaws.because this is not the case.

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Nowadays, people spend more and more time away from their families. Why is this? What effect will it have on themselves and their families?

With the development of the fast society, more and more people prefer to go outside for long time.In recent years, young people cost much time to busy but except accompany their parents.The reason is that people need to deal with lots of social things and facing more complex events at outdoors in modern urban. Meanwhile, it caused children and family members increasing negative influences which is reduce close relationships.

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Employers should focus on personal qualifications over qualifand experience when choosing someone for a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Employers should pay more attention to qualified experience rather than qualifications. Both skills have their advantages and disadvantages, but the agent's skill is valued more because he knows about the pitfalls in his field of work. I do not agree with this, because an experienced employee knows how to apply ability in job, and also an experienced attendant has more practice, unlike someone who has qualifications.

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