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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is controversial whether social media have a detrimental impact on the youth and their formation of relationships personally or it makes people closer in the flourishing aspect, I think it harmed them in three aspects.

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Many people think that food companies should not be allowed to advertise, while others believe that all companies should have the right to advertise. What is your opinion?

The food business is immensely popular among businessmen. While proponents hold the view of prohibit publishing any kind of advertisements, opponents hold a diverse stance. However, I am of the believes that all kinds of advertisements have to be rechecked by the authorities. My contention will be further explained.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.

It is vivid perspective that the more technology enhance, the more vehicles such as privet cars or even public transportation move to automation. This issue have numerous merits but seeing this phenomenon from another side may have demerits. I subscribe to the notion that the proses are far from cons.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicales will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicales outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern era, as technology is boosting, consequently, means of transportation will also change their mode. In the coming decades, all kinds of vehicles will be driven mechanically rather than manually. Without any drivers, people will commute from one place to another desired destination. In my opinion, disadvantages are prevailing instead of advantages. In a further essay, besides some of the advantages, how the disadvantages are more, will be discussed.

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In order to reduce crime, we need to attack the causes of crime such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. It is not enough to simply have more police on the street and put more people into prison. To what extent do you agree?

There exists a school of thought whether arresting law violators and increasing police control on the roads is not a productive way to minimize the crime rates, whereas addressing the key sources - poor educational and social standards are the way to go and I agree.

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It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree?

There exists a school of thought whether countries should concentrate to help their local citizens as it is impossible to assist worldwide entire population. I am inclined to believe that developing countries have no proper finances to help out other citizens, whereas powerful countries should invest in that direction.

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Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

By advancements on technology our world has changed significantly. There are several viewpoints for and against this change whether it is beneficial or not. While some people believe new technology can be advantageous in term of bringing people closer and disadvantageous in term of vanishing different cultures, I do not agree with them.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

In the recent years, technological progress shaped agriculture, although many nations across the globe are still suffering from hunger. In this essay cause of such disaster will be addressed and solution to this problem will be proposed.

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Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

İt is considered by some poeple that online shopping is increasing dramatically . I completely agree with opinion and in my opinion , it is clear that the online shopping affect better than other shopping methods in an obivous . On the one hand , there are many person that wanna have a job about online shopping in our earth .

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today’s modern society, many industrial activities bring a wide range of environmental problems to our Earth. On many forums, some think that the extinction of species of plants and animals is the primary issue of our time. However, many people think that besides the loss of many species, there also exist a range of other paramount environmental problems. Personally, I think one of the most vital issues, which we have to deal with, is the extinction of these animals and plants.

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These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

The classes based on the Internet have replaced those of colleges year by year. Some people say that classes on the Internet are useful as they do not need to go to college, whereas others believe that learning at university is essential.

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Online courses have been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, other students see these courses as a poor substitute for classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?

Internet is used in all disciplines. Teaching via theinternet is becoming more and more popular, especially in the last two years when coronavirus had spread. Offering an online course is considered a great chance that must not be missed but others find studying the online courses will not be beneficial as much as classroom learning. Studying online courses has many advantages that are in my opinion greater than its disadvantages.

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Full-time university students spend a lot of time studying. Some say they should do other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

University education is a way of imparting knowledge, skills and learning. It is believed some that students who are enrolled full time at the university should participate in extra-curricular activities besides studying, while an academic study is important, other activities are as important. I strongly agree with this statement.

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the percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend

The obesity is getting general issue in present days due to an unhealthy food and an inactive life style replaced by the hanging up on social pages and using smart or cell phones. The number of the overweighted community is going up especially in the western society because of their most exposure to the fast food comparing to other parts of the world. Reasons such as a laiziness to cook a healthy food instead of the purchasing a fast food and doing sport activities lead to negative effects such as a depressed condition or the loss of energy along with the health problems.

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large companies have big budget for marketing and promotion and as a result people graviate towards buying that product

It is true that more and more community are being launched and having good growth in recent years. Because of that, many people think that these organizations need to supply sports and social facilities for the local residential area they are working at. In my perspective, I totally agree with this opinion.

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The advent of internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Write an essay looking at the advantages and disadvantages of this professional arrangements. Share personal examples in your essay

Recently, the world was hit by a pandemic which made us realise that many professionals can work from home instead of going to crowded offices. This trend has both advantages and disadvantages to the workers and Employer.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. What are the advantages and disadvantages

Nowadays, artists earn low salaries for their work therefore they should receive funding from the government in order to continue with their work. Making real art is a long and unique process and makes artwork so expensive.

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y countries have started to give money to unlucky countries to help. Some people argue that rich countries should help in other ways, such as food supplements, and educational ınstruments since fi

With globalization, wealthy society have started to give money to unlucky countries to help. Some people argue that rich people should help in other ways, such as food supplements, and educational ınstruments since financial aid does not completely end poverty. I completely agree that monetary aid should not be the only type.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

there are a lot of old buildings in several countries in which an increasing number of residents find it interesting to become familiar with the history of their houses. different ways could be used for this purpose. people's reasons for this curiosity and those ways will be discussed in this essay.

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Although families have influence on children’s development, factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives nowadays. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Our Forefather says “Evil communication corrupts bad manners” which means what is in close contact with ink will be black, what is near light will be illuminating, and it is precisely correct with children’s influence that the factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives. I agree with the opinion

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