IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 834

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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some people think that all university students should study whatever they like . others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that all university students should study fields which they prefer, while others believe that students must study subjects will be essential in the future, like related fields to science and technology. In my opinion, interest is the most important factor for individual success, and society can benefit from that. So, I believe university students should choose their fields according to their interests.

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Some people think socondary/high school student should study only literature from their own countries.Others,however,believe students should study literature from all around the world.

Some argue that literature from one's own country is enough in nursery education,others,meanwhile, are opposite of the view that every student should learn the literature of the whole world.In this essay,I will explain both sides and why I approve of learning literature from all around the globe.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There exists a difference of opinion always on whether hosting international sports event is bad or good. Sports unites people regardless of their race, religion, community etc and hold them together. I completely agree with the fact that hosting global sports carnival is beneficial.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Every person has different levels of taking negative situations. Some individuals tend to reduce the negative situations that they take, while some people may prefer to accept them. Although both statements will be mentioned later, personally, I am willing to encounter undesired situations.

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The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres. It is feared that this trend can bring negative influences on the youths and the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays, the shopping centres are easily accessible, as there is development in terms of city malls. The younger generation are more interested in shopping than doing other activities. I agree that this trend can affect the them as well as society in a negative way.

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Some people feel that music should be taught in schools while others belief it is better to focus on the sciences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

singing and Sciences are two important to students in school, however, some people think that music should be taught in schools while others tell it is more superior to concentrate on education, the following diploma will be discussed in detail further .

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In the world of the internet, people write product reviews of products and services. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

With the ubiquitous reviews website available on the Internet, they allow people to express their opinions and hopefully help other consumers to make their decisions wisely. On the other hand, competition between companies may attract abuse of such platforms in writing fake reviews of their own products or their competitors' products, hoping to draw the attention of some innocuous prospective buyers.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems,as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays, most people leave to another country for many purposes. Although it is hard to survive in a country with multinational languages. Because this can be an impact on one’s social and personal life. I would argue that I completely agree and it would be hard to live in a foreign country due to language barriers and cultural variability.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are unavoidable times when we have to face major issues, affecting directly not only our but also people’s lives surrounding us. That when the right decision will be made to ensure your hopeful future, however, it is unclear about the term of “the right decision”, will it be the giving up-choice or not?

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals are of the view that history is paramount in the present education system while others are of the opinion that science and technology is more significant in our 21st century school system.This essay will support the later notion.However, the two different views will be outlined after which a meaningful conclusion will also be drawn.

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Role of Epigenetics in Human Diseases: Bioactive Food Peptides for the Prevention and Treatment of Chronic Diseases through Modulation of the Epigenome

It is clear that a wide spectrum of human diseases is a function of epigenome modulation. Environmental factors and lifestyle particularly nutrition can modify the regulation of the epigenome. Bioactive peptides (BAPs) driving from different sources such as food sources, animal sources, vegetal sources, and exogenous sources. They affect epigenome regulation through undergoing changes of DNA methylation, histone acetylation, non-coding RNAs, and miRNAs. Bioactive derived food peptides with epigenetic effects can be a contributing factor in different medical conditions such as cancer, cardiovascular diseases (CVDs), neurological and neurodegenerative disorders, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease (COPD), and type 2 diabetes (T2DM).

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In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Education allows people to get knowledge and find jobs. However, some individuals opine who think that can cancel high school which can close the high rate of unemployment problems. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this perspective that education is very important for finding work.

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In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are some people who think that a high-level education doesn’t the best for children to find jobs. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this thinking that education is very important for finding jobs.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices .To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people argue that at present, we have a wide range of options.This essay completely agrees with this statement. due to the current availability of a variety of products and occupations.

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people now have the freedom to live and work anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The advent of technology in communication and the improvement of transportation have brought people to seize the chance for living and working in any corner of the world. However, it can also have negative impacts on living as well as working. In my opinion, these negative outcomes do not outweigh the benefits.

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Some people believe that staying at college or university is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although some individuals are of the opinion that the best way in which they can achieve a successful career is by studying at college or university, others believe that getting a job straight after school compares favourably. Both views will be discussed in this essay, coming to a conclusion at the end.

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Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree? To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?

Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, indeed. However, many of them will experience unhappy lives, and I agree with this opinion. There are several reasons why famous and rich people would still have a chance to live unpleasant lives.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Currently, it has become a trend to refer books and tele dramas which are comprized with criminal activities than never before in many nations. Firstly, the essay will discuss how the attractiveness of these items has caused their popularity and secondly, it will explain the way it enhances the violance among the society.

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Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while others argue that the aid money is misspent by the governments that receive it, so the international aid should not be given to the poor countries in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Out of moral incentives, many people believe that countries play an indispensable duty to support one another. However, it can be reasonably argued that some governments exploit the aid money intended for other uses, which leads to the common belief that underdeveloped countries should not be receiving the help they need. From my perspective, despite several likelihoods of misusage, international aid is essential to the development of one's country.

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In a number of companies, some people think it is necessry to spend larg sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transportation. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Many people believed that spending money should focus on constructing fast and high-technological railway lines transferring between regions throughout the country. On the other hand, some opinions support the idea that public transportation should be more attended to be enhanced. To my opinion, despite that both are necessary, the fast trains may take the higher in-needed position.

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