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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extend, do you agree or disagree?

None of us can reject that money is one of the factors playing a central role in life. Insufficient finance leads to various difficulties for not only a single individual but also his or her family. In view of this, there is a controversial opinion that the salary is the most notable factor when applying for a job. I am unable to deny the truth of this statement, but I do not completely agree with it. Aside from salary, the working environment is also worth our consideration.

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These days the divorce rate is higher than ever before. What are the reasons for this? How to improve the situation?

More families are breaking up nowadays than past. Single parenthood, which deprives children of the love of their mother or father, is now encouraged by mainstream media. This essay will address the reasons and possible solutions for the higher divorce rate.

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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life? Exam pattern and teaching methods

Entrepreneurship is a genetic skill and capacity to identify the issue and then work accordingly,it cannot be taught by anyone.Along with , that business idea are learned by committing multiple failures.Experience makes a person perfect.Determination is the most significant factor needed to conquer the journey of life confronted the efficient academic curriculum.

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Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. They believe this would benefit teenagers and society. What is your opinion?

There is a certain school of thought who believe that youngsters should partake in voluntary community works during their leisure hours. This essay shall completely endorse this view and thereafter outline the reasons for this situation after which a feasible conclusion shall be drawn.

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Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. This can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children. What problem do children face when going online without parental supervision? How can these problem be solved?

Significant number of people believe that, most youngsters have uncontrolled permission to the internet and are utilizing it to mingle with others. This can cause a number of fearful situations which can be detrimental for kids. This essay shall outline the cardinal reasons and profess a meaningful solutions to this occurrence after which a feasible conclusion shall be made

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People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists, teacher are the most successful. Discuss both and give your opinion?

In the contemporary world, it is a common belief that traditional games are better than modern games in helping children cultivate their abilities. I find this view unconvincing due to the following reasons. Modern games actually foster more specific skills that are required in this day and age. First and foremost, modern games are characterised by electronic devices, which means the skills to use digital devices adeptly can be trained via playing modern games. It seems to me that modern technologies have fundamentally changed our life. Therefore, mastering these technologies is an absolute necessity. The second reason is modern games nurture team spirit and the ability to cooperate with others. This is true in that being able to collaborate with others is a key skill in any organisation. The final reason is familiarity with modern games can probably lead to careers in animation or video-game design because video games have become a popular industry. It is apparent that m...

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Doctors, nurses and teacher make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?

Well, It is impressive and surprising. I know that people should not eat more than 5g of salt daily because of the hypertension risk. the study found out that eating much salt relates to the reduction in life expectancy.

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In some countries, people prefer to rent their home rather than buy one. What are some advantages and disadvantages renting a house?

People need a home for living with their family or single all around the world. A number of states, citizens have tendency to rent a house instead of buying one. There are preference and disadvantages of this behavour and will be discussed in our essay two aspects of topic.

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Doctors, nurses and teacher make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?

in this contemporary era , many people do work as doctors , nurses and teacher and they earn small amount off money but people who work in medical feild and education feild they prompt higher amount than celebrities. Similarly, i completely agree with this statement and i will give full explanation about this topic in upcoming paragraphs.

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Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that these days that the travel with people become increasing. The question is, is it better to travel with different people included a tourist guider? In this essay I am going to write my own opinion and draw a conclusion.

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The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, modern people are more conscious of gender equality than in the past. Some people believe the rights of females are totally equal to males.However, there are still some situations which are unfair to women, especially in employment circumstances. I agree with the above statement and I will give my own explanations.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

New types of social media deeply affect the living habits of people, it is an irreversible trend in society. Some people argue this trend only has a bad effect on youngsters while others do not agree. I will give my own explanations according to experience and knowledge.

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Higher education can be funded in several ways including the following three: 1. all costs are paid by the government. 2. all costs are paid by the students. 3. all costs are paid by the student using loans from the government that must be repaid after graduation. disscus the benefits of each option. Which is the best one?

The debate over government funds for education is a hot potato. In the current world, it is undoubtedly true that after school education who can pay money for further education. So there are several options such as government funds, own self and taking a loan from the government. I would like to discuss the benefits of all options and give my opinion in these upcoming paragraphs.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Computers these days play a very important role in everyday life ,especially for working professionals. The use of computers among children would prove positive as it would make them more familiar with the most commonly used machine and simultaneously develop their cognitive skills. Although, there could be negative effects too like being less socially active, and not indulging in outdoor activities which may also lead to risk strain injuries. However, I would disagree that using a computer every day has more negative effects than positive effects on children.

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Some people believe that electronic calculators should not be allowed in school until after the pupils have mastered mental arithmetic. Others believe that calculators save pupils time, especially with complicated calculations. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Advancements in technology have changed the way we approach learning in school, but there has been a hot debate on the use of electronic calculators in school, some say that because of the dependency calculators can create on young pupils, it should be banned. As for others, because of the benefits of saving time, especially with complex calculations, calculators should continue to be used. As for myself, I will first look at both sides and give ways we can approach this situation.

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Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state

Most people have to work throughout their life in order to earn enough money so as to ensure acceptable living standards for their families. However, all citizens of the state are obliged to pay taxes and non-payment of taxes is a criminal offence in any country in the world. I mostly agree with this sentence and will try to illustrate my point of view in this essay.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the recent ,era there is a question that what men can do and what women cannot be able to do all are equal nowadays. The different qualities of men and women cannot affect their jobs or lifestyle. I totally disagree with the given statement and mention the detailed reason in my following paragraph.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Since obesity has risen among adults and children, many people has raised their concern about the highly used of sugar. As a result, some people claim that sugary products should raise their price in order to reduce consumption. However I partly disgaree with this view as I think education may be more effective.

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It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do u think the advantage of taking risk outweighs the disadvantages.

In today’s background, risks showed it significant role whether in professional lives or personal lives, some people might think taking risks was a worse decision. At the same time, there were plenty of public considered it as a great.

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IT is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.

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