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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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It is important to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. to what extend do you agree and disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

It is apparent that a growing attitude to distinguish between right and wrong at a young stage is the most effective. Many people reckon that punishment is a promising tool to help them form good discipline and behaviour in children. In this essay, the reasons to support my agreement with the statement, and the example of the potential penalties for kids will be elaborated on in the following paragraphs.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

To start off with, as a global problem, Increasing the cost of petrol is the most effective way to fix growing traffic and pollution troubles..

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

It is argued that earning more money is an essential factor than having self-fulfilment by engaging as an employee of a company. This essay totally disagrees with that statement. I am in view of many people believe that being healthy and self-satisfaction more important than getting highly paid employment. High-paid positions always bear more responsibilities and always try to achieve targets under any circumstances without caring about job satisfaction.

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Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while other think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

Some groups of people around the world believe that one of the intelligence factors is to be a successful person but others think intelligence is not only about success. I completely agree with this notion and you can read my opinion in this essay.

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n their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

As the population increased rapidly in the last few decades, new business ideas are also created. Between all the businesses they will compete for more customers which introducing advertising, one of all businesses' methods to gain customers, but is advertising actually a positive development or negative?

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An increasing number of 18-year-olds are moving out of their parents' homes so they can live on their own after finishing high school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

The number of 18-year-olds who are moving out of their parent's homes to live independently is growing every year. There are some benefits and drawbacks to this approach that I shall explain in this essay.

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In some countries, some of the criminal cases in the low courts are shown on the television, so that the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, the criminal cases in the law courts are shown on television so that the public can watch them. Although this may raise the public's awareness of criminals, the disadvantages exist that they are violating the human rights of the offenders. In this essay, I will prove that in this case, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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some people say that now we can see films on our phone or tablets,there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both views and your opinions.

Watching movies is an entertainment for a lot of people. However, it has always been controversial that if it is necessary to do it in theaters. Some people believe it is more entertaining than watching the films at home. As far as I am concerned, I opine that there is no need to see movies in the cinemas. In the essay, I am going to discuss these two viewpoints and my opinions.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the numbers of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

some people believe that the most efficient way to improve the health conditions of people is to add more sports facilities, while others think that this action is not enough and other measures need to be taken.I agree with the second statement and I shall explain my reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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It is believed that people are suffering from loads of health problems because of consuming too much fast food. Some people hold a thought that education should take responsibility for this phenomenon while others contradict with this opinion. Discuss both of them and give your own point of view

Health is Wealth; Health plays a vital role in everybody's life. Some communities believe that most communities are suffering from health problems due to the consumption of heavy fast food and they say that it is the responsibility of the teaching system while some other communities argue with this matter. In this essay, I will discuss both scenarios and then I will give my opinion on this matter with relevant examples.

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Now there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children . To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Irrefutably, parents play an inevitable role in order to mold their child. The task in hand brushes on the aspect that nowadays social constraints have been increasing in an astounding manner involving youngsters as the majority of parents spent time at office or workplace in comparison with their infants. In my conviction, i don’t have any considerable reservation on this aspect because it has exerted various problems such as 'Generating bad habits' , Lack of social knowledge and so on,and my stances are totally in line with such a school of thought.

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In modern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home

Nowadays, children avoid to share time with their immediate family and they spend more time with their pals. This essay will argue that this phenimenon might be happend because some parents have two jobs during a day and there is no time to share with the family. I believe children should not be force to spend time at home because this is not the proper solution to bond.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many today argues that companies and grocery stores have the capabilities to reduce the number of packaging for their products. However, others opine that it is the responsibility of the consumers not to patronize products that are enclosed in a lot of packaging.

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Some people think that life was better in the past than what it is now.

In the contemporary day ,a highly issue relating to the argument is the life in the past was better than what is now.I personally ,advocate the significance of past life for many reasons .In this essay , I am going to examine the phenomenon from both viewpoints and I will support my real_relevant examples.

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In order to Spend a quality life, some say, people need to have more money and some say people need free time. What do you think is important. What are the other things which are required to have a quality life?

İt is considered by some people that people need to have more money and some say people need free time. İn my opinion , money and free time is important for a quality life . On the other hand , family and friends need a quality life for people .

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We are now surrounded by advertising. Further, the amount of advertising in the world is increasing at an alarming rate. Discuss the positive and negative effects of this phenomenon

The amount of advertising in the world has indeed been snowballing as societies increasingly embrace a more capitalist style of economic organization. Although this trend brings with it a number of positive ramifications, negative aspects are also quite numerous. Both sides will be analyzed in this essay.

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Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that the number of children suffering from obesity have risen significantly nowadays. Some people consider that the governments should take a serious action on this issue because it is their responsibility. From my point of view, I personally disagree with this viewpoint for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs.

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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

It is undeniable that nowadays many people tend to have children when they get older, compared to the past. From my point of view, I believe that this provides benefits rather than drawbacks. There are various reasons to support my opinion, described in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries senior positions have higher salaries compared to those of young workers of the same company. Some people think this is not justified. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, In many countries, expert positions have higher salaries compared to those of inexperienced workers of the same company. Some people think this is not fair, I do not agree this idea because experienced people should earn more than other people.

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Some people are of the opinion that we must discontinue using fossil fuels and adopt renewable sources of energy. Yet others feel that renewable sources of energy are not as dependable as fossil fuels. Discuss both views.

It is argued that people need to use green energy instead of natural resources such as coal ,oil and etc. In this essay i will explore both views.

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