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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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All children should be made to wear school uniform. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

School uniform has been a constant subject of debate all around the world in recent years. There are many different opinions about this regulation from the institution and state levels. As far as I am concerned, there are two main reasons that need to bear in mind, in terms of socioeconomic background.

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Celebrities such as singers and film stars earn too much money, buy too many goods and care too little about other people. To what extent do you think this is true? Should anything be done to change the situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is certainly true that famous people in some countries are very wealthy. Many would argue that this promotes a wasteful lifestyle. However, I tend to think it is their money and that, as long as they pay their taxes, no one can tell them what to do with it.

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Some people believe that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others think that this has little effects and measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fitness plays a vital role in our life. Although, the busy schedule of the public is being an obstruction to find a leisure time to do any physical activities. I concuer that enhancing games facilities will be a positive trait for imporving the health of an individual. A number of sports clubes have established now which have a nexus of aminities including, lawn tennis and swimming and so on. On the other hand , there are limitation to play it by keeping in mind the age and health status of the people.

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In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some people argue that elderly persons are more important, others believe that teenagers' impact is highly valuable. In my opinion, having more youngsters causes more benefits. This essay comprises both these views and my opinion; followed by a logical conclusion.

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Appearances are deceitful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

There is a belief that a person's look can be deceitful. It is a belief that i agree with, because in my opinion, a person's look does not mean anything, if we do not know personality or feelings.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Language is a way of communication with human over the world. Many say that there are only reason for learning other languages is to travel or work. Others argue by saying that there are more different reasons for learning foreign languages, as sush, knows other culture or curiosity.

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What is the reasons , effects and solutions of water pollution ?

Water pollution is a serious problem in big cities, impacting the livelihood and the well-being of the urban population. In general, water pollution can be divided into two based on the area of impact, which are surface water pollution and groundwater pollution. These two kinds of pollution are related, as surface water can seep through the soil pores and vice versa. Back then, water pollutants are mostly in the forms of heavy metals and organic substances from agricultural and industrial activities. However, recently microplastics become alarming pollutants due to the higher use of plastic containers and substances in daily life. COVID-19 has also caused higher plastics amount in the waterways and coastal areas.

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Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

With the agreeable order ot the day, it cannot be denied that there is a significant increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some experts claim that young adults who are committing this crime, which is called 'juveniles' in the criminal justice system, did not receive social and emotional learning throughout their childhood. I have to agree with the statement because from what I have learned during my college years as a Criminology student, early childhood play a big role in shaping teenagers into the person they become in the future.

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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of city and towns, while others say housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?

It is said that planting trees is an important activity for our habitat. Therefore, numerous humans agree that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others say housing amenities should be built alternatively. In my experience, I prefer planting trees because of some pros and cons.

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The best curriculum is not one based on a static body of knowledge, but one which teaches students to cope with change. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the recent era, there is a hot debate on distinct type of schooling. A group of people argues that excellent way of education stresses on adjustment with fast-changing society. I personally agree with this issue and I strongly support my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people spend most o their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages ?

Nowadays people are flexible and settle globally however it has also been observed that many individuals prefer staying in their hometown. In this essay, we will explore a few reasons for them to stick back to their city and discuss merits as well as demerits on the same.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each tyoe of crime. Others, however, argye that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, shoukd always be taken into account when deciding on the punishmen. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Preventing violence and felony in society is a controversial topic among policymakers ,,however there are two contrary approaches to declining it ,each side has benefits ,so ,I want to assume that the punishment will be effective if It chooses wisely to suppress the intention of violence and is capable of correcting it ,so I am going to explain my thesis in upcoming paragraphs to clarify the topic.

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3.The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that stricter punishments would prevent people from driving dangerously on the road. While some people believe that is the sole way to improve road safety, I partly disagree with it. In this essay, I will delve deep into both sides of the arguments and give out my logical conclusion.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers. What are some problems associated with reliance on computer and what are some of the possible solutions

The consequent modernisation of learning has resulted in the use of computers in learning. This however has resulted in students relying more on them. This essay will highlight the problems which are associated with that and the use of other resources in learning.

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There is evidence that inhaling cigarette smoke causes health problems not only for smoker but for non-smokers who inhale other people’s smoke. In view of this, smoking should be banned in all public places, even though this would restrict some people’s freedom and action. What are your views?

There are some main health problems that can be caused by inhaling cigarette smoke for non-smokers. Non smokers who inhale smokers' cigarette smoke are called passive smokers. Health problems that a passive smoker could face along with the increasing amount of smoke inhaled are respiratory problems such as lung cancer, pneumonia and the infection on trachea. Regarding this, I firmly believe that smoking should be banned in all public spaces.

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Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so.

Nowadays companies or employers try to encourage their staff through different types of offers like providing subsidised participation and so on. While other groups of people believe that it has no benefits for them. This essay sheds light on both views and a conclusion will be given in the forthcoming paragraphes.

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Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households. What problem are caused by households waste, and what solutions may be possible in both the short and the long term?

Production of a huge number of waste by households not only makes anxiety for human being, but also it generates some problems for society. This issue can cause several severe troubles for all animal and plant species,as well as humankind.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and work tidy with everything organized and in the correct places, what is your opinion about it?

In the contemporary epoch there is an irrefutable debate among folks that keeping our indoor environment well-arranged, should be considered as a crucial matter. Explicitly, human being will have functioned more properly in a tidy house or office.Putting stuff on their own place could possibly open up new gates of reducing stress and being focus for each individual. This essay will elucidate the aforementioned circumstances in the subsequent paragraphs.

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In many countries people are living in a throw away society where things are used for a short time and throw away. what are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?

Living in societies where inhabitants use objects as disposable has been the subject of debate in contemporary states. Time is the most reason for the usage short term of materials. however, by some approaches we can reduce this trouble that causes environmental pollution.

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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing, whilst see it as something negative which should be avoided discuss both views and give your opinion

Adolescence is a time when independence and parental influence clash. Since teens is able to think on their own, they have to live with their parents who have some rules and expectations of them. Teenagers do not hold the same values and beliefs as their parents. Their goal is to have fun but their parents want them to keep safe. In this ,essay we will discuss both views and give our opinion.

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