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The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

Education plays a crucial part of everyone’s life but nowadays there is a wide variety of sources to get educated. Some people state that education from parents is more important than at school, this essay disagrees this statement.
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Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The cultural traditions play significant role in people’s lives. Therefore, it is agreed that keep them is very important for everybody and first of all for the young generation. However, two opinions are existed about the influence of using local rituals as money-making attractions aimed at tourist. Some people say that it destroys it, others say this is the only way to save such traditions. We will discuss both sides of arguments before making any conclusion.
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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in lif

Life is full of surprising packages. However, many people succeed in life, though they have failed in academics. This essay discusses the reasons and criteria for this phenomenon.
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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is the very common and easily available meal and drinks which contains a large amount of sugar. Many people think that these products should be available at a higher cost so that people think twice to purchase them. I completely agree with this statement. This essay will discuss my viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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80. In general, people are living longer now. What are the causes and consequences of this phenomenon?

Life expectancy, generally speaking, has increased in comparison to the last decade all thanks to the dawn of modern technology. In this essay, I will discuss what lead to this and what are the possible repercussions.
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some people believe that government should take the responsiblity of aged people while others believe that its individual responsibility. discuss both the views and opinion

Taking care of the elderly population is important as they spent their lifetime serving the country and family. Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the government while others believe that they should be taken care of by individuals. However, I believe that taking care of elders is the responsibility of both parties and in this ,essay I will discuss both views.
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Government are spending too much money on a space research while there are still lots of problems on earth to what extent you agree or disagree ??

Nowdays countries are competing with each other on space research where countries are spending billions of dollars on satellites to extra terrestrial exploration. I wholeheartedly agree with the above statement that on earth human is facing critical problems then space exploration, and I will elaborate further in the next paragraphs.
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Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

An increasing number of individuals recently, not only feeling unsafe in their own residences but also sensing danger when they are in public places. I will outline two main causes for this perception and provide some plausible solutions in the latter part of the essay.
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Some people believe that the famous people support towards certain international aid organisations draws attention to the problem where as others disgree to this topic. Discuss both views and give your opnion

Some people argue that the famous personalities' support towards certain international organisations gains the attention of the public whereas others disgrSome people argue that famous personalities' support for certain international organisations gains the attention of the public whereas others disagree with the topic. This essay will discuss both views on the given topic.
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We live today in an electronic information age. It is easier to be connected by technology yet many people seem to no closer to feeling happy in their lives. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, technological advancement enabled us to stay connected with people from other parts of the world. Even though communication has never been easier, many believe that it does not improve their level of happiness. In this essay, I will explain why I agree with the statement supported with two arguments.
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It is often said that “when in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they are visiting? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?

There are people who believe that we need to accept and adapt with the culture of a nation when we visit there.In my point of view its not mandatory to adapt to any culture as part of our travelling,however, it is good to to have an appreciation about every culture. Culture and language are inexintically linked each other, understand a culture without knowing its language may remain incomplete
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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

In this contemporary era, a growing number of people are buying cars. One can say that there is a myriad of benefits of using a personal vehicle although it may have some drawbacks for the ecology. I believe the advantages for car owners outweigh the disadvantages for the environment. This essay comprises both these views; followed by a logical conclusion.
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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that national similarities are becoming more apparent annually cutting across almost every dimension of human existence ranging from fashion sense to even television programs currently. In my opinion, I believe that the positive aspects of this change can not be compared to the threat in the reduction of tourism and job opportunities associated with it.
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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go Hungary Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Advancement in technology has fulfilled the gap in every part of the world ,especially in the agriculture field. Despite this, the majority of people around the globe still have to tackle the problem of fits of hunger. This essay will examine the reasons for this before suggesting some possible methods to eliminate this worldwide issue.
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Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A prosperous country requires good public health. To that end, some believe that reallocating a portion of its health budget to health education and preventative measures is a better idea, and I, very carefully, agree.
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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

It is often argued that it is more advantageous to speak fewer languages in society. I completely agree with this opinion and think that having fewer languages is much more excellent.
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Due to the advancement of technology, more and more people are working from home. This has many benefits to workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the rapid development of technological communication, the number of people working from home is increasing. There are many positives for that, such as people would have more leisure time, and can get aware of pandemics. So I totally agree that remote working is a welfare for workers.
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Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

Many students routinely have tested in curriculum school. Examination can evaluate their levels. In my viewpoint, it is an effective way to classify children. But at the same ,time it also has some cons. In this essay, I will explain further with relevant examples.
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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Recently,some people think increased the expense of petrol is the better method solving transport and pollution problems. Other challenge this opinoin said about that have some impacts but not enough decreasing problems.We also need to do many more measure ways. I fully agree with later ,there are some reasons and examples.
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In many large cities, people waste hours of their time every day because of traffic congestion on the roads. What are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

People living around the world in urban areas, waste their precious time due to traffic jams. This is a serious issue because it affects people’s mental health. Whereas, there could be many reasons for traffic jams. This essay will focus on some serious causes of traffic congestion and as well as offer suggestions to improve it.
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