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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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1. Third world countries need help from the international community. Some people prefer financial aid while others think practical aid and advice are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions differ regarding whether or not worldwide communities can help developing countries with practical help and advice. While critics insist that developing countries prefer financial help, I personally disagree with this assertion.

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Many young people say that mobile phones are the most important object that they own. Does the popularity of mobile phones among young people have more advantages or disadvantages?

It is belived by numerous young children that the mobile phone is their important possession. Mobile phone has certain disadvantages as it is a potential distraction and a means of competition between children. Nevertheless, in the recent era, it has become an indivisible part of humans lives with many advantages like easy of communication and as an useful tool for gaining information.

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Modern technology,such as personal computers and the internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home atleast part of the time instead of going to an office everyday. What are some advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

Cutting-edge technologies are becoming part of people's lives due to several factors. Such as, PC, and the internet are one of those. As a result, numerous individuals start working online instead of going to their work in person. In my opinion, working from home is fundamental as it saves amount time, however, it can lead to health issues if people tend to move less.

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Across the world,local shops are clsoing due to losing customers to online competitors.

In the recent years, rapid surge has been seen in online businesses that has led to shutting down of local stores. The problems that are emerging are joblessness and local communities are affecting significantly. These situations can be solved by government initiatives. I will explain this below.

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There has been a great increase in the number and varieties of online courses available to adults. This has been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students. However, other students see these classes as less effective than classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course.

Thanks to the prevalence of the internet, there has been a rise in the use of digital courses due to their accessablity and broad range. Many students have embraced this chance and been taking advantage of it. Nevertheless, according to some individuals, online learning is not as efficient as in-class learning. In my opinion, this trend has many merits and a few demerits which will be discussed in this essay.

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Learning in one's native tongue yields better school scores than learning a medium language. Do you agree or disagree?

Today, every time people turn on the television or flick through the pages of a newspaper, they may learn about how learning in one's native tongue yields better school scores than learning in a medium language.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Savings is an essential habit that all people must practice and emphasize as vital to securing financial security. Many believe its importance, while other think that focusing and gaining experiences are equally important. I firmly believe that savings should be seriously considered by all, particularly for the young ones.

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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

It is predictable in the near future that uses of paper material for reading books or news would be less since now, due to the advancement in the technology, it has become cheaper and convenient for individuals to get trending news and e-book. I am of the opinion that the access of online news and books may replace the usages of printed materials in the future.

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Advertisements advertising influences consumer behavior, more negatively than positively. Do you agree or disagree?

The topic of advertising has sparked much debate in the recent years. While some part of the society believes that marketing schemes has an unfavourable affect on the buyers rather than the advantages, I strongly agree with this viewpoint as it only creates strong desire and erosion of savings.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantaged of tourism in the modern world?

‏A lot of countries in the world depend on tourism visitors as a primary source of income. which also can be a source of problems if it is not controlled. It is useful to encourage tourists in our country. In this essay, the two viewpoints will be argued.

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Your traffic is leading to more noise pollution An airport construction one reason is that low-cost traveLling leads to heavy pollution Do you agree or disagree?

Air traffic is growing rapidly due to low prices of flight tickets, which results in heavy contamination of air and an enhance in construction of new airports. Some people believe that imposing high taxes is an excellent way to minimize the effect of pollution. I strongly agree with this viewpoint as it can benefit both environment and society.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that numerous citizens in some nations are suffering from health issues due to their overconsumption of fast food. This essay believes that imposing a higher tax on this kind of nourishment would be insane because people consume it for economic reasons and also because they lack time to prepare healthy food.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children

Young ages often misbehave since they tend to follow their intuitions and freedom, which make them struggle to distinguish right and wrong way. Punishment could be an effective way to nurture them to choose good decisions. Hence, I side with the implementation of punishments to them, teaching how to be responsible by giving them more tasks in reading about positive behaviors.

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Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying that more people decide to pursue their careers in other areas, living far away from their families and friends. I believe that the benefits of working far from home outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper any more. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Thao

In the fourth technological revolution, electronic media is increasingly dominant in the transmission of information. Between the explosion of electronic newspapers, the role of printed newspapers is becoming a topic of debate.While some people believe that we no longer need printed newspapers because of the convenience and speed of electronic newspapers, in my opinion , newspapers are necessary for life.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals believe that it is essential to invest a vast amount of money on developing advanced railway lines for faster transition between cities. While, other people think the money should be invested on upgrading existing public transportation. In this essay, I will examine both perspectives and will provide my views.

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Some people think It's better to choose friends who always hav the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,friends play an important role in these individuals' lives,some people prefer to select friends with the same ideas,while,other groups of people tend to choose acquaintances with different thoughts,In this essay,I will both sides of this subject and it will be analysed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.

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Many educational institutes are offering online courses. Do the advantages of this form of education outweigh the disadvantages?

A large number of academic centres are providing courses that are being held on online platforms. While there are some drawbacks associated with online education, I believe the main benefits are more substantial.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the residents of many nations have a huge amount of young people in comparison to elder people. This structure presents both advantages and disadvantages. However, I strongly believe the benefits outweigh the drawbacks for the reasons described below.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is argued by some people that working for the same firm during a whole career would be better than spending their working life in numerous organisations. This essay aims to debate both viewpoints,agreeing with the second statement.

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