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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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despite huge improvements in healthcare , the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now failing what could be the reason for this trend and what can be done to reserve it.

The overall physical fitness of the evolved nations is declining even after a significant development in the healthcare industry. This essay will discuss a potential reason for this destructive trend and a possible measure to mitigate it.

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Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Nowadays, it is common that older people have to compete with much younger people for the same type of job. While this could create problems, there are steps that can be taken to reduce the impacts. I will discuss this over the following essay.

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In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

Fast food restaurants can only be found in some big cities in Indonesia. However in many countries in the world, people can find decent food easily and cheaply. This essay will discuss how the drawbacks of that trend eclipse the benefit, especially for a long term.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In our time, we are facing many environmental problems and scientists, as well as a part of citizens, are trying their best to reduce the affection of such problems to our mother Earth.

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Nowadays, people have little awareness of the importance of the natural world. what are the reasons, and how people can learn about the natural world

Nowadays, green marketing is occurring to demonstrate how humans are destroying nature and creatures. As we know that nature is crucial to study and take benefit from the environment. This essay will provide my answer to why the population is concerned about this problem and how can understand the effect of forest reduction.

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Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sugar, it's one of the highest consumed products, it's not only used for homemade purposes but also to manufacture a variety of foods and beverages. The levels of sugar consumed are alarming and recently, governments in many countries have imposed special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. People have a different opinion towards the special taxes, few are satisfied by the step as it may reduce the alarming consumption of sugar, while others dislike the imposition of taxes as it'll cost them higher than usual.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

A school of public thought , most of the people are eager to learn about the history of that homeland and place , where they are going to live in or staying there. the essay will elaborate on the reasons for the questions on the property and the ways to find their answers.

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Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are tremendously controversial perspectives heating a debate over which ideal way to deal with offenders . While some hold a strong view that putting them in jails as a punishment is more optimal, the opposite makes a statement that providing educational and training programs is likely to bring more benefits. While the former has some valid reasons, I would contend that the latter would potentially bring about more positive impacts.

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In most parts of the world, people are living longer. What is the possible cause of this situation? Is this a negative or positive development?

It has been observed , in numerous countries ,folks live longer than before and the rate of older people increased gradually . I believe exploring the causes of this problem assist in finding a suitable solution to help resolve it.

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people consider that the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime are people who have been in prison become good citizens later. In my opinion，I have much sympathy with this view，for several reasons addressed below.

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Today, people are getting greedy and selfish. Some people argue that we should go back to the old days and show respect for the family and community, so that we can make the world a better place to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying fact that people nowadays have become self-obsessed and what matters for them is only money or any sort of financial asset. I totally agree with the people who argue that; should stop running after materialistic things and start giving importance to relationships and outer society.

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Some people think that when recruiting, companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others consider they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions.

Nowadays when there is a lot of talent available in the market, some companies want to hire people who are creative and innovative as well as can work on their own. On the other side, some organisations recruit people who are team players and take suggestions and obey the instructions of their peers. Here I am going to discuss both the views and their pros and cons.

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many today would argue that higher education is a basic right that should extend to all, regardless of socioeconomic background. In my opinion, I largely disagree since there is more value in improving the relationships between social classes.

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Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycle is better. Discuss both point of views and give your opinion

The opinion is divided as to whether a car or a bicycle offers a better means of transportation in municipals. Although some argue that using a car is best, however, I believe otherwise. This essay will discuss both views in detail followed by a reasoned conclusion thereafter.

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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living What is your opinion abbout this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in ?

The Matter at hand concerns there is certain individuals who assume that today's modern life is better than ancient .After adequate ,thought I would like to say that I support to this statement we are in a new era ,where life has become more practical and easier .In support of the above ,what follows is a detailed explanation .

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Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people say that, music is a great way to connect people of different cultures and ages together, Personally I agree with this point because music is the language of love, and love can connect and bring people together.

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Many parents send their children abroad to study.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages about the phenomenon

It is certainly true that many parents send their children abroad to study. However, not all the effects of this innovation have been positive, although there are certainly some advantages.

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Some people think that studying abroad will make them successful in life.Discuss both advantages and disadvantages

In the last few years, it has been a really famous choice to go abroad after graduating high school to get a university degree, although it was not really a possibility in the past or at least a majority of students preferred to study at a local university. In this ,essay I am going to discuss both benefits, that an experience like this can have, as well as the drawbacks.

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It is better for university students to live away from home during their university studies rather than staying with their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Life in the university is considered as the period for learning various knowledge and skills before living in the real world. Some people believe that students will get more benefits if they stay in a dormitory at a university than staying at their house with family. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement, which the reasons will be discussed in the essay below.

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Nowadays there is a wide range of TV programs. But instead of watching educational programs, news or documentary films, more and more people prefer to watch TV shows, soap operas or serials. And this negatively affects knowledge acquisition skills. What are the primary causes of this tendency? How is it possible to make educational TV programs more popular?

Today, a huge variety of programmes are broadcasted on television. Many people prefer to watch TV shows and dramas instead of educating themselves by news and documentary movies. This has a negative impact on the learning abilities of people.The imperative causes of this trend are the influence of peers and personal interests. However, people can be motivated to education by teaching them the importance of learning from TV and modifying television serials.

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