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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

Nowadays, children of many countries are becoming obese and this in turn is becoming a serious worldwide issue. Major reasons, consequences and solutions of childhood obesity are discussed in this essay.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed books and newspapers because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no doubt that modern gadgets , different types of laptops are become increasingly popular day by day all over the world . It is expected that in the future , individuals will read their favourite books or newspapers online for free instead of purchasing printed copies . I do not support this idea since it is my firm belief that traditional paper-books have important role in most part of people's life and e books are not always comfortable for all of us .

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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people thought that schools ought to teach children about skills, while others think that having a variety of subjects is better for the future of a child. In my opinion, I believe that it should depend on the age of the child.

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In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development?

With the rapid development of the Internet and widespread use of the computers, people can go shopping, work and communicate online in modern society. In my perspective, these development advantages outweigh disadvantages.

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In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries in recent times, both women and men are working full-time. It is argued that works in various homes should be share among males and females. I completely agree with both sexes to share household works.

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Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smart phone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

One widely held opinion is that people these days tend to consume a majority of their spare time for smart devices such as smartphone. Personally, it is agreed that this trend has detrimental effects to the society. In this essay, some possible reasons will be discussed to elucidate my point of view.

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Nowadays, young people admire sports stars though they often do not set a good example. Do you think this is possitive ornegative development?

Nowadays, sports is one of the entertaining methods that play a vital role in people's lives. Furthermore, it is getting more and more attractive from all generations, included youngsters. It is argued that, youths are having a great admiration for sports stars, although not all are good role models. From my perspective, I think this is a positive development.

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Prison in the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you Agree or disagree?

It is believed that Imprisonment is the most way to punish criminals, but some people think that offenders should be education. In my opinion, While I accept that education is a more effective solution to handle this problem, I also prison is an important role in prevent crime

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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workspace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

In this day and age, it is widely accepted that most people are capable of working when staying at home or visiting anywhere thanks to modern technology such as laptop, mobile phone. From my own perspective, in spite of having several drawbacks, there are more pros than cons of this issue.

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays, the improvement of technology has weakened our traditional cultures in some aspects, but I do not agree that technology poses a threat to the existence of traditional cultures.

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Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

Numerous societies believe that art and music are crucial factors. In my opinion, in this modern era, people are more inclined towards artistic and musician sectors, because nowadays these sections are not only for their leisure activities but also for their primary source of earning. Therefore, schools ought to add above mentioned fields as optional subjects in their curriculums.

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in many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion

Expanding economy is the top most preference of the government in many countries. This essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages of this approach. I believe there are more advantages than disadvantages of this approach.

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Some people claim tobacco has brought social problems and smoking should be banned. To extend do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that some individuals believe that consumption of tobacco has created problems in society, so they aren't used cigarettes and smoking should be forbidden. In my view, this decision has to made by their owns, although that would be harmless.

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Online education and training is becoming increasingly popular in the business world. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Some would argue that using web platforms in education has benefits for huge corporations. This essay will argue that despite the poor quality of learning, familiar environment during training far outweighs any supposed disadvantages.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Undoubtedly, these days, it is often argued that people are not happy, neither with whatever they have, nor with whatever they will obtain. I completely agree with this statement entirely.For many reasons, which will be mentioned below the essay.

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Children find it difficult to concentrate on our pay attention to their study in school why and how can we solve this problem

Nowadays, there are so many reasons that interrupt the people at a young age why there are learning at school. In this essay, I will explain these causes in more detail and try to offer some effective solutions to atlas lower this problem.

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some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? what other factors contribute towards happiness?

Some people think that money is one of the most significant reasons for bringing happiness. According to my point of view, however, rich people can buy any material things that they want, but there are a lot of crucial stuffs that cannot be bought by money.

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Many students are taught to push themselves to try and be better than other students, rather than work together for everyone's benefits. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays, students are taught to push themself harder rather than work together for mutual advantages. Firstly, this essay will discuss benefits and drawbacks of this tendency.

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Full-time university students should spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most of the students would benefit from some extra activities along with studies.Personally I believe that students should spend some time doing other activities such as sports.However,theeir main attention should be on education.

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