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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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some people think that the fictional violnce portrayed on television is harmless entertainment.Others disagree and think it encourages violent behavior. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, fictional violence appears to grow attention on television, as the majority of the population are are becoming more interested in it. While some people think it can lead to aggressive behaviouir others mitigate it to harmless entertainment. In this essay, I will go through the two different opinions and give mine overall.

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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this contemporary world, everything has been changing as a result of the advancement of technology. It is predicted that printed newspapers are entirely replaced by the electronical ones and it is available for people completely free. I extremely agree with it and my reasons are explained in the following paragraphs.

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For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As it is enunciated by the proportion of the society, the majority of the individuals are hard working to obtain more money. Albeit, there is a dich0tomy of views on this controversial argument, I am of the opinion that, many employees are in competitive surrounding to obtaine more money by doing their best to face economical crisis. Throughout the essay, I will venture and pursue a speculative hypothesis by elaborating my perception. At the same time just as crucially, subject for the strictest, most demanding and standard of formal assessment with respect to the conceptual precetion and logical rigour.

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Some people think that the govenment is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while other think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Children's nowadays gaining weight more than in the past. Some people think children health is the government’s responsibility because they should build parks and spaces to play and waste time, whereas I agree with people who believe that it is parents responsibility thus they spend most of their time with their family. In this , essay I will discuss both points of view.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

The advent of information technology has infiltrated in people’s daily life whether it is used at home, leisure or at work, and it appears to be more advantageous. From my point of view, I believe that information technology is more positive and beneficial in our lives, but we should also consider the drawbacks.

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Some people believe that tourism is beneficial while other believe that tourism causes problem. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion

Over the last two or three decades, tourism industry has been improving tremendously than ever before due to more and more folks are visited. However, while some think that tourism gives more advantages to nation, others say that this can create troubles among the nation. This essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

In this contemporary ear, massive amount of professional people are leaving their own nations in order to secure their bright furture. Due to this, there are plenty of effect which comes into play and further it can be refected in the economical sector of the country. This essay will discuss its main cause and also a solution to elevate the threat in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, many people are very passionate about smoking and it is very common in all around the world; however, smoking is not only leads to harmful effect to the smokers, but also for people who close to them. Although there are arguments on both sides, due to my personal beliefs I agree with that a ban is the most appropriate course of action. These beliefs will be discussed in support of my personal stance in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As providing equality to both females and males in every field has been the main issue in modern society, women's role in a country's police or military force has been in the spotlight. While some people argue that women should be equally given a chance to serve as police or a soldier, others believe that they are not cut out for these jobs. In this essay, I will discuss both views and argue why females ought to have an equal opportunity to work in the national police or military force.

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Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that going to college for the academic purpose is the best choice, whereas other students decide to follow a different path which is attending vocational training courses. In my opinion, I believe that entering an institute is a better choice for all the students after graduating their high schools.

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regulations in the company. while in his own business he try to give his best to reach the top of gold mine.

Certainly, employment is mandatory to earn bread, cloth and shelters. However, in this competitive era, people prefer to do their own businesses instead of working under any other company's properties. This essay will describe the reason for this along with the demerits of self-employment.

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Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is argued that being rich does not mean that the life always be happy. I totally agree with this statement and this essay will discuss why wealth is not the only reason for people to achieve the happiness. Moreover, here we will show that there are several ways that could make life happier.

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There is a growing number of different kinds of jobs in modern time. However, the problem that elderly employees

There is a growing number of different kinds of jobs at the time. However, the problem that elderly employees these days have to face is that younger employees are having greater employment opportunities than old. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening as well as put forward resolutions for this issue.

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Today people are travelling more than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

Man is an advent traveller by nature and wants to explore new places every then and now. In ancient times humans used to travel for bread and butter and later on for trade. With the advancements in science and ,technology more people have started visiting new places and this number is expected to increase drastically further in the coming years. This essay will discuss the reasons for the increase in this trend and the benefits of travelling which I will be elaborating on in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative situation!?

It differs in various countries that buying a home is very vital instead of renting one.I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and why this might be the case.

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Doveloping countries require international organizations help some people prefer financial aid while others think practical aid and advice are better discuss both views and give your own option.

It is a metter of debate wether under devolp nations need international organization's help by ecnomical aid or practical aid or counsel . Altough both sides have their own merits but I am with the latter view point.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The only constant factor in life is change. Few people believe that working in the same organization for a long time is beneficial in contrast to people who believe that change should be consistent and it is productive to work in different organizations. Changing or not changing organization is a subjective idea. However, in my opinion, working on different platforms is always a cherry on the cake for a better career. We shall reason this out with the few examples below.

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In Some Countries Owning A Home Rather Than Renting One Is Considered More Important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

It is true that in some countries like China, South Korea or Japan, it is important to bought a home rather than renting one. There are some reasons for this, and in my opinion it is a negative development.

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The manufacturing and use of cars damages the environment but their popularity is increasing. Why is this happening? How could this be controlled?

It’s indubitable that the production, as well as selling of four-wheeler vehicles,four-wheeler vehicles has surged over the last few years. This action affects the environment in a significant manner that we can’t avert. Here, I would like to describe the factors for increasing cars production and uses like a number of cars products, car loan facilities, availability and also the ways through which it will be controlled like implementing a higher tax, improved public transport facilities.

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Some people believe that humans should be able to use animals for their own benefit, while others argue that the rights of animals should be protected. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

using animals for human need is a disputable topic and while some people consider that animals can be utilized for human benefits ,others think that animal safety and rights should get more importance.In my opinion ,animals can be used for human needs but their rights should be protected.

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