IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 993

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

As modernization and civilization have been processed, people need more houses and buildings. In response to these needs, a lot of housing is built at the moment. However, the positive effects of planting trees in open areas of towns and cities outweigh the benefits of building more housing.

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in their advertising, businesses nowadys usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this? do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, A new products ad is important for business. For many people, advertisement is the only way to introduce new products. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why accentuate new outcomes in ads and some of the challenges to be overcome.

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Some people believe that success in life depends on hard work and determination, while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is mostly argued that gaining to success is straightly connected with such type of factors like hard work and determination by some sort of community. However, others think on the contrary way that there are other things are more essential like money and personal appearance. This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion below as well.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Storybooks and TV shows have become a strong companion because of their versatility for a majority of the people to spend their leisure time; However, now these days, In majority part of the globe, the interest towards the offense related content has been increased significantly. This category has got very huge fame in all the ages because many of these stories are based on true incidents. I also consider these types of dramas to watch because of their creative writing as well as the story flow.

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this opinion?

At present time crime and violence in society is on the rise and people are looking for acceptable but strong enough measures, which can control and eradicate crime without eradicating criminals , one offered solution is capital punishment which in its use will erase crime and criminals so all clear but I only partially agree with the death penalty and elaborate further in this essay.

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Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People believe that young ones need to listen the rules and regulations of their elders and teachers desire to be. While others say that the children needs a independence and self-control in solving problems,I agree. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give necessary opinion.

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These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is certainly the case in my local area that many young people choose to leave their home village or town as soon as they finish college or when they first get full-time employment. There are several advantages to this. Firstly, it gives the individuals better opportunities to find more suitable jobs. This means they have much greater flexibility in the careers they can choose and are no longer forced to take the work available in the local area. A second benefit is that they have the chance to meet and work alongside a wider variety of people, which enriches their social and professional lives. Another relevant point is that moving to a place where they are anonymous allows people greater freedom to behave as they wish, without worrying about what those around them think. However, there are a number of drawbacks to this development, the most serious being loss of support. It is important for humans to feel that they are part of a community and can rely on fam...

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Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

urban designers plead that cities need more outdoor public facilities such as parks, others refute this claim asserting that urban places need more essential infrastructure like hospitals. I personally agree with the latter statement. This essay will discuss both views and explain why towns got to be endowed with more health infrastructure.

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It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

A few folks in our community emphasise the need to add a new subject in the present curriculum of the learning process. They believe that it is essential for youngsters to learn about cultivating vegetables and managing livestock farms. Whereas the majority of people believe it is a waste of time for children and can impede their academic growth.In this essay, I am going to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning horticulture and keeping animals and express my opinion towards the end.

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In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs what are the courses of this difference ? What will be the parental roles in future?

Parenting is inevitable for society at any social level. Both parents have various responsibilities that were like this throughout the centuries. I will discuss reasons, why this situation has changed and what problems we can face sooner.

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Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In recent days, the public has had various different views about the importance of the Olympic games event held annually by certain countries. Some groups of people think that the Olympic games are a means of bringing peace for many nations, while some others think that it is merely a wasting activity, and there are still many parts of human life that should be improved. The following paragraph will discuss both views, and convey my personal thought which I think money should be spent on other sectors, not on holding the event.

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Some people think happiness is only caused by financial success, other thinks that there are other factors involved in happiness

There are several studies that proved that money alone cannot buy happiness. Some people feel that other things are also necessary to live a joyful life. I will be discussing both statements in the following paragraphs which will provide a clear picture on these points.

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It is often said that we should work to live, not live to work. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Most people in the word have to find job, some people think we should work to live but not live to work, this essay will discuss both views and agree this view.

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Some people think that when recruiting, companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others considered they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is debatable whether companies should hire creative employees that do their jobs independently or instead hire those amenable to work in teams and who are easily instructed. Although creative independent people are attractive, they may stick to their own ideas and mindset that do not fit in the ethos of the company. Instead, I think it is preferable to employ workers that fit into the team and go on well with the others to maintain peace and tranquillity which makes the work more productive.

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Despite the benefits for health, fewer people today than ever before exercise by walking. Why is this problem? What can be done to encourage more walking?

Nowadays, less people are doing walking exercise which is the one of the physical exercises although, there are a lot benefits for humans healthy. This essay will discuss the problems of why people do not do walking training and also, this essay will suggest probable solutions for encouraging people to do more walking practices.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. Do the advantages of this development outweight the disadvantages?

In recent times, on accomplishing a bachelors degree, students have more chances to study in foreign countries. Whereas, earlier they use to continue education in their own nation. In this essay, I will be examining the merits and demerits of this development prior to the conclusion.

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Problems with environmental pollution have become so serious that many countries are trying to solve these problems. Suggest possible solutions and give your own opinion.

Nowadays environmental pollution has become the hottest issue for the majority of the countries and each country tries to solve it in their own ways ,even some global agencies like the environment control board get involved in helping with this issue . In the essay ,going to elaborate on possible remedies for the problem in detail.

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Should government funding be spent on education and healthcare system? What is your opinion?

There is a tremendously controversial prospective heating a debate whether the authorities should make an investment in schooling and medical care. In my opinion, I would contend that it is optimal to spend money on both mentioned elements.

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Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefits students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With an increasing population paying more attention to the development in the spiritual aspect, the number of people studying in universities is more than before. While someone argues that governments and schools should not give financial support to students because of no benefits. I do not agree with this point to a large degree.

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Many people in society believe that having fixed punishments for all crimes is a more efficient way of dealing with criminals in the justice system. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment?

The perception of many in the society is that, in the judiciary system, the intensity of punishing the people for their crimes based on the severity of the crimes is less effective while dealing with the criminals. The below essay discusses the benefits and the drawbacks of fixing identical punishments for all the offences.

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