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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Most societies have homeless people. Some think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?

In major part of the world, we found homeless people. Some people believe that appropriate way to help them is financial support. In my opinion, bringing them money is a good thing, but it is not the only thing that makes them smile.

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Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. do you think it is a positive or negative development ?

Some decades ago our parents bought bread and cakes at the bakery, vegetables and fruits in the market, salt and sugar in the grocery, etc. These days more and more small shops and markets are demolished and in their places new big shopping centres are built. Although this tendency has some negative sides, I believe that this is a positive trend.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

These days if pupils would like at least be able to have enough money for their life, they need to get professional skil in a huge range of different offers after a school. But due to social and economic stability the new trends became popular, such as, to start their further education after one year of rest. Let’s discuss and find out do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of taking year academic holiday.

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In some countries, children are encouraged to compete against each other. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this approach?

There are many countries where contention is promoted among people from young ages. In this essay I am going to illustrate the pros and the cons of this approach.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss and give an opinion

It is considered that the salary for some individuals should be cut down due to the fact that their earning unappropriately high in contrast to others. However, some peoples` view is that people with significant money can cantribute to the country positively.

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People nowadays are spending more time at the work place and it is argued this is a problem for family life.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Both parents are working full time.Due to bad economic time, the society is utilizing most of their time looking for income whereby, it is detrimental to the family.As far as am concerned,i agree with this concern,this is because busy parents have less contact with their children and again there is alot of responsibility to fulfil in terms of paying bills.

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In the current society,many people are struggling with obesity. What are the main causes of this? What are the effects?

Nowadays there are many diet-related diseases,as seen in the modern world many individuals are putting up with obesity.Although,there are many diet-related issues to obesity individuals have played a role too.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of using CCTV cameras.

As far as I ,know technologies become developed to the community in the XI centuries. It is self-evident that huge of contemporary technologies embrace a wide range of society. ,However there are both pros and cons to using to do this. Thus I will explain some of the reasons why CCTV cameras are necessary for the community.

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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

in recent decades,technology plays a pervasive role in the world and everything is effected by that.school is one of the famouse itam which turn to a controversial discussion.as a result, some commentators argue that classroom teachers will be substituted for technology.from my point of view,technology can impact on classroom teachers in various way but it can not eliminate it entirely.i will explain here.

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society is based on rules and laws it could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do to what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument whether no exception should be made in terms of law enforcement. This essay agrees with the statement due to various reasons.

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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both.

Nowadays, there are music in every country and society. Some people think that music will bring drawbacks to individuals and society, this essays will investigate both views but believes that it is beneficial to them.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are reasons for this? How can people research this?

The trend of homeowners searching for historical information about their homes is becoming more and more popular in many countries. This tendency can be attributed to some definite reasons and there are several ways people can do this.

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There are more and more effective security measures in large cities to reduce the crime. Does the endeavor bring more benefits than problems?

There is an argument whether security measures in big cities is effective against crime or not. Thus, its benefits outweigh the drawbacks. This essay will present both points of view.

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People who live in big cities face a number of problems in their daily life. What are the main issues people in the cities face? How can this be tackled?

Individuals have a preference on where to stay.Those who stay in renowned towns have various challenges to put up with.Some of the challenges associated with city residence are pollution and congestion.

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Nowadays, more and more people don't wear their national clothes, and the clothes look almost the same all over the world. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In recent times, a majority of individuals are opting for similar trendy wear rather than national clothing. This essay will discuss both pros and cons using examples to demonstrate points and prove arguments.

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Many people believe that primary education should also teach arts and music, not only science and mathematics. Do you agree or disagree?

It is discussed, in education like primary school, to include different subjects such as art and music, and not only science and mathematics. I totally agree with this, and in this essay, I am going to write some of the benefits of doing such programs.

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environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increased nowadays the government have taken measures at the global level but they got only few solutions what is it so and how can this problem be solved.

In this modern age , there is not only technological advancement but also decrease in the environment's saftey. There are many issues such as climatic changes and contamination of mother earth.The measures taken by the world leaders to reduce this is not effective . This essay demonstartes the solutions that can be devised for such problems.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own or experience.

The contentious argument that whether to work or study erupt an incessant heated debate among many. Some societies often urged the teenagers to have a gap year and acquire some experience. This essay will discuss both positive and negative aspects of this practice.

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Some people say that punishment is the best way to teach children to behave well, while others disagree and point out that rewarding and praising them is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

People are calling in to question the most effective way that children learn how to behave is a punishment. While others advocate praising and rewarding is the best way of upbringing. Both sides of the argument present rational ideas which will be elaborated on, followed by my own take on the matter.

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Medical services should be run by profit-making companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Health care matters is a very imperative sector however some individuals argued that health services should be managed by companies that are up for business.As far as am concerned i disagree with the reason being that these services will be very expensive and there will be a conflict of interest between the patient and the facility.

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