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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that individuals who earn a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that the individuals who contribute to the society (such as scientists or teachers) are the most successful. 🔸Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The whole folk dreams they more successful in future because now time cash is important to all.in my opinion I believe that lot of payment is the best successful but other contributors to the culture are more successful.

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some people think that government should take care of diet of all individuals of country , others think that people should themselves take care of diet and health, discuss both views and give your opinion

Many people believe that the government must monitor and control the diet of its citizens, while on the contrary others opine that everyone should be responsible for his/her own health. If the government regulates people’s diet it would be easier to form a proper plans and legislation to support public healthcare, on the other hand, central monitoring of diet would require a huge sum of money and manpower which is almost impossible to facilitate. In my opinion, it is nearly impossible to take care of the diets of every people rather the authorities can try to motivate and create awareness so that community itself becomes conscious about its physical well-being.

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Some people prefer to stay in the same job for same company, but other prefer to change job frequently. You should use specific reason to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides.

In modern society, some people often diverse their job due to reference, boredom, hobbies, motivation, etc. But there are also people that like to work in the same company for the long run. Both of them have favourable advantages and disadvantages.

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One of the best methods to motivate and encourage workers is to pay them according to what they produce or sell. Do you think this is the best method?

Recently, there was a discussion whether salary of workers should depends on how effective they are at their workplace, in order to motivate them and change their settings. I am strongly convinced, that this method can improve and repair all the lazieness.

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Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss and give your option

For the majority of crimes, jail is the best solution. A certain number of individuals claim that prison is necessary, whereas others do not. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons why bridewell is necessary and some drawbacks of it.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that accepting the bad circumstances like unsatisfactory employment or lack of money is best way as they learn a substantial lessons from that time period, while others believe that one should work hard to improve a bad time. This essay believes that working hard to overcome from the poor circumstances is more valuable than learning an important lesson from them.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Competition and cooperation are so crucial among children. When we force them to do something we should learn them both being collaborators and a rival. According to adults imposing one of them on our heirs is obliged, while some people advocate that teaching competition to kids is more important, while others are of the opinion that cooperation should be encouraging. I reckon that both are an indispensable part of their lives, yet cooperation should outweigh.

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Are there more advantages to living in a city than in the country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Whether cities are better than rural areas or vice-versa is a contentious question, it depends on one's choice, as to, what they prefer. Both cities and rural areas have their pros and cons. Rural areas have quaint environments whereas there is always something fascinating about big cities. In my opinion, the answer to the question “Are there more advantages to living in a city than in the country?” is not like one shoe fit for all, it’s a totally subjective choice.

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Some people believe that it is good to shere as much information as possible in scientific research, bussiness, and academic world, others believe that some informations is too important or to valuable to share freely.

SOME PEOPLE PRESUME THAT IT IS NICE TO SHARE AS MUCH INFORMATION AS WE CAN IN SCIENTIFIC REACH, BUSINESS, AND THE ACADEMIC WORLD, HOWEVER, OTHERS THINK THAT SOME INFORMATION IS TOO IMPORTANT OR TOO VALUABLE TO BE SHARED FREELY. IN THIS ESSAY I WILL DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS WITH SOME EXAMPLES ADN EXPLAIN MY OWN OPINION.

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Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss

Nowadays, there are many people who consider that prison could be the best option of punishment for the victims of crime. Others, however, believe that there are many other types of effective methods to deal with the crime rate. I completely disagree with the former statement and in this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons and support my own views with relative examples.

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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the the period they are free to have fun.They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,pupils most of the time want to enjoy themselves when they are supposed to learn and when they are idle.Some people are of the opinion that,they should be given the privilege to sort out their time.I disagree with this assumption and will discuss the reasons which are;learners should be supervised to study and play when they are done learning and also students should be educated on time management and its benefits to them.

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that modern developments in medicine and engineering are advanced so far because of the application of scientific methodologies by the researchers. However some argue that this research practices should be only conducted by the goverments while protesters demanding that private sectors should lead the way.

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Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

At present, open office designs are being used more than closed-door office spaces. The two types of office spaces are great depending on the staff using it. However, this essay agrees with the notion that the advantages of non-restrictive office space designs outweigh the disadvantages.

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Around the world, the rich are becoming richer and poor are becoming poorer. What is the cause of this? What solutions are there to tackle it?

In different counties around the globe,it is a common notion that while poor people are getting poorer, the rich are accummulating more wealth.There are several reasons for this. On the side of the wealthy can include factors such as investing in the best education,willingness to take risks,hard work and inheritance just to mention a few. On the other side, having brilliant ideas yet lacking the means and connections to bring them to live, as well as poor infrastructure can greatly affect the poor, hence, further reduction in wealth. This essay would discuss these reason in more detail with relevant examples.

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In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, there is a trend of post-graduate students continuing to share their accommodation with their parents despite being employed. Even though this movement do have some disadvantages, I believe that it would be better for youngsters to stay in their parent’s house after they got a job.

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The increasing housing problem in big cities has social consequences. Some people say that only government can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a fact that population density and the increasing figure of housing have created some social problems in many large downtowns. A group of people believe that the issue could only be solved by the ministry. I personally agree with the statement and the following essay will discuss it in detail.

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In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

Recently, citizen in some nations has became more preferable on travelling to large shopping centres located far away from them to buy products rather than visiting small shops near their area. Even though this trend provides some benefits, I believe that the drawbacks are more significant.

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Environmental problems are becoming a global issue and are encounter-challenging the quality of life. Do you think that environmental problems will produce better results if it is addressed globally or it should be addressed by individual countries.

By rising the environmental issues in all over the world and face the quality of life. it seems that territory problems will construct greater outcome it is addressed globally. However, others disagree with that and think the environmental issues should managed by individual countries. This essay will discuss the debate.

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Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that governments are responsible for the rise in obesity in heir. I totally disagree with this opinion and the question is "Does the government grow your scion up? ". Last 10 years of the period there has been a rise in obesity for kids and there, but not only in the United States of America and the united kingdom. It has been one of the greatest problems in most of the European countries and over 70 per cent of the United State of American's young kid's population. Obesity in children could cause major big health issues like heart disease, it could weaken your immune system and then children easy to catch viruses.

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2.We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that we are living in a global village. Every country of the world is connected to each other and every individual has a role to play in society. Some people think that one cannot help everyone in society who is in need. Therefore, people should only show concern to the inhabitants of their own country and community. I completely disagree with the statement for the following reason.It is true that we are living in a global village. Every country of the world is connected to each other and

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