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Thanks to the development of transportation and globalisation, people these days can travel anywhere they want, hence multicultural cities have emerged. Nevertheless, discrimination regarded with people’s nationalities, races or religions is a debateable issue that requires immidiate solutions. Some people believe that these problems can not be solved because they are nature-made while others think that they are artificial and some actions can be done to tackle these issues. This essay will indicate some reasons why they are man-made and suggest some possible remedies.
In this day and age, sleep deprive has been increasing amongst community members. This could affect people’s relationships negatively as well as decrease one’s productivity at work. Therefore, this issue could be tackled by asking for medical consultation, besides leading a healthy lifestyle to reduce stress levels.

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the use of the internet has become the order of the day amongest various students. From my perspective I believe that they are being an overdependance which leads to many drawback. I shall explain why the internet is becoming a critical contraption in students life.
The issue about teaching and learning academic subjects in school is highly controversial. It is considered by the large part of society that studying Math or Physics is a waste of time for the most of the children. However, others believe that all the subjects in school are of equal importance and each of them can turn to become a profitable sphere of activity in future. I tend to agree with the last point as I`m convinced that there are no unnecessary subjects.
Nowadays, some experts think that children have to learn a foreign language at primary school in place of secondary school. First of all, this essay will explain the pros and cons of this thought. Secondly, it will also explain that the advantages of the proposed method outweigh the disadvantages.
It is an undenialbe the fact that each and every one of us shoul know how to play at least one musical instrument. However, while the ability to play an instrument can provide some benifits such as improve concentration, increase creativity,etc, I do not agree with the idea that kids need to learn to play musical instrument just like they learn read and write.
Every county has its own ability to advance in technology because the government invest on goods and services heavily by supporting big companies. These products are vital for our survival in the 21st century. But on the other hand it's harming our society and our standard of living. I accept that multinational organisations and their products are extermely important to ease the way we operate our day-to-day activites.
Two argumentation is an encounter for a main environmental problem. Some people are concerned most about the extinction of particular species of plants and animals, and the other argue that there is more important environmental problem than this. Both argumentations have their defenses.
It is often argued that technological devices are harmful to the young generation's development in a long-term perspective. While some people contend that advantages of technology are undoubtfully beneficial for youngster's future. I will give my opinion as below.
Since the beginning of the industrial ,era fossil fuel has become an important source of powering. Even after 200 ,years the world is still depending heavily on fossil fuel. However, it is inevitable that reservoirs of fossil fuel are soon to be depleted.
Crime prevention is a major concern for many governments, who want to be able to offer their citizens a safe and pleasant life. However, preventing crime is a problematic and complicated task. Whilst both improving conditions and punishment can be effective deterrents, showing that crimes are punishable is still the most effective deterrent to date. This essay will argue this point by exploring why individuals from both favourable and less favourable environments commit a crime, and outlining how a punishment-free society may negatively affect the crime rate.
Nowadays, network has a huge impact on education filed. It considered a significant factor for students on their learning ways. I agree that has some negative influences and must be restricted for educational reasons. In this essay I will discuss both sides of views and I will draw my personal conclusion.
It has been suggested that topic for discussion, more people believe that rivalry of feeling in the young can be given be courage, ,,nevertheless the others to argue that co-operate is necessary so it should be taught to children and this process will create more chances than a sense of competition. I believe strongly, the rivalry of feeling is not better than the cooperation
Nowadays, the consumption of sugar has become increasingly popular and is one of the main factors that have detrimental impacts on one’s health. This essay will further explain the potential causes of this phenomanon and reccommend possible solutions that can help resolving this issue.
Some people prefer changing their job having two reasons. Conversely, the recent phenomenon is rather concerned about the fact that people like to work in the same kind of profession for their whole life. Although it seems that the latter group is the same as what I believe, the following paragraph will elaborate on the details of both contradictory views before framing a logical conclusion.
Experts throughout both the developing and developed countries debate whether the governments should ignore the necessities of people living in foreign countries and give attention to their internal problems or whether the opposite case has to be implemented. I mostly agree with the latter view.
There is a growing trend whereby residents are researching the history of their homes. In my view, this is due to a natural curiosity and practical concerns, and should be done through official channels.
It is undeniable that many companies misuse advertising and marketing promotions to gain trust of the public stating that their products are fresh and new in some way. In my personal view, I strongly believe that this would lead to wide array of detrimental consequences.
In recent times, social media has become more important in everyone’s daily lives. Some people believed that social networks are gaining increasing popularity among the people from different ages. However, others believed that posting personal details on social networks have negatively impacts on the society. The following paragraphs discuss both benefits and drawbacks of using social media and reach a reasonable conclusion.
Major cities nowadays expand rapidly in social and economic development. Many young people face various problems like insufficient jobs and unaffordable housing. Luckily, both the employers and the government can introduce some measures to tackle these problems. These arguments will be explained as follows.
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