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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence in films on television and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People hold different opinions about violent scenes in films on television and at the cinema. While some individuals think that the government should not have control over the level of violence, I vehemently oppose this scenario.

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In many countries woman no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require financial security that marriage can bring. To what extend do you agree?

There are some people that believe females no longer desire to get married because they can remain financially secure without the help of a partner. I agree that many people can live independently on their own salary however, marriage brings much more to a person’s life than just money. Therefore, there are also many other reasons to consider why women are no longer eager to wed.

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Many People Believe That Formal Pen And Paper Examinations Are Not The Best Method Of Assessing Educational Achievement

While some people believe that formal ‘pen and paper’ are the best examinations and students don’t need to new way of demonstrating educational achievement, there is another support idea that this method is significantly worse than new one. In my opinion, the digital age is making ‘pen and paper’ seem obsolete and schools need to combine them with other forms of assessment.

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The growth of online shopping will one-day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or dis agree?

In this , recent times, advancement in the use of technology keeps growing. The question of, if the increase in online shopping could lead to the shutting down of shops in local and urban areas is really a debatable issue. I totally agree with this aforementioned statement for the following reasons.

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Government should spend more money on railways than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Transportation is an integral part of our modern world, and an enormous number of commodities and passengers are translocated everyday through roads, railway systems, or airplanes. Some people believe that governments ought to spend budget mostly on railway systems rather than roads; I highly disagree with this notion because of two reasons which I am going to explain in the following paragraphs.

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The increasing demand for oil and gas has made it necessary to look for these energy sources in remote and untouched natural places. Do you think the advantages of locating oil and gas in these areas outweigh the disadvantages of damaging these places?

It is undeniable that people's activities are are involved in many natural disturbances and disruptions. Since oil and gas have played a vital role in our society ,especially with the individuals living such as transportation, cooking or even electricity. The rising need for them makes people search for new origins to meet the demand. The new locations are mainly ones that are at a great distance and hardly been used. Though I believe that placing new locations for oil and gas means a new source of natural resources, the consequences would outweigh the benefits as I will mention.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that it would be preferable to create a solution in order to adapt to climate change. As well as, individuals have to stop investigating how to ban it. Nevertheless, I completely feel vice versa with the aforementioned. Due to the fact that both humans and the environment will be damaged. The reasons why people should prevent temperature change will be highlighted in the following lines.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Today, with more and more advances including farmer's skills, the help of technology in agriculture plays a crucial role in providing food for people around the world. However, people still suffer from hunger, as we shall see.

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Many of the products we buy nowadays break or wear out very quickly. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for manufacturers and the public?

Nowadays, clothes and items we consume are rapidly damaged by their usage of them and they become useless waste. This is a very cheap way to produce products for the broad segment of consumers and make them affordable, while it is less beneficial for consumers than buying one expensive item and using it for a long period of time and is less profitable for business.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.

At the present time, teenagers are motivated to work or have a trip for a year between graduating from high school and going to a university in several countries. Some benefits and drawbacks are explained and illustrated with examples in this essay.

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the proportion of different types of transports using the main bridge in UK in 1965, 1985 and 2005.

The pie graphs demonstrate the percentage of various kinds of vehicles, namely, private cars, recreational vehicles (RVs), public transportation vehicles, and lorries and other commercial vehicles passing over the bridge in the UK in 1965, 1985, and 2005. In the following paragraphs, the fluctuations will be discussed in detail.

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young people know about international pop and movie stars but know less about famous historical people. what are the reasons of this trend and what can be done to solve this problem?

Young people today are more aware of the latest fashion and often see movie and pop stars as their role models. Adulation of the social media influencers is also common these days as smartphones and internet are easily accessible to the teenagers. In this race of being more fashionable, children seem to care a lot less about the historical personalities and the sacrifices they made.

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Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

Nowadays , a few groups of people think that prices should be in their budget for products which is the only thing that they focus on during shopping. I disagree with it and give my own opinion.

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Many people work from home using modern technology today. Some people think that only the workers benefit from this and not the employer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Working from home is the new trend in this developing world. Many believe that working out from home is only a benefit for employees than employers. However, I want to assert that it is favourable for both. I want to delineate both perspectives in this essay.

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The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?

Yes, I completely agree with it. Nowadays, the government is spending a lot of money on unnecessary schemes. Instead of that, if they use that amount in addressing the problems of the people, we can see a better state.

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Also there are lot of translation software available learning a language could be advantages so what extent do you agree or disagree

Undoubtedly, in this revolutionized era, plenty of transitional applications are available in order to perform automatic language translation .Hence, it has been contended that the human interprediators will no longer the required .I agree with this statement up to a small extent. since emotion and feeling will fade away.

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Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge.To what extent is this a positive or negative development?

In this digital era, it has become easy to download music and books, protected by copyright, for free from the Internet. I believe this development is a negative one for several reasons.

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Some people think that giving gift and present to friends and family is important to show them that we care .other think that there are more important aays .discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are two most common approaches to test someone's knowledge in various spheres, such as multiple choice and writing an essay. Both of them are good and they have their own advantages. However, there are disputes about what method is the best one. I totally agree that multiple choice approach is much nicer than letter.

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Home Schooling has become very popular in recent years. However, most people still believe that attending schools is the best way to obtain formal education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of home-schooling?

Ví dụ: There are many appealing TV programs nowadays that attract children’s attention. Watching too much television is harmful to children. Do you agree or disagree? Các keywords trong bài đã được mình bôi đậm: Watching too much television; harmful to children. Loại đề là: disagree/agree Bước 2: Brainstorm - điều hay ở đây nèee Ngày mình mới bắt đầu học IELTS hồi cấp 3, mình thường xuyên bị bế tắc trong mê cung ý tưởng, bởi mình chỉ nghĩ ra 1 tí/nghĩ ra được nhưng không viết thành lời/nghĩ ra và lạc đề/không nghĩ được gì, khiến cho kết quả bài thi thường xuyên “chạm đáy nỗi đau”. Từ ngày mình khám phá được tips brainstorm này, cuộc chiến viết lách của mình bước sang một trang mới hoàn toàn =))) nếu việc brainstorm ý tưởng thực hiện tốt, thì bước viết bài sẽ nhẹ nhàng hơn rất nhiều. Chuẩn bị: 1 tờ nháp trắng, vài cái bút và 1 cái đầu tỉnh táo thì càng tốt Các bước thực hiện: Tìm một tờ giấy nháp trắng Ở giữa ghi rõ luận điểm Sau đó, ở các nhánh, chúng ta ghi các sub-topic n...

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Companies spend millions each year on advertising online, in magazines and on billboards. These adverts can encourage people to buy goods that they do not really need. What are the positive and negative effects of consumerism?

In this day and age, some companies often invent their revenues in millions in advertisement on social media. Although customers do not need these products, they may change their mind after watching these adverts. This essay will explore both positive and negative impacts on consumerism.

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