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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?

Recessions provoke poverty increasing in whole over the world that result to charities try to collect money to help poor people. It seems to me that participating in charities will have astonishing effects on society, and I will explain why in this essay.

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Learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English. Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and if so how?

Majority of society believes that learning English at school is more crucial than learning mother tongue language. However, if children are not taught native language it could easily be in danger to extinct. I believe, studying English for everyone is equally important as ensuring the existence of mother tongue language. In the essay I will give reasons and expand my opinion.

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People say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

There is no doubt that work play a key role in the way people lead their lives. While some people say that success is the 10 percent of skill and 90 percent hard study. I completely agree with this statement.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

While most of the museums collect money from people for entry, others become free of charge. In this essay, both the merits and vulnerable points of collecting admission fee will be discussed while adding my own opinions.

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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that government should spend public money on saving these languages, While others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There are several languages which are in risk of disappearing from the world due to lack of use by people. Some people argue that governments should financially support to save these languages whereas others think that it is a waste of money. I believe protecting dialects which are in danger is important, I disagree governments should allocate money for this. This essay will discuss both these viewpoints.

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The student who study from the school to university get benefit less and contribute less too, than those of student who go to travel or job and get skills and experience before going high. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people hold a belief that pupils who start their careers early can create more opportunities to gain experience and knowledge than those who continue to focus on their studies. I agree with this because people who have great skills and experience are overrated by recruiters and help they find out what they love.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion ?

Someone argues that job markets are doomed to be dominated by artificial intelligence in the future. In my opinion, despite the high efficiency and low cost of automation, there will still be some careers that cannot be simply replaced by robots.

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Nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is it the case? Do you agree/disagree with this view?

With the increase of social competition, more and more human resource managers (HRM) prefer job applicants with advanced educational background. This phenomenon implies that academic qualifications become more important than that personal. In the following contents, reasons will be illustrated and opinion will be stated.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking risks can bring the number of good occasion for us in our personal life or work.

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Competitiveness is a positive quality for people to have among most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

Human nature of competing with others is considered to be a special trait which brings positive effects to our communities. In this essay I will focus on the mechanism of competitiveness influence people and bring out my perspective toward this development.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some says that the construction on railway system should be invested more than roads by the government. I partially agree with this idea. With the truth that railway is on behalf of public transportation, the more public transportation was built the less pollution will be made by traffic. However, road construction also brings positive side to the community.

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In most countries prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law To what extend do you agree or disagree

without proper correction facilities. It's a system that we have been following since civilization and still has its relevance in the present scenario. Recently some people are demanding a prison-free system, they argue that educating the law brakers will be the better solution than imprisonment. I agree with this statement to some extent.

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Many people believe that it’s better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

Numerous people suggest that in terms of learning it is a great strategy to study in a team compare with studying alone. I totally agree with this statement for three reasons.

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Many people use social media to keep in touch with other people and for news events. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, latest information is conducted on social medias such as Facebook with their rapid developments. Instead of traditional methods, people prefer to use them as the way to obtain new information. From my perspective, in general, more advantages occur.

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Some people believe that salary is the most important thing in a job. Others say the job itself is most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

Nowadays, the most significant factor of a job has been the topical subject of debate. In this regards, the opinions of the public is divided over wheather a salary is the most the important thing or job itself is. In this essay, I will explore the rationale behind of this trend and conclude that achieving a goal through the job is the atmost valuable factor.

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Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercises and sport ,more time with family and freinds,whereas now many suffer loniness and health problems. what are the cause of this and what are the solutions?

Studies confirm that eldery people used to be more healthier as well as happier as a result of having more family times and doing more sports. However, the majority of old people are suffering from disease and being lonely. This essay discusses why this is happening and also explores the measures which can be taken to tackle these problems.

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Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

The temperature is about 28-celsius degrees, and the moisture is high. I have been living there for 28 years. My parent came there in 1994 when I was 2 years old. They bring me up there. It is a small town, called Kon Tum. It was separated from Gia Lai-Kon Tum province in 1992. It is located in the mountainous area, next to the Combodia and Laos borderline. Thanks to a lot of forest around, its atmosphere is very fresh, while the weather is cool all year. Residents is friendly, honest, generous, and happy. I love to learn about internal medicine and physiology. Well, when I finished high school, I really did not know which university I want to study at. My parents and my brothers chose this university for me. I work for a private hospital, I graduated medical doctor 6 years ago. I worked for some hospitals, both private and public ones. It is my fourth hospital. I think Hoa is the most common name. When i was in high school, there were many friends named Hoa. Well in my co...

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There has been a dispute to whether kids raised up in a normal economic family can perform better in coping with problems of adult life than those cultured in a rich one. In my own opinion, this is true as the former ones can be more independent and creative.

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some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries has a positive affect; others say it could contribute to a loss of the country's identities. Do you agree or disagree

Booming business and cultural interaction within nations bring more benefits as believed by some sections of society; the rest of them think that this phenomenon damages the basic identity of native countries. I completely agree with the former opinion and will validate my view in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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You can get up-to-date news from the radio, TV and the Internet. Which kind of media do you think is the best to get the news?

In this modern era , technology involves in all sectors such as newspapers , radio , television and the internet so many people get global information from these platforms. In this , the essay I would explain which source is best for the community.

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