IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 130

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

band

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

From a young age, children must be able to differentiate what is correct from what is wrong. Punishments are neccessary to be implemented, but it should not be the sole reason that they are doing the right thing. Children should do and support what is right because they know that that is right.

band

Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What are the main causes of global warming, and what measures can individuals and governments take to tackle this issue.

Global warming is seen as the environmental hazard. Human activity that actively produced carbon has caused rising in earth temperature and mainly become the reason why it is getting warmer. Government measure to propell the human activity to be more environmentally friendly can be a way to tackle this issue.

band

It is a common aspiration among people to run their own business, rather that work for an employer. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

With the rapid development of the times, the employment problem of young people is one of the most headache-inducing issues existing in society. Everyone has different aspirations and ambitions, which fosters them to choose different ways of living. Some people will choose to work for others, while another part of people choose to start their own businesses.

band

Some people believe that using a bicycle as main from of transportation has a lot of advantages, whereas others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is an undeniable fact that bicycles are one of the oldest forms of transportation . Many people argue that the bicycle is an effective mode of transportation while others are against this statement . I intend to discuss both views.

band

Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

A lot of employed individuals are diagnosed with health issues because of lack of exercise especially during the working day or in their leisure time. These is the growing concern of many people nowadays, which have to solved.

band

Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while other consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and you opinion.

In today's modern era, majority of the folks prefer to move and settle in foriegn countries which are developed. Individuals, couples as well as families prefer to settle down in more developed nations. no doubt it is beneficial for them but sometimes children find it very hard to adjust and adapt the changes so they go through a lot while this transition as well.

band

Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, an increasing number of people have migrated from their hometowns to bigger cities for seeking employments. Some people agree with this action, however, others may not on the same wavelength. From my perspective, I would contend that the disadvantages outweigh the benefits of moving away from these employees’ intimate folks and friends.

band

some people believe that the only important thing in life is his or her work. without a successful career, life is meaningless. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

The statement refers to how some people wonder that having a successful career and being work oriented is the ultimate goal of life, lack of which undoubtedly leaves life to be meaningless. Indeed, some seem to have such a mindset, whereas, there are also those who consider work to be of less value than life itself. I disagree with the statement, and the essay will provide reasons with supporting examples.

band

Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or oragnisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Currently, people prefer to own their own business rather than working for someone else. It is argued that being our own boss can be beneficial. However, there are a few disadvantages. This essay aims to explain both views.

band

These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is irrefutable true that people are migrating from those places,where they spent their childhood period because of numerous reasons such as career opportunities as well as a better lifestyle.According to me,the above statement has paramount benefits instead of its demerits in the form of career establishment, luxurious lifestyle.

band

•In some countries, school violence is becoming too common. What are some possible causes of this trend and solutions to it?

It is widely acknowledged that the issue of school violence is too general in contemporary nations and is growing at a startling rate. The problem is bringing a state of depression among the multitudes and in education. This paragraph will represent the possible grounds of this problem, and potential remedies are also to be discussed and are listed below.

band

In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

Most people believe that the shopping could identify as a hobby rather than usual routine task as it was in the past. I completely agree that this tendency has more disadvantages than advantages, because these acts can cause in people addiction and financial problems.

band

In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, some of the people attend professional trainings rather than go to a university. Having less network and lack of opportunity for learning deeply is one of the most crucial drawbacks of specific courses; however, people can reach their target easily in workshops. The drawbacks of the enrolling workshops instead of universities outweight the benefits of it.

band

Sone people think that newsapers are the best media to learn and get information from while others believe that the internet is a better source. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that learning has many sources to do. While it is a commonly held belief that learning from the newspaper is more beneficial, there is also an argument that getting information is better. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

band

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that changing is crucial for everyone to improve our mindset. While it is a commonly held belief that some people like to spend their lives do same thing and Prevent the concept of change ,there is also an argument that other people, believe the change is usually a significant thing. This essay essay will analyze this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

band

Some people say that having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals claim that sacrificing leisure time to earn more money has more benefits than earning less money for having more rest time. Personally, I partly agree with this statement that people should be balanced between two aspects instead of excessive focus on a particular part of this point of view.

band

In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing high speed railway lines for inter-city travel. Others believe this money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries, there is a current debate about the best use of public money for transportation. Some people think that building high speed train lines between cities is important, while others believe that the money should be used to improve an existing public transport system. Both opinions have good reason, and this essay will look at each view.

band

Some people think that competition at work,at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more,rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As the contemporary world developed, the debate between competition and cooperation is a pivotal decision. Although some individuals indicate that competition can have some positive impact in peoples’ life, i believe that the benefit of collaboration fur outweigh the competition.

band

Some children spend hours every day on smartphones? Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There are several advantages of using phones as well as disadvantages. modern technologies can impact children’s brain health. However children are already addicted to smartphones. Although children have a lot of interests in their life, they prefer to spend much of their free time to using phones. Therefore many parents have to care their children’s lifestyle

band

Students hand writing quality is lower than any other times. In your opinion, what are the reasons? And what can be done to overcome this issue ?

There is no denying the fact that the students hand writing quality are reduced more than ever and there is lots of evidence that could make this issue happen. While it is commonly held belief that writing is one of the important things that the students learn it in school. There is also an argument opposing that, in my opinion i consider that writing nowadays is less important than it used to be.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.