IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 128

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some college freshmen find that the subjects they choose are not suitable for them. What are the causes for this? What can be done to solve the problems. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some students in college have a wide awakening of the fact that the subjects they are already studying are not meant for them. This is so because they read a subject to pass it, they also want to please their parents and finally they are not knowledgeable. This essay will also give solutions and to the problems.

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Curiosity can be seen in many ways. Please share an example of how you have demonstrated curiosity and how that has influenced your growth.

As I mentioned earlier, when I was in the school era, I sell things that were trending at that time. Not only that, in the college era, I was working as an intern for 5 times. Starting from being a marketing team in a startup, project management, sales and business development, and the last one as a management consultant. Outside interning in some companies, I like to learn new things that are far from my specialization, such as coding classes and I found that I didn’t enjoy coding that much. From knowing that, I was satisfied enough because at least I know that coding is not my thing, so I can focus on my strengths. I kept tryring to find which specialization that suits me the most. Try another one and keep looking and trying new things. Luckily, later I realize that I actually like understanding every aspect, not in a deeper level, but I can connect the dots between all of it. As the more I understand myself, I can be more selective on which specialization that I want to focus on....

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Please reflect on how your experiences have influenced your career choices and aspirations and the impact you will have on the businesses, organizations, and communities you plan to serve.

Since elementary school, I used to sell accessories and stickers to my friends and it kept going until I got into junior high school, high school, and college. I sell things that were trending at that time. I always look for opportunities that might be a good way to get money. Moreover, My Dad was also a full-time entrepreneur since I was 14 y.o. Unfortunately, his business bankrupt 8 years later. It just makes me feel curious why his business failed. I was thinking that he might offer not a product market fit or as simple as he was not really passionated on his business. Until, when I still on 5th term on college, exactly when pandemic hits us, I found people tend to use Zoom and subscribe Zoom monthly on Zoom's website, because the minimum subscribe is monthly, but in fact, they only used it like 2 or 3 times in a month. So, I offer a service to people that they can rent Zoom in daily or even hourly rate and it will be more effective and save their money. I have been 4 years on ...

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today’s society, there are contrasting views on whether people should focus more on cooperating or competing with one another. In my opinion, cooperation can lead to better results.

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More and more people are working from rather than at the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days many individuals work from home and it is debated among the people whether it provides a upside or psychological factor to the households and the employee. I believe that work from home provide benefits and I will explain in detail in the following paragraph.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their fee time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments both sides, and say which side you personally support.

Nowadays, many agree with the fact that the younger generations should devote as much of their time to their relatives. While some argue that this can be benefitial, others find it to have a negative effect on a child's well-being. The purpose of this essay is to provide arguments and illustrate why I personally believe, that children should not spend all their leisure time surrounded only by close family members.

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At the present time, thepopulation of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

It is certainly true that some countries have a majority of youngs than old people. However not all the effects of this innovation have been positive, although, it has certainly some advantages.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside this vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driverless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

There is the long-standing debate about whether in future driverless cars will be more appreciated and exceeding current vehicles in every side. Whereas some believe that this practice would bring more metrics, others, including me, believe that this change would lead to some serious demetrics as job losses and vulnerable system, which could be hacked.

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Over the last few decades, the media has promoted the image of young thin women as being ideal. What problems has this caused? What solutions can you suggest for this issue?

In recent years, the media has been developing as a vehicle to connect people with each other and also to propagandize information. The image of young thin women is promoted as an ideal image for women to pursue. This problem can cause shaming in everybody's minds about women. In my opinion, the solutions of education is the best way to diminish this phenomenon.

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Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Some people believe that places that are guaranteed for people should be important, while others prefer those places used for economic purposes and building. I agree with the first state, even though building new apartments would improve the economy, parks are built in healthy environments and give us a chance to raise our children in the safest place.

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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In the contemporary world, professional dress codes have been introduced in various organisations. Although instructing staff to wear uniforms may increase the level of trusts from potential customers, I think the disadvantages outweigh the benefits as it would tremendously affect staff’s performance.

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Nowadays the government are investing more in public transport including buses and train than in building new roads. What are the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development.

In today's contemporary world , globalization is increasing significantly; the government agencies are more incline towards improving the modes of public transportation instead of improving and constructing new roadways . This essay will briefly explain some aspects of the former and the latter along with some instances to justify whether it's beneficial or not in context with developement prospective .

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More and more people are working from rather than at the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that offline teaching will be substituted by artificial intelligence in near future. I disagree with this statement because every student is different thus requires individual approach. The other way of study that meets this requirement is using online courses preferably with curator.

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These days, a majority of animals are kept in zoos in order to save them from becoming extinct. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays many species of animals are endangered and this makes authorities take measures in order to save them. That's why a huge number of animals are now found in zoos. From my perspective, this case faces two sides.

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University education system is one of the most widely discussed topics these days. Many people believe that college students should be allowed to choose subjects they like to study. Others think that it is always better to learn subjects that have relevance in the future. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The tertiary education has always been a debated topic. On one hand, some individuals believe that is more advantadgeous for students to select their own subjects, meanwhile, others believe that is better to have some basics topics that have importance in their curriculum mesh. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualifications. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are different views on whether higher education students should put all of their concentration on their major or they can learn other subjects simultenously. While there is no limit on knowledge exploration, I believe it is much more efficient if college students only focus on their main subjects.

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A rise in childhood obesity is a real threat to health with an increasing number of children now classified as overweight. What are the causes of the problem and what measures can be taken to solve them? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge of experience.

There is no doubt that these days childhood health becomes a very interested topic in many countries. However,childhood obesity considered one of the most controversial issue today.In this essay I am going to explain the causes and effects of this phenomenon and I will give some solutions to avoid from increasing this problem.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Befor college, many young people are advised that, take a year for travelling or working. This essay will argue the cos and pros for taking a year after high school. This essay will estimate that acquire experience about the world and the life, but it may be inhibition the incentive for studying.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Newspapers turn into an outdated sources of information, in the opposite the internet comes to be significantly fashionable. I agree with this claim because electronic news are more up to date compared to the printed ones. Furthermore, access to the web is cheaper and easier than to the press.

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Some people believe that if police force carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s society, there are many violent cases which caused many concerns. Some people argue that if guns are carried by the police force, it will encourage an increased level of violence. From my perspective I disagree with this statement.

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