IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 127

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam.’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the past thirty years there is a sharp raise of private transport, particularly of cars. Therefore, the biggest part of cities around the world becomes to “one huge traffic jam”. This statement is absolutely true. I am going to write my point of view in the essay.

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Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet. They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individual belives that government should promote devices to unemployed people because it can positively affect the reduction of unemployed rate. I personally support this thought . So let's discuss my agreed extention ahead.

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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do anything. Others believe that men and women are not equal and therefore are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, the gender equality has become a topic of considerable debate. Some people argue that women can do everything because males and females are equal, while others point out that they are not the same and females are unable to do some occupations. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that there is no gender equality becasue of the anatomical structure and females can not do certain jobs.

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Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculum. Others think that it is not essential for students. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Some individuals are of the view that educating people on being a good mother or father should be part of the learning curriculum while others believe that this is not vital. This essay will discuss both views. My opinion seconds this statement.

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Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this How can this problem be overcome

Quite a number of people find balancing their job and other parts of their lives difficult. This essay will give reasons and solutions for this problem.

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Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympics is a waste of maney and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The Olympic Games take place in four years. It is a great opportunity to bring other nations to this event to make it more compatible. I strongly agree that this kind of event is exciting.

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Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree? #people #idea

In contemprary era, work has become integral part of life for society, not only just because of the need of money it just realtion that they maked with their proffesions ,due to this aspect some people claims that older people should keep working if they are able to do so. yes ,without a doubt i totally agree as they brings experience and culture values which gives growth to both society and companies.

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Some people think university education is important for getting a job while others believe it is more important to have experience and soft skills. discuss both sides and give your own opinion

There are different opinions regarding the university education, more specifically there are two groups of people with opposite thoughts. The first group believes that university education is very important for getting a good job, while other group thinks that experience and soft skills are more fundamental then all types of education.

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Some countries invest in specialized sports facilities for top athletes but not for average people. Is it a negative or positive statement.

In some parts of the world they tailored in sports utilities for champion athletes but not for normal humans. In my opinion, it is a negative statement. The government should not spend their all finances because there are not only sports centers in need of citizens but also they need other services including health insurance, learning centers for students,and local transportation improvements.

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informal letter invitation to a friend for themed dinner.

I hope you are doing well! I’m writing to invite you to a special dinner that I’m organizing for my husband’s birthday. We are going to celebrate with a Vietnam-themed evening and it would be great if you could join us!

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Some people believe that radio is the best source to get news while other think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Ones believe that radio is the best source to receive news while other opinion is that television is better for this purpose. Both channels have its advantages, as well as disadvantages. Moreover, it greatly depends on individual preferences. Both views will be discussed in more detailed below.

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Some people think that government should not give international aid since they have disadvantages people like unemployment and homeless in their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since a country have unemployment and homeless people, some people says that government should not send any international aid. I am totally disagree with this argument, because every countries should help each other. Every nation has two kind of businesess which inside of their own country and outside of their country. These two types of businessess is a challenges of every nation, and every governemnt have to overcome every challenges.

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Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree?

In many societies, whether the people should continue working in their old age is a hot topic of debate. Some argue that individuals should retire to enjoy their final golden years, while others believe that continuing to work is beneficial. I agree with the idea of being an old workforce in the labour market.

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It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people hold the view that governments sector should focus on domestic issues and neglect the global problems. I partly agree that governments should prioritize solve domestic issues, but we should also contribute some power to the question of global destiny.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend.

It has said that the day off should be added on the weekend and people could have be more free time. I definitely, I agree with this idea.

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Some food travels long distance from the producers to the consumers. Some people believe that it is better for the environment and economy if people only buy food produced by local farmers. Do you think the advantages of this idea would outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, quite many food is brought a long distance from the producers to the consumers. It is a belief that it is better for the environment as well as for the economy if people only buy locally produced food.

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Some people say that advertising encourages people to buy things they do not need. Others say that advertisements are important sources of information about new products. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is true that people have distinc views when it comes to advertisements. They sometimes can help us make better decisions or they make us buy things we don't even want to.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? And how can people research this?

People learning about the history of the architecture they live in is becoming common in some nations. This essay will discuss the reason and the possible method for this trend.

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Eating too much sugar is harmful for our health. Some people think it is government responsibility to limit people's sugar consumption, while others think it is an individual's responsibility to limit the amount of suger they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Number of consuming of sugar is increasing day one day and that affects our health, even though can lead to health problems. Some societies say that the government should be responsible for limiting people's how much sugar they use while other parts of society think that it is our problem to manage our sugar consumption. In my view, the number of using sugar is totally our responsibility. We are going to discuss two views.

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May people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life , whereas others prefer to c h a n g e the type of work. Discuss both sides and state your own opinion.

In this fast-paced life, many of them likes work in the same companey for their whole life, however, few of them likes to work in a various companey in order to enhance their experties and gain more experience in one field. If pondered, I personally agree with the latter opinion. My view is justified in further paragraphs.

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