IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 126

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. Meditate on the causes and suggest possible solutions to this problem!

A great number of criminals commit an offense as soon as they are being released from prison. In my opinion there are few variants that cause this patterns. The aim of this essay is to list these causes and come with possible solutions to the said issues.

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Many people believe that healthy eating and the importance of healthy food should be taught in schools. Others say that parents should teach their children about healthy food and diet. Discuss both and give your opinion with relevant examples.

Healthy eating and the significance of healthy food should be taught in schools is tought by some people while others think that it is parents responsibility to teach their child to eat healthy.

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These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting events and festivals. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, sustain individuals invest a lot of assets on tickets to go to sporting event and occasions. Although some might consider it negative; however, I believe it to be extremely beneficial. Not only because of economic growth but also because of incline in jobs. This essay will explore how these mega advantages have the potential to overshadow any drawbacks.

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Radio will no longer be able to hold its presence, as television and internet media will replace it very soon. Do you agree or disagree?

In the technology-savvy world, because of the advancement of technology, more and more people are choosing TV and social media instead of radio. If questioned, I firmly bolster with this notion. My justification is elaborated further.

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modern lifestyles have led to an increase in stress levels among people. what are the causes and effects of this issue?

In our contemporary world, stress has become a major issue worldwide, affecting individuals' and psychical health as well as communities. this essay will discuss the main causes of this issue to demonstrate the severe impact of stress in our modern lives.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In certain countries, some people have a very high earnings. While several people belief that the cases good for the country, but to others, including myself, think that there should be any government regulation to control the amount of salaries. In a positive way, country gets the benefit from the high tax revenue. However, if the condition goes for a long period, it creates social gap.

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Nowadays, people in most countries decide to have a children later in life. Why do they do so? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Having children later on married stage is a contentious issue debate in many countries across the world. This essay agree that benefits of this phenomenon outweigh the drawbacks regarding to financial stability and mental readiness.

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Some people believe that studying literature is important for individual character building while oahers think it is o waste of time. Discuss both point of view and provide Your own opinion.

The study literature is a contentious issue debate, whereas some people think that its a crucial for individual development. However, others say its waste of time. this essue will examine some key of points of both 2 different views and outline my view.

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It is predicted that with the development of technology, people in the 21st century will have much more free time. To what extent has the prediction come true? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

There are the valid reasons to support the prediction of having more free time in humanity in the 21st century, due to the advanced develpment of technology.

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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views anf give your opinion

Some people believe that children should start school at an early age, however, others believe that children should start schooling when they are older. While an early start of school helps children to start their studies early, I personally believe that children should start school when they get older because it allows them to enjoy their childhood.

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Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. What are the causes of this problem? What measures can be taken to solve this?

Always, it is produced food waste of more than million of tons throughout the world. This issue has caused huge problems that it goes back to several causes. This essay will delve into causes and give solutions for dealing with this obstacle.

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Mobile phones and the Internet could have many benefits for old people. However, this age group uses technology the least. What are the benefits for old people using mobile phones and the Internet? How can we encourage them to use this technology?

In modern discourse, the issue of mobile phones and internet usage by elder citizens has attracted widespread interest, particularly highlighting the phenomenon of their seldom use of this modern technology. This essay examines the underlying benefits and presents practical solutions.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

There are two kinds of people based on how they chose their career path, rather to keep it for a long time in one path or who like to change it often in many paths. It seems for the people that keep it for just one path in his life has the better working life, but I honestly can not say that it is completely true. I think it depends on what sector of job the people are in, some maybe have the satisfying working life some maybe not.

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In many places of the world, more larger supermarkets are built while smaller local shops are closing down. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to local people?

It is true that hypermarkets were been substituted with tiny local stores. Although, shifting from groceries to department supermarkets poses basic drawbacks, but I think shopping from huge supermarkets have extra benefits due to its products diversity, efficiency and accessibility.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Certain countries experience a staggering inequality condition in wages. While some believe it is good for the economic condition of those countries, some others think that the government need to formulate a policy to reduce the income gap between citizens. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and put foward my own argument in this issue.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workspace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

These days, there is ongoing debate regarding the function of a university. In consequence, opinions are divided, some sections of society hold an idea that must give access to students' ability regardless of the course, whereas others consider that future professionals must offer skills and acquaintance in the industry. I absolutely agree with this latter point and this essay contains my main reasons.

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It is now possible to order almost any item over the Internet and have it delivered to one’s home. As a result, people are no longer patient or careful in their shopping habits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Online purchasing through the internet and shipping to the destination leads to bad shopping habits. While some argue online shopping leads to impatience, I believe it offers significant benefits in terms of convenience and competitive pricing.

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Computers and A.I. technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

These days, computers and artificial intelligence are increasingly being used for online education. I personally believe that artificial intelligence can enhance the learning experience because it helps with learning, however, it is a negative development because it actually minimizes the true purpose of education.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Around the world there are a millions of people spending most of their time at work, that is why job satisfaction plays a crucial part in an adult's well-being. Some factors that can contribute to job satisfaction is a friendly environment and some additional perks like an insurance and discounts. Also, in my view, it is quite unrealistic to expect each worker being happy with a job.

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Technological developments leads to lots of environmental issues. Some people think a simple life style can preserve the environment. While others argue technology itself can solve it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that the improvement in technology may damage the environment, while others do not agree with this opinion that technology can protect the nature. However, while some believe that machines have an huge impact on cleaning the environment, I agree with those who think it has detrimental effect on surroundings.

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