IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 126

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays children play computer games for long hours. They do not play old traditional games. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think it influences children in a good or bad way?

Today children spend far too much time of their day, playing computer games .Instead of playing old-fashioned games.

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Some people think that the high sales of products reflect the power of advertising instead of the consumers' demand. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It's undoubtedly true that we live in a world dominated by advertisement. Adverts the everywhere on TV, smart phone and at public events. However, some individuals argue that consumers are buying the product because of adverts while others are rejecting this notion. I will elaborate in more detail on both views and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Essay topics: In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college , University or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

Family plays crucial role in human's physical, mental and emotional growth. Living with family has been popularized during the last decades. In many countries, more than 50 percernt adult likes to live with their parents after passing maturity age. This situation has both merits and demerits but definitely the merits outweigh the demerits. In the following paragraphs, I shell put forth my arguments to support my views.

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Many of today’s most urgent problems can only be solved through international cooperation.

Nowadays, there are too many crucial problems which can only be solved through international cooperation. That is why, it is extremely important to each country to have much international links.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, smartphones are so popular. Also, this affected to children’s habits. Most of children use smartphone everyday. They spend many times for surfing on the internet. I think this development is completely harmfull and influence people, and specially kids.

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Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government action can solve this problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Severe social consequences can be caused by a shortage of housing in large urban areas. A number of individuals hold the view that only government action can solve this issue. I agree to a certain extent with the statement given. Throughout the following paragraphs, not only government tackle but also both public and private sectors tackle will be examined.

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The best way to improve children’s life is fathers and mothers attending course for parenting and child development.

Better lives children come from better parenting skills. In fact, I strongly agree with those who feel that mothers and fathers should attend parenting courses to improve their parenting skills.

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Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligence than human beings. While some see this as a positive development others worry about the negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some researchers think that technology will be more intelligent than the human beings in the near future. While some individuals think consider it as a positive development in case of getting prompt solutions, put less efforts and of course increase the productivity of the company whereas others think that this trend may hault the economic growth, increase the reliability and having technical faults may put the life of human beings is in danger. For me, a balanced prospective should be consider and valuable by recognizing the benefits of computer intelligence and by careful management of this technology.

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In the past, when student did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these developments? You should use your own idea,knowledge and experience

In previous epoches, learn their preferred to study in their own area for graduating and university. however, these days student have more choices to study foreign country. My perspective is nowadays there are a lot of opportunity for students for improving their knowledge. Through studying abroad. They can find better situation or maybe better major for themselves.

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In the age of digital communication and social media,face-to-face interactions are becoming less common.Some people think that this is decreasing people's ability to communicate well in person. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

Advancement in internet have formed a lot of social media plaforms for the people to interact. However people consider these as problem since these can affect the communication of people when they meet someone, in-person. Whereas I disagree with this statement and I will discuss reasons for this in upcoming paragraphs.

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All students ought to study art and music in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education plays a crucial parts of people's lives. Nowadays, many school required their students to study art and music, while many parents consider it as a useless things that wasting time. Nevertheless, I would say that studying art and music in school are completely beneficial for students for some reason that are set out below.

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Some people think that children are having too much free time and this time should be used to study more. To what extent do you agree with this statement

Youngsters can be seen having a lot of spare time these days, hence many people suggest that they should be encouraged to invest extra hours on the education. Whereas, I partially agree with this statement and I believe that extra hours should also be used for playing and the development of other significant skills. I will discuss regarding this in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some disagree to make a progress by working as a team. Because they believe that disjoints which occur during group project could worsen the output. However, I don’t approve of this opinion. Because there are more good points than drawbacks, such as earning great ideas otherwise we think together.

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Across the world, local shops are closing due to losing customers to online competitors. What problems does this produce? And what solutions can you suggest to overcome them?

here has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether online shops are causing local ones to close due to the fact that they are losing customers. In this essay, I will explain why.

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Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.

Nowadays, most parents spend most of the day working and do not have time to care for their children. Some parents give their children to their grandparents to take care of them. However, this causes problems in the proper upbringing of children. Because we know that grandparents always give their grandchildren what they want. Things that are forbidden at home are not forbidden at your grandparents' house. Accordingly, children always try to stay away from home and want to stay at their grandparents' house, where everything they want is done. This has a negative effect on the growing and upbringing of the child. Preschool is best for children. First of all, there are many activities for children's development in preschool. They have few peers around them, and this has a positive effect on the child's development. In this way, the child will have the ability to communication easily. Some parents are worried when sending their children to preschool because they don't know what kind o...

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Some people think that public libraries are not necessary, whereas others believe that they are essential for people. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

The public libraries are important for avid readers. Few Individuals believe that it is not effective while some argue that it is more Important for them. In my opinion,general librariers provide a peaceful environment for readers and students who wanted concentrate on their studies or to those who are crazy book lovers. This essay will discuss both the viewpoint in detail.

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Some cities, public parks and open spaces are changed to the garden for local people to gow their own fruit and vegetables.Do you think it benefits move then disadvantages?

In few cities have started to change the public parks and open areas to gardens , letting people can grow the food , such as fruits and vegetables. I think this idea will cause out great benefit than the disadvantages.

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some cities , public parks and pen spaces changed to garden for local people to grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do you think is benefits more than disantages?

In few cities have start to change the public parks and open areas to gardens , let people can grow the food , such as fruit and vegetables. I think this idea will cause out great benefit than the disadvantages.

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Some people think that the government should invest more in education, while others believe that investment in infrastructure should be prioritized. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The debate over whether government should invest more in education or infrastructure is going ,while some agrue that funding education is essential invest for building on knowledgeable society .Other belives that investment infrastructure is crucial for economy progress and quality of life. In my opinion, a balanced approach that supports both education and infrastructure would lay a sustainable foundation for future growth

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More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, so there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Nowadays, numerous issues and topics are subject to debate. One such topic is that books and magazines are becoming useless these days, as most of the people are accessing information throuh computer and other electroic devices such a kindle. I completely agree with this statement because in this modern era of technology, accessing information through internet and computers are more quicker and accurate.

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