IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1370

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Crime has become an acute issue today, with the advancement of science and technology the society has become corrupted and, the criminal rate has up surged in a large scale. To tackle this, a section suggests longer prison terms while others believe that alternative measures are the best way to mitigate crimes.

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in a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

government must always balance demand for newer modes of transport, addition to the newer railway linces connect number of countries with new technology and new infrastructure. in my view it better thing to some people, because our cities are developed in modernize, so government should be upgrade the new railway lines.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main cause of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

Committing a crime is one of the horrible evils that still exists in mankind.Any action that is irresponsible and creates unrest in society can be considered a crime.There are many kinds of crime, For example, Hate crime and crimes of vengeance etc.I agree that the crime rate is increasing in the world and I will give my opinion below.

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Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently, in many countries, the age at which people stop paid work tends to be between 55 and 65. In the past, with few people living beyond the age of 80, it was rare for anybody to enjoy more than 20 years of retirement. However nowadays, that figure is much more likely to be 30, or even 40 years. This is often cited as a reason for requiring people to work to a later age.

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Some people think governments should build more train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think building more and wider roads is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, with the development of technology, our society becomes more and more convenient by some transport facilities. Similarly, the problem of traffic jam comes to a popular public topic. Some people agree that it is useful to build some lines of train or subway . While others argue the essence to solve the problem is the build of roads.

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The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing. Why is this? What can be done?

The lack of enough drinkable water have became one of the most serious issues of our society and it eventually might even lead to a global drought. Various reasons have led to this situation, but fortunatly there are some measures we can take to prevent and stop this issue.

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In order to change their appearance people often turn to plastic surgery. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such an approach.

Some people argue that plastic surgery will alter their appearance quickly. Plastic surgery allows people who do not like their appearance to get what they want easily, for example they can alter the shape of lips, make their eyes bigger, or even make the body taller than before. Although the procedure of plastic surgery charges a high price, a lot of people do it every year. Besides it, the beauty standard of certain countries makes this procedure becomes popular and common over the years. However, with a bunch of good things that stated, I still do not agree with the procedure of surgery personally. According to my opinion, this procedure gain a lot of disadvantages, such as the result might be worse than it expected and a lot of bad side-effects after surgery might happen. Here is the explanation :

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Technology is destroying social interactions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It could be describe that many people around the world obsessed to sports. Every year, in many countries has provide international sports events, for instances, Olympic, Asian Games, Sea games, World Cup etc., which is beneficial for the country. However, there has a strong argument from others. This statement has shown both pros and cons as I will discuss and give some personal opinion in this essay below.

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YOUNG PEOPLE DO NOT SPEND THEIR HOLIDAY AND WEEKEND DOING OUTDOOR ACTIVITIES LIKE HIKING AND CLIMBING IN NATURAL ENVIRONMENT. WHY? AND HOW TO ENCOURAGE THEM TO GO OUT?

Sports like hiking and climbing are some of the actions that will help people to stay fit and healthy. These days young individuals prefer spending most of their time with limited physical exercise and continue living a sedentary lifestyle that may lead to serious problems. Spending their leisure time must be spent wisely to live a healthy life. This essay will explain why this happens and what can be done to change it.

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Some people believe government should spend more money in saving languages of few speaker from dying completely. Other think this is a waste of financial resourses. Discuss both view and give opinion.

Languages play a key role to communicate and also for saving our culture. Some people think it is unnecessary to spend funds to retrive dying languages, while others aurge that government should take the responsibility to conserve that languages. In my opinion, I support government should protect these languages from extinction.

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In the past, many male leaders have led our society to conflicts and violence. The world would be better governed and more peaceful if it was ruled by women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is a tremendously controversy heating up a debate whether more peacefulness would have existed around the world if it had been managed by female. In my point of view, i would consider myself as an advocate of this statement.

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Nuclear power is far too dangerous. Therefore, countries should ban its use and concentrate instead on developing alternative sources of energy such as hydroelectric power, wind power, and solar energy.

Radioactive materials, present in nuclear energy are a matter of serious concern. It is harmful, not to environment but also to human being, which results in the ban of the nuclear power by many developing countries. Whereas, sustainable energy is nowadays considered to be an alternative source of energy.

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People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled?

Nowadays individuals who are living in a big urban area having difficulty in their daily routine life . This essay explains the main problems which they are facing and proposes the situation as well as how these problems can resolves .

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to environment . What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

In today’s ,world one of the main significant threats to our environment is global warming . This essay believes that one of the main causes of global warming is harmful gases in the air and suggest decreasing the usage of transport as a viable solution.

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is agured that studies about science should only be authoried and be under the government’s control while individual organizations aren’t allow in. I disagree with this ideaology. I don’t think it is a good idea to let knowledge of science be in the few hands of the high-rank. I see science as global wise matter and it should be everyone’s interest.

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is agured that studies about science should only be authoried under the government’s control while individual organizations aren’t allow in. I disagree with this ideaology. I don’t think it is a good idea to let knowledge of science be in the few hands of the high-rank. I see science as global wise matter and it should be everyone’s interest.

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

While some prefer to discover absolutely new opportunities for their leisure or spending free time, others do not even try to do something unique in their daily life.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Undoubtedly, schools have become a place where children learn the facts of living. In this regard, parenting is one of the controversial topics that requires more knowledge to raise healthy children in the future. Hence, some institutions offer parenthood classes in their curriculum to teach the basics of good parenting. From my standpoint, it is essential that every student know how to take care of children before becoming mother or father.

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Many employees may work at home with the modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers, not the employers. Do you agree or disagree?

The use of computers has become prevalent nowadays, using them for teaching purposes may benefit students a lot. On the other hand, this might cause a lot of problems especially on the learners. I, however, opine that computers should be used at school. This essay will discuss both views at length.

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Some people like to travel to somewhere new and different when they go on holiday, while others prefer familiar places Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to visiting new places?

It is true that many people take a holiday during the year and they book their holiday or have been purchased ticket on holiday earlier but there are cons and pros visiting to a new place together with familiar place.

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