IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1399

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree.

The quality of education in school has increased over the years. The debate is going on for a long on who is more responsible for the fitness of children, schools or parents. In this essay, I am going to discuss how obesity is affecting us, how parents and schools both are responsible for the physical exercise of children and also why I disagree with schools not wasting their valuable time having sports lessons.

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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that adolescence can be a difficult period for both youngsters and their parents. Although some people believe that conflict at this time does more harm than good, I would argue otherwise, the reason being it would play an essential role in turning them into mature.

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Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

Alot of old buildings are protected by law and authority because they play an important role in a nation’s rich history. However, it is thought by some individuals that old complexes, structures and buildings should be demolished to make space for people's living spaces and working place to show dominance of necessity over history. It is clear that protecting old buildings and structures have impacts and effects on the way of modern advancements and progress and should be underestimated.

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Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today.in the interest of the public health ,governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products.do you agree or disagree?

Smoking is a deadly illness to around the world, smokers rate rise day to day tremendously, and thus, serious sickness can expand. However, some think that cigarette should be restricted by the authority and, public health department as well as all tobacco goods too. I strongly agree with this statement and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people beleive that eventually all jobs will be done by artifical robots. What is your opinion?

Artificial robots are progressively replacing humans in the workforce. While it is possible that, all menial jobs will be eventually done by robots, it is unlikely that, jobs that require human contact will be taken over. This essay will discuss why only very few jobs will be carried out by people.

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These days, many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reasons that people prefer organic food? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher prices?

Organic fruits and vegetables cost more than conventional fruits and vegetables but many people are willing to pay the higher price to get the organic ones. In my opinion, it is worth paying more for these organic products because it is natural and safe. Genetically modified fruits and vegetables have more pesticides and chemicals added that could be harmful to our health. The two key reasons why organic products are the best are they have fewer pesticides and more nutrients.

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The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree?Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and local communities?

In the recent times, due to an increasing demand of shoppers and their preferred time to shop, many shop owners have decided to extend their business hours. This new trend has made both negative and positive impact on the local community members and shoppers respectively. This essay will discuss the same in more detail.

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People often argue that every citizens have the right to a free university education apart from their financial status. I firmly agree with this opinion.

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The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency(การกระทำผิดของเยาวชน), arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The cause of the violation and juvenile delinquency usually come from a society and environment. For instance, a group of friends and a family. Because most the kids are spending more age at school but in some situations still have newborns that have been growing up with terrible parents. However, children that have not been taken care of by their mothers were not always become bad community. So , it is not married women’s fault for working for their children most of the day. In this essay, I will argue that many trouble that have been caused by young society weren’t always come from an adult.

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One problem face by almost every larger city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

It is undeniable that traffic jam remains a serious problem especially in nations that show a high population . I think that this issue has several certain causes and there are several effective approaches that should be taken in order to address this issue .

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In many countries, young people are finding it harder and harder to find permanent jobs. Why is this? What can be done to improve the situation?

Recently, young adults are having difficulties in finding long lasting jobs. This essay will explain the reasons for this phenomenon and suggest ways to solve the problem.

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The United Nations recently celebrated its 70th anniversary. What benefits has it brought during this time? Do you think the UN will last another 70 years?

The United Nations, or the UN, was created after World War II, to maintain peace and tranquillity between nations. It has several sister organizations like the World Health Organization. The highest deciding body of the UN is the Security Council with 5 permanent members-USA, Russia, China, France and the United Kingdom. For the past 70 years, the UN has maintained peace in the world and in my opinion, it will last as long as humanity lasts, and not just for another 70 years.

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

Government should fund some projects about preventing health problems because it is more crucial than treating by drugs. In my opinion, I totally agree that the fund of government should be allocated to the prevention of illness. Nevertheless, both sides along with my perspectives linked to the topic will be outlined in the following paragraphs.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rapidly changing environment causes a serious environmental problem affecting our life. People were arguing that individuals can offer less effort for this problem, and governments and large cooperation firms should respond to it. From my perspective, I partly agree, improving the environment is our sense of duty whether is for individuals or authorities and companies.

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in some countries children are often told that can achieve anything if they try hhard enough what are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message

Adults always instill a value to their children that taking a lot of time and effort can reach any task.

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Some people think that couples should live together before getting married to start knowing each other better and see if they are compatible. Others say that because of this tendency people become immoral and only deep emotional attachment makes a durable alliance. What is your opinion?

It is common to see lovers live together before becoming officially husband and wife. However, some said this action would lead to break up only. In my opinion, dwelling together before marriage is not always negative. Additionally, this trend could be promoted and help people make up their mind if they are not sure whether to get married with their partners.

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Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A portion of the society argues that cost airlines give more opportunities for most community worldwide to travel. At the same time, other's in society believe the fact that ,these cost airlines should be removed from the services as they may contribute much to air pollution. Although it is true that these transport can contribute to atmosphere pollution to a certain extent, it is not limited to these budget flights. these budget flights are doing great work for developing countries and contributed much to the tourist industry worldwide. in my opinion , these cheap air flights should be kept.

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At some jobs, employees are allowed to listen to music while they work. What is your opinion of this? Give reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Enjoying music when working is accepted by many countries. Workers can improve their work productivity. Immersing themselves in music helps employee become a more creative people. Also, music is a good means to relieve stress in extreme environments.

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Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

Despite many tertiary students working part time or casual along with their studies, there are many others who think that working before going for higher studies is sensible. From my own perspective, studies coupled with jobs is the best choice as it helps prepare students for professional careers.

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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after seven years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The age at which children should begin school is hotly contested. Some feel that children should commence school before age seven. Others, conversely, claim that education should begin after age seven. Both ideas carry an element of truth, but the second view is more accurate because of juveniles’ physical and cognitive development.

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