IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1398

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some people that most of the higher authorities focused on the economic progress of a country. However, others think that other types of progress are equally important for the developments. Therefore, I reckon that both subjects are equally important for a country.

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Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, a total of representatives of contemporary society deem that people should marry after the age of 21 and such a requirement must be registered in the law. I advocate strongly with the statement of a lagre number of the population and am going to reflect my own view of such issue on this essay.

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Eighteen is the appropriate age for children to finish school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Eighteen is considered to be the right age for finishing school. In my opinion, I believe that it is not only an approriate age but also the right time for many opportunities in both individual and the whole community scale.

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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

In the last 20 years the budget families spend in retail markets has considerably increased around the world. This could be seen as a result that some people do not consider shopping as a domestic task anymore, in fact, it is seen as a leisure activity. This essay completely agrees that this change in people’s perception is beneficial because it brings business opportunities as well as entertainment for the public.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that these days social media has become available amongst all age groups, so sharing personal information is becoming very essay with other people. Definitely, there are plenty of advantages of social media websites. Also, there are a lot of risks if you share your personal information via social media apps. In my opinion, I would argue that the pros of social media outweigh the cons’. Communication is one of the essential pros of social media while electronic crimes are considered one of the dangers. In this essay, I am going to discuss my point of view and draw my personal conclusion.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nurturing children has always been a sensitive topic for discussion. Although some people believe that forcing children do be more competitive will have positive impact on their adulthood, others are of the opinion that teaching them to be co-operative is more practical way. In this essay I will examine both views and elborate why i believe that cometitivness in moderation usually have numerous positive aspects.

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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy for them? Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Certain people believe that having a pet at home is beneficial for kids, although the opinion of others change as it’s considered as unhealthy and harmful for kids. I partially agree with the given statement.

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

At this current juncture, health issues have become an aspect of worry. The best idea to combat medical problems is to take proper prevention instead of visits

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Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves.Some people think that it is good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's world, the controversial topic concerning advertisements never fails to attract public attention. Even most companies are announcing for themselves by sponsoring play. Some people believe that using play for commercial announcements is beneficial, however, others do not agree with them and think that it has some drawbacks. In my opinion, I believe that corporations could gain more if they advertise their products or services through sponsoring sports.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Media coverage gives adverse effect on offspring around the world due to children can influence effortlesssly. More and more think that children are having adverse repercussion by media focus of renowed folks. Therefore, I strongly agree with this statement and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The appropriacy of penalties for different offences has long been a matter of heated debate. While some people hold the view that there is an inverse correlation between sentence lengths and crime rates, I would contend that rather than putting longer prison terms into practice, more effective measures can be taken to deter criminal activities.On the one hand, there are justifications for the widely-held view that tougher prison sentences can lead to substantial reductions in the over...

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QUESTION: There are many ways to find a job: newspaper advertisements, Internet job search Websites, and personal recommendations. What do you think is the best way to find a job? Give reasons or examples to support your opinion.

A variety source of information is available for individuals to apply for jobs, like information from journals, the internet, and private relationships. In my opinion, the best approach for workers to find a job is to use the information displayed on job-hunting websites.

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Nowadays, some people believe that personal values are less important than a person's wealth and appearance. Do you agree or disagree?

A camp of society thinks that a person's wealth and appearance are superior to personal values.I completely disagree with this statement.

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Some people say that the main environmental problems of our time is loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many are of the opinion that the risk of endangered plants and wildlife are the most severe consequences of our worsening environment while others argue that other environmental issues are more important compared to the first one .I would say that both arguments have validity, but I would lean toward the latter.

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Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

Because they are part of a country's history, many historic structures are legally protected. Some people, however, believe that existing buildings should be demolished to make space for new ones since people require homes and workplaces. I personally think that preserving historical buildings is important because of the value of them and old buildings are also part of the culture of the city.

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The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many countries, homosexual marriages are a quite debatable heading. A part of society believes that this kind of weddings have drawbacks for the society while another group reckon, it's one of natural behaviour and homosexuals are entitled to have weddings. Since all human begins are equal in this world, gay marriages also deserved to be legalized, in my opinion. We will discuss further on this topic and exhibit reasons to support my answer.

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Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

History has passed for a long time ago but numerous old buildings after the war still are protected and conserved carefully by the government. However, some people think that we should not keep the buildings because they take up too much places for houses and offices. This essay will list all the importances of maintaining old buildings and history does not bother to the progress.

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People eat more processed food than they did in the past.

People eat more processed food than they did many years ago. This is because the number of fast-foodfood restaurants have increased over the past few decades dramatically and this results in countless health problems.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.

I strongly believe that fossil fuels should be banned because of the emission of CO2 and global warming issues.One of the solution to avoid irreversible global changes is to develop our transport to be completely electric.

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ANIMAL SPECIES ARE BECOMING EXTINCT DUE TO HUMAN ACTIVITIES ON LAND AND IN SEA. DISCUSS THE REASONS AND SOLUTIONS

Over the years, several animal species have become extinct or are facing the threat of extinction. Usually, a species remains for about 1000 years on this planet before becoming extinct, however, this process has accelerated now. There are several deep-rooted reasons forthis, so, let us analyze these in a systematic manner.

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