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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others however say that this would have little effect on the public health and that other measures are required.

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Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in need. Others however prefer to give money to national and international charitable organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There are split opinions regarding this topic. While some segments of society insist that there should be donate directly to those who need some support; however, counterparts of the society Reckon that everybody should prefer to provide some amount of money to larger charity, whether it is international or domestic. Though both has its pros and cons as per everyone's perspective. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both the opinions would be discussed.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a releatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern-day scenario,in some countries,the young population is comparatively larger than their older counterparts.Though there could be some drawbacks,the advantages are considered to outweigh the associated disadvantages.This essay details the above-mentioned statement in the following paragraphs.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, it is becoming a trend to skip a year between high school and college. Some students prefer to take a year off from finishing their high school career to apply to colleges, travel all over the world, and gain real work experience in various businesses.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this fact

Tourism is a primary source of revenue in many parts of the globe, and it can be a cause of serious matters for not being well-handled. This essay will cover both the benefits and the drawbacks.

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Research shows that business meetings, discussions, and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Modern day scenario suggests that most of the formal interactions, debates and employee training are taking place online.While there are some ignorable drawbacks associated with this newly developed business practice,the advantages do outweigh the disadvantages.This essay details the reasons in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries people do not recycle waste materials such as bottles and newspapers.What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve the problem?

In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve the problem?

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Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre school age. Others working parents think that family members such as grandparents are better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Nurturing a child with good moral values is the toughest thing that majority of working parents are encountering these days. This is the reason as to why opinions are divided whether the close relatives or the professionals of childcare are a perfect choice to take care of young ones; however, i tends towards the latter view as they are equipped with better training to handle the upbringing of young ones.

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Nowadays,the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Over the years with technological revolution many sectors of human life has changed, which is clearly reflected on the patterns of communication among mankind. The blessings of science is undeniable but it has its drawbacks too. In the forthcoming paragraphs I will discuss its impact on human relationships.

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Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leavers in most countries How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people today?

Education plays crucial role in every field while unemployment has became very common obstacle for youngsters in manifold countries who are dropped their schooling for some reasons. I completely agree with the above statement and reasons will be explained below along with some major problems which youth is facing at this time.

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Recent research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays,people can use the internet in every place,as a result,individuals work via the internet.Most of the companies arrange their meetings online.It has some benefits and drawbacks.While working online decreases the transportation problems and employers spend less for their offices but it causes some health issues.

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Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Mutual-understanding among the employees play a crucial role in any organisation. However, it is considerded by some people that on work our first prority will be to complete our task with dedication rather than to make personal relationships with the employees at work. I partially agree with this statement which i would like to discuss in upcoming paragraphs.

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

It is a controversial topic that who should give the finance support to the old when they go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. In my opinion, the government should pay for this.

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Some people think that uniform at school is unnecessary and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that wearing a uniform at school is unessential as well as it ought to be prohibited. I strongly believed that uniform has social and ethical significance on children and should be a mandatory part of their education.

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More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, so there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Nowadays, there are several modes available in order to access information. Although printed books, magazines and newspapers provide access to information, many people are of the opinion that they find using computers and electric devices much easier to get the same data. In this essay, I will be stating my opinion that using gadgets is more flexible. There are two primary reasons for this.

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In the future, we will have more and more leisure time as machines will replace many of the tasks we do at home and work now. Discuss the benefits this will bring and also the problem it will cause.

It is undeniable fact that modern technology has changed the global village in every economic and social field. Due to increasing machinery ,items some crowd of the nation get free time and some of them unemploy by modernisation. There are several reasons for this problem, and various solutions could be taken by governments and individuals to overcome this situation.

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Advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent you agree or disagree

Advertising is an important factor for marketing. In recent times children have become a target to influence through advertisement.I agree with the fact that advertising aimed at them

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Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit, but others think there are better ways to improve the safety on city streets.

City street accidents are increaing day by day. To overcome this cause majority of individuals believe that drivers should pay attension towards to maximise their vechile speed while, others opoion is there are lots of other important safety rules and ways to rid this cause. However, i strongly agree that slow speed on avenue can reduce accidents but, others selfty rules can laregely disappear this road crash . in this easy i will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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what are the most significant dreams in your life?

I think it is important to have big dreams and think about the positive aspects of our dreams in life. The most significant dream in my life is to have a company of my own. Another great wish of mine is to have a healthy and peaceful family.

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Studying alone or in a group which one do you prefer and why?

The study is an essential factor for learning and increasing knowledge in any subject, so its importance and attention will lead to progress in life. It is usually done individually or in groups. In my opinion, group study has more advantages than individual learning.

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