IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1411

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Globalization has been around for thousands of years. It goes back to the silk road area, but in recent years it has become more popular due to the advancement of technology and transportation. Therefore, some are arguing that this phenomenon has brought more detrimental effects than advantages. In this essay I will be discussing both views and why I believe that globalization pros outweigh its cons.

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Nowadays more and more older people compete with younger people for the same jobs. What can be the reason for this? What would you suggest as a solution?

In recent decades, in seeking employment, there are more and more tight competitions between the older people with their younger counterparts for the same positions and this trend is bound to continue in the future. This issue may eventually lead to numerous problems and steps should be taken in order to mitigate the related impacts.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion?

Music has always been an indispensible part of our lives and plays an important role in every culture worldwide. Because it exists everywhere, some argue that music is a great means of uniting people from different cultures and overcoming the generation gap. Personally, i cast absolutely no doubt on this opinion.

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With the fast pace of modern life, more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In our today’s hectic world everything has changed into being mechanical and super-fast, there is an influx in number of people who replace fast food to their so-called health food. Although eating fast food can cause some health problems in my opinion having fast food in rush times could be quick and also cheap choice.

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Worker often have to retire at the age of 60 or 65. However, some people say that they should be allowed to continue working for as long as they want. What is your opinion about this?

Doing any kind of sports, constitutes an important sector in many people’s life, as it represents a recreational activity as well as a way of exercise. In general there are group sports, such as basketball, and individual sports, such as running. Many people claim that group sports are more beneficial while others have a different point of view. In this essay I will assess both views and then give an opinion.

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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the learning process from kinder to the highest degrees studies, are depending on computers. Computer operation is a piece of basic knowledge that is an essential thing to know by children since they were primary. On the contrary, due to dependency, there are several risks they will feel for the long term of operating computers. Such as myopia for a long time and migraine while seeing the screen too long.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is so popular trough the entire school, that children still do the bullying. This essay will discuss some of the reasons behind the act and how to overcome it.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Other believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A lot of people in the world consider the feeling of competition should be awoken. However, others believe that working with a partner is the best way to improve Child's experience. I will discuss both of them following paragraph.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people assert that advertising is the effective way to persuade us to buy items, while others claim that advertising does not attract the attention of consumers because of its dissemination. From my perspective, I agree with the former view and this essay will provide the reasoning for my standpoint.

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Some people think that formal education should strert for children as early as possible. While others think that it should no start until 7 years of ages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that children suppose to go to school from early age while there are others who believe that kids shouldn't study in school unless they reach at least 7 years old. I take the view that 5 years old is an aporprate age to begin strudying in school.

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The use of violence in music lyrics, video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies. What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery, and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people?

These days ,most minors play video games ,listen to music and see movies that consist of violence and it is making them worry around the community .We will discuss the most serious problems arising ,and also two ways in which the situation can be improved .

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree (or) disagree?

Now a days, most of the people facing major problem of weight gaining. Few people believe that food items that cause an obesity, if sell them at high cost can resolve this issue. I firmly believe that, by selling the junk food expensive can solve this problem to some extent.

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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The idea of world government is a theory which has been known since the dawn of history. Some people support that a single government could manage all nations. From my perspective, the benefits of a single government far outweigh its disadvantages.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job.On the other hand,Other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays in the contemporary society students aims to get a good degree from a reputed university or college.Whereas, some are tend to self working criteria.Some people believe it is better to have a university degree to get a job to make their life more secure.In my opinion I believe that is true.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading things.Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.give your opinion

It is considered by some that advertising plays an important role in convincing people to purchase items while there are others who think that people are not even conscious about advertisements.Because of their ordinary nature.In my opinion,I believe that advertising is the most efficient way for companies to sell their goods.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Children do many things from birth, and the acts may be correct or incorrect based on the knowledge they possess and their age. Some adults feel that punishment is the right approach to educate toddlers to do everything right, else it will become harder to teach them when grow up. I contradict this statement and provide alternative approaches to harsh penalties in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

Nowadays, there has been rising concern that staying at house or leaving it may cause doubts about security. In this essay, I will explain the reasons of such opinion and try to find solution.

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Some countries have introduced a law to eliminate working hours for employees. Why is this law introduced? Do you think it is a negative or positive development?

Law regulations and policies linked with time spent at work in Several nations has undergo some changes. Evidence show for many having long working hours can be a pressure as long as less amount of time is spent in working places, workers and employees are usually more productive and there is a global shift toward shortening working hours.

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In the past when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development

Recently,students prefer to go other countries for academic study but in the past they used to graduate from own country.In this essay I will talk about the benefits and drawbacks of this condition.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education experts are still seeking a righteous educational system. To that, deputies and teachers are actually debating about whether students should be enforced to follow a full-time education until they become legal adults or not. Personally, I partially believe that undergraduates need to study until the age of 18.

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