IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1410

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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children are currently having extra classes after normal lessons. what are the positive and negative effects? what is your opinion

Parents nowadays always prepare a lot of extracurricular activities for their children such as music and sports classes and foreign language course in their spare time. It is undeniable that equipped children with more skills and abilities can enhance their competitiveness, however, depending on their mental condition and family background, it may not be a good practice.

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Government investment in the visual arts, the kind you commonly see in art galleries, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, many local governments spend large portions of their budget not only on public services, but also on the visual arts. Although I agree that it is important to invest in local amenities, I do not think spending on the visual arts is a waste of money. This essay will discuss this issue using examples to support arguments and demonstrate points. On the one hand, spending a significant amount of the government budget on public services is beneficial for society. Providing for basic amenities, such as hospitals, roads, and schools, helps to determine the quality of life that most citizens will have. For example, studies consistently reveal that countries that spend more on schools have a population that is higher in literacy, compared to those that dedicate no money to education. Therefore, it is apparent that spending on public services is a worthwhile investment for the government. At the same time, visual arts are a form of public service, and hold more value to ...

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The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?

The reduction in the green cover has had a negative effect on earth’s weather conditions. To elaborate, forests help to maintain the temperature of earth. The cutting down of trees at a fast pace for fulfilling human’s greed has created a climatic imbalance and the earth’s average temperature has risen by 2 degree Celsius in the last ten years. One of the biggest consequences of global warming is that our summers are getting hotter and hotter.

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Internet is a great source of information and has opened-up opportunities for all people to learn all over the world. Is all information reliable on the internet? What could be done to control the information online.

In the modern world, the primary source of knowledge is the internet for people of all backgrounds and ages. However, all the data available in the online world is not genuine. The users of electronic data should be aware of this fact and need to develop a skill to filter reliable suggestion from the deluge of information supplied in the net. In this essay, I will discuss why all the advice that pop up on the screen are not true and how we can control the incorrect messages from google.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

With the advancement of ,technology people tend to rely upon many technically advanced equipment, including artificially intelligent robots. However, some people strongly believe that at last all jobs will be done by these things by replacing the human workforce. I believe that even the technical advancement and reliance on robots make our lives easier, we can't completely rely on these things as mankind.

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many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it is bad for them. why? what are the effective ways to improve people's eating habits?

People, regardless of their social class, crave unhealthy foods containing excessive sugar, fat and salt mainly because they look enticing and taste delicious, which therefore triggers the release of certain pleasure-inducing chemicals inside their bodies. There are some reasons for this trend and several solutions will be given in the following essay.

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth of overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

Most crowd are getting serious well-being issues because of increasing statistics of people becoming obese. This essay will mention as the main reason is of not having enough time to cook as people have time before,so people eat fast food more often. This could be solved by adding extra tax to the fast-foodfood restaurants.

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It is true that colour is one of the ways that manufacturers deceive people to sell their products. In my opinion, colour has the key role about people's decision wether positive or negativ

It is true that colour is one of the ways that manufacturers deceive people to sell their products. In my opinion, colour has the key role about people's decision wether positive or negative.

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It is true that more and more people suffer from illness that has been caused by products which contain high amounts of sugar, and it is sometimes argued whether these products should be sold prohibitively expensive to diminish the consumption

It is true that more and more people suffer from illness that has been caused by products which contain high amounts of sugar, and it is sometimes argued whether these products should be sold prohibitively expensive to diminish the consumption. In my opinion, although sugaries may have some side effects on people's health, it would be wrong to force all people to pay them more.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

With the rapid development of the food industry, many manufactured food and drink products that contain high levels of sugar have entered people’s lives. I do not believe that increasing the price of sugary products is an appropriate way to encourage people to lower their sugar intake which some suggest may cause many health problems.

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Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation.

It is true that some famous painters gain huge amount of money, while others are near the poverty limit, and it is sometimes argued that whether government should address this problem or not. I completely agree with the idea that this unfairness should be removed by some specific actions.

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People are becoming famous with the help of TV programmes and the Internet. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Nowaday the internet and TV strongly intergrated to the different sides of life and it is getting easy to be famous. Definitely, to be famous have some advantages and disadvantages , that I would like argue here.

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All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

Nowadays, we live in an advanced and globalized world, knowing that learning an external language could provide numerous opportunities for people in school and working life. Therefore, it has been frequently assumed that children ought to study a second language by the time they start with their primary education. I completely agree with this statement for several reasons, which will be mentioned in this essay.

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Some people believe that giving support to the local community is more favourable than giving it to a charitable organisation. To what extent do you agree?

Charity beings at home, is phrase a lot of people believe in, therefore for such people when the participate in any king of social initiative, They prefer local home grown communites over well recognised charities.In my opinion, We should always promote homegrown initiative first, thereafter if you still want to contribute one could go to an organisation.

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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for a significant period of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits of doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many people are moving to abroad countries either for work or study. There are lots of advantages to shifting foreign countries but also at the same time people who lives in abroad countries faces many difficulties. Advantages and Disadvantages will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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1.Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays we are exposed to many cultures and ways of living due to the growth of technology and globalization. Some people think that a person´s experience is strictly connected with the place they were born. Other´s believe it has a little impact.

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In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. Give your opinion with relevant exxamples..

Migration from rural areas to the larger cities has resulted in an inevitable space deprivation for housing. A great number of suggestions are being provided by experts. Some people have found countryside area as a solution for this condition, while others argue against that. The offerd suggestion has it's own two sides.

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Many mothers stay at home to take care of their family and don't go to work. Some people believe these mothers should be paid by the government. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people claim that mothers who stay at home to take care of their families should get paid by the government. I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries traveled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently people tend to travel to specific countries for pleasure, joy and have fun. That lead individuals claim that it has disadvantages. I completely agree with this statement. In the following paragraph, I will explain the side effects of that.

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree

It is debatable whether research should be carried out by governments or private companies as it holds a major role in the advancement of over life. I absolutely agree with the fact that governments should come forward to play their role in every nation.In this , the essay I am going to defend why do I agree with the given statement.

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