IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1416

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore they need more of these subjects to be included in the timetable. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that students must be taught more lessons like arts, music, drama and creative writing in their official timetable. While I accept that these subjects have multiple benefits, I believe that only the inborn talents should spend more time on them. On the one hand, creative subjects are very beneficial to students. One reason is that these lessons not only nurture a love of art in children but also make them more emotional, which is believed to bring individuals a bright future. In fact, some scientists say that people with a high emotional quotient have a tendency to be more successful in their career. Furthermore, music, painting, drama, etc are kinds of pleasing recreation. They effectively help learners to relieve stress and pressure from academic subjects. On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why we should not set aside more hours to teach arts. Firstly, scheduled lessons have already enhanced both creative ability and academic ability. There...

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many young people today know more about international pop or movie stars than about famous people in the history of their own country .why is this like this?what can be done to increase young peoples'interest in famous people in the history of their country?

Since this century is the era of technology, exchanging of information is simply done in just a scond. Meanwhile, the industry of cinema and music have found a lot of followers in all over the world. Therefore, people can watch other products of different countries which are made by different producers or singers on the Internet. Although this issue can be exciting, some people believe that it can have side effects on their young generation and they can forget their own countries heroes or cultures. In this essay, I am going to explain about this problem and give some solutions about it.

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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are some languages, which are going to be overthrown because the number of people who are speaking these languages are few.

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Some people think that traditional games are better than modern games in helping children develop their abilities. To what extent do you agree?

There is such a deep discussion reloving around society whether modern games can create better opportunities for children to carry further their abilities or does it keep them away from developing their skills. Traditional games such as backgammon and chess have always been the most prominent games that humanity utilised. From my point of view, we should not sacrifice our cultural heritage for modern alternatives. However, both modern and traditional games do aid our youth to upgrade their mindsets.

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Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion

Nowadays, it is become an issue that to make business connections with native countries is positive or negative impact, whereas, many people offenend that change, but some masses welcomed it from their heart. Personally, I feel it is a great step towards the progress of the country.

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The nuclear family is well adapted to moving due to its size. Do you think children benefit in any way from moving? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays it has become very common for nuclear families to move from one place to another in this modern society. Reasons behind vary from family to family. In this essay I will be discussing why I believe that this shift has more pros than cons.

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People should work a fixed number of hours per week and employers should not ask anybody to work extra hours. discuss both of views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the growth of competition, there is a need for people to work extra hours per week and managers should also encourage their team members to invest more time. On the other hand, many humans believe that in order to remain healthy and stressed free they should only work for a fixed number of hours and avoid overtime. This essay will further discuss both perspectives with relevant examples.

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Most Modern Families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause?

Nowadays in many families it's been observed that both parents are working to provide for their household. As a result this has led to many issues. In this essay I will be discussing the main reason for this phenomena and what problems come with it .

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In some countries, people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development?

In nowadays, when the world is become more and more developed, many aspects of human daily life such as economy, service, technology,… are gradually developing as well. But to be like that, in some nations, individuals’ working time are extended. So that this essay will discuss why this can be happened and whether it brought effective or bad growth. And in my view, I’m in its drawback.

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Children should never be educated by their parents at home

Nowadays, many children around the world have to be educated online with the help of their parents. In my opinion, it is difficult for children and their parents, mainly because not all the parents have the qualifications to teach. This is one of the problems in distance learning.

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You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one.

I am writing to let you know about my current job situation, hoping that you can give me some advice. I have decided to leave my current position at the Swaneset group. I have worked there for several years now, and I think I have advanced as far as possible in this association. I would like to work in a larger community where there are more opportunities for advancement.

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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language.

English is known as a global language because of how often it is spoken in different countries that are English speaking and non-english speaking. Although, studying the English language in English speaking countries is a great way to learn the English language there are many other ways to learn it.

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Many people choose to work or live abroad because of the higher standards of living they can find outside their home country. Do you think this brings more advantages or disadvantages to the people who follow this path?

In this modern busy world, the proportion of foreign settlement witnessed a conspicuous increase due to some cogent reasons.A huge community of the population from various nations decide to move overseas because of the greater standards of living, although this decision has its own strengths and weaknesses.However, from my perspective, the benefits of this choice greatly outweigh the drawbacks.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It's going to be common between some nations to have a gap of a year between high school and university. As they can use this gap for working or going abroad for fun. Taking a break between high school and the university has some clear benefits and some drawbacks.

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Older generations often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thought and behaviour. Most people argue that it is not helpful for younger generations to prepare for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Opinions differ about whether traditional methods prepare younger generations for life or is it needless to teach these ideas. Elders have experienced life deeper than we did, and they may sometimes request to guide with their life skills. However, their way and teachings may not fit into our modern-day society. From my point of view, we should be moderate when taking advice from elders; their experience may not suit our age.

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extend you agree or disagree?

Some argue that a fast-wide development of supermarket in some states may cause disadvanteges to local people. The capability of small and local business are minim compare to those supermarkets from national or even interanational coorporation. I do not agree with that statement, because there are many positive impacts of supermarket growth for society, in general, and local communities. I will discuss these below followed by reason and example.

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In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this aﬀects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s world, people have significantly changed the way they are currently living right now, in which this could have some affections towards their relationships with their family. While this phenomenon may bring about some drawbacks, I still consider that they are eclipsed by its benefits. This essay will present the reason for my point of view.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both views and give your opinion

The science relied on many facts and principles were developed by researchers who studied the facts. Sharing information with each other can develop the research in many aspects. However, many societies think sharing the ideas of business or scientific hypothesis makesw some people to steal the principle and attribute it to him and forfeit the right of others. In this, essay we will discuss both points of view and explain why I support sharing information within certain limits.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both views and give your opinion

The science was relied on many facts and principles were developed by researchers who studied the facts. Sharing informations by each others can develops the research in many aspects. However, many people think sharing the ideas of business or scientific hypothesis make some people to stole the principle and attributing it to him and forfeiting the right of others. In this essay we will discuess both points of view and explain why I support to share the informations in certin limits.

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Science tells us that some activities are good for our health, while some others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people all over the world continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is the case and what might be done to change this?

It is the age of globalization. although branch of knowledge provides a various patterns of lifestyles to keep healthy,A number of people acknowledged scientific activities are good for a sound life.However, others believe its not good for health.I firmly believed that modern exercrise is very much vital for sound health.In this ,essay i will examine the reason for these problem and provide possible solutions

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