IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1454

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

A section of society thinks that parents ought to be accountable for their children's regular physical exercises .So that schools would not waste their time by incorporating sports in their curriculum. However, some disagree with this approach. In my opinion , schools should be responsible for children's sports activities as it brings out discipline and makes them relaxed which helps students in their academics .

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Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make greater contributions to society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although it is sometimes thought to pay a high amount of money to professional workers, as they put more efforts for society, others believed that sports and entertainment should be paid more. In my openion, I considered that professional workers should be paid with high salary, but people in the sports and entertainment field should not be neglacted.

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In the modern world today the rate of divorce is rising dramatically in most societies. What are the main reasons for getting divorced? What can be done to solve the issue?

Nowadays dissolution between people is increasing in many countries, especially during the quarantine due to high demand from society participants. There are several major causes which lead to this situation. Fortunately, although rate is dramatically going up, there are ways where family separation issues can be solved. The subject has justified further.

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In most countries people prefer to rent rather than buying them? Write advantage and disadvantages of renting home?

In developing nations, people do not have enough money and most of the population remains economically deprived. This might lead to living them either in a rented home or their personal home. Although, in these countries, people usually prefer to live on rent. It has several pros and cons, and I will discuss both prospective in my forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people work for the same organization all their woking life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss and give your opinion.

Nowadays, some people believe working in only one company in their whole life is the best, while some employees like to work in various organisations. Both of these views will be described in the following paragraphs.

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The main purpose of public libraries should be to provide books. Public libraries should not spend their limited resources on computer software, videos, or DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Providing books for people who want to read in there or to borrow is the basic aim of public libraries. Some think that libraries should not waste income on high-tech media and multimedia facilities. I disagree with this statement and I think that it is significant for libraries to adapt to today's demands

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Some people say smoking should be banned on public places. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

All of us possess certain inborn qualities, like sports, singing, and art, that can assist us to become successful in those domains.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the helth care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem to introduce more physical education lesson in the school curriculem. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Because the increase in the number of the overweight population put a lot of pressure on the healthcare system

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Many young people today know more about international pop or movie stars than about famous people in the history of their own country. Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?

It is true that while numerous youngsters are familiar with international celebrities, their knowledge about the historically crucial people of their nations is small. In this essay, I will discuss a reason behind this situation and the way how to make them interested in historically famous people.

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Some people believe that spending money on developing technology on space exploration is unjustifiable and there are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over how to allocate national coffer effectively. While some hold a statement that technological investment in exploring outerspace should be necessarily made, the opposite claim that spending on other aspects can bring more tremendous benefits. While the former is valid to some extent, I am an advocate of the latter.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently many of couples has decided to have child in older ages. Older parents have more experiences to raising a baby but there is a strong likelihood that a good relationship between them in childhood period will not been established. I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of the issue in this essay.

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some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?

Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding the article that you wrote last week about tourism in Egypt. After reading the article I found that there is a significant number of misleading information that might affect the national income of Egypt in the future. Firstly, you mentioned in the introduction that Egypt has a nice seashore on the Dead Sea, which is wrong because Egypt looks at 2 seas: the Red Sea and the Mediterranean. This was mentioned in the introduction which is the first information the reader gets from your essay, so it will stick to their minds. People usually enjoy the salty water of the Red Sea, and the pleasant sea waves on the Mediterranean. Secondly, your third paragraph mentioned that Isis was initially associated in Sinai Egypt. A piece of information like this one will literally destroy Egypt's reputation in the whole world. It is crucial to fix these statements as soon as possible, because they will affect the number of tourists visiting Egypt each ye...

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should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations

These days wealth disparity is a common phenomenon that polarized world into two poor and wealthy nations. Some people believe that opulence nations should endow through food and education. On the contrary, others believe that the governments of poor country should take care of their citizens themselves. I think by means of both ways poorer nations can experience better treatments. I will give my reasons for this thought below.

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government should spend money on railways rather than roads

Recently, population growth cases increase in transports. People would use various means for their transportation, which includes taxi, metro, bicycle and privet car. As a result, there might be traffic jam and crowded metros. Some people believe that government should invest more on railways rather than road. I personally agree with this view and I will elucidate my reasons in the following.

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Many people today find it difficult to balance the demands of their work and personal life. What are the causes of this situation, and what can individuals and employers do to reduce the problem?

Nowadays, the struggle of keeping work and personal life if balance becomes obvioius for many humans. There are multiple reasons for that, but the ways to minimize the problem exist.

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In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

Rules and regulations are meant for children to teach them to behave in a good manner. Some people are very strict with their kids while others tackle it differntly by letting them do as per their wish. However, I belive that strictness will make children more rebellious.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people work in the same organization for their entire of working life while others believe that moving to different companies is better. This essay will illustrate the two different views of the working styles.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued by few people that, adds are motivate an individuals to purchase unnecessary goods, while other's consider that, it creates awareness among population about new varieties which are beneficial to make lives better. In this essay I will discuss both sides as well as my viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

,well there is a lot of fact behind this recently about the craft subject and works are quite nowadays

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Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

In the age of industrialization and modernization, the people's health seems to be much worse than it used to be in the past, especially the youngsters. And one of the reasons behind is that they find it nearly impossible to maintain a healthy lifestyle. This essay is aimed at talking about it's cause before coming up with some solutions to this obstacle.

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