IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1456

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this day and age, some advocate the view that complicated subjects of nature science should be selected as students' choice. To the best of my knowledge, I strongly disagree with this statement and will outline the reasons below.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Convincing children that hard work makes everything possible is popular in some nations.This message can be advantageous to children as it motivates them and encourages them to chase their dreams.

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Many jobs that used to be done by humans are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

Over the last two or three decades, technology has been occuping every place due to speed and less human work. In the past countless works were done by humans but nowadays this trend is completely changed due to the technology, everywhere is being done my machines instead of men. In my opinion about this this trend has more drawbacks b ecause of increasing unemployment and crime rate increase. This essay discusses briefly in the following reasons.

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Human rights violation is a serious issue today. What rights you think children’s should have? Why?

It is irrefutable that, In the modern era, the usage of cell phones for transactions has steadily increased, mobile phones doing work easy for individuals. However, even though this practice brings about a mixed bag of boon and bane , merits outshine demerits.

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Some observers say that the pocile officers should be recruited from the communities where they work, so that they have local knowledge. Other people say that this is unnecessary, or even undesirable. Where do you stand on this debate? Is local knowledge essential in modern policing?

Undoubtedly, recruitment of officers especially in the administrative jobs like that of police department is very crucial. Some people have their view point that selection in this field has to be according to community where they belong. While, others have notion that selection has to be unbiased and irrespective to people’s localities. Both these viewpoints will be discussed in details before arriving at conclusion.

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Without capital punishment ( the death penalty ) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

With the advances of technologies and the spread of capitalism through society, the differences between social levels have been increased and population lives have equally lost their values, buzzing automatically the cruelty in the whole world. As a fact, the indices for violent crimes has been augmenting over the last decades and some people believe the only solution for this issue could be the death penalty to this kind of evilness.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

In the present day, the consequences of Global warming have become a primary concern in any society. Although some organizations have been working to address this problem, the contribution of people is of paramount importance since we are the responsible for this global crisis. In this context, it is crucial to understand what the causes of this problem are, in order to elaborate proper solutions to overcome them.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that History should be prioritised when it come to school classes while others suggest that Science related subjects are more crucial. This essay will demostates that teaching History in educational instututes can teach the younger generation avoid mistakes made in the past. And then explains importance of the scientific education since it fosters new live-improving innovations.

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Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Taking a year gap between finishing school and starting university in order to gain some work experience or travel somewhere is a very debatable decision as there are some advantages and disadvantages to it which are discussed in below paragraphs.

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Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, young generations are obviously relying on laptops, youtube and mobile phones a lot. There may be differences with the early 1980s and late 1990s who are from that age levels loved to play by person' games and activity than mobile games and internet channels.

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Many children today find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What could you think are the main causes? What are the possible solutions?

Nowadays, children are paying less attention at school than before. There are various reasons behind, hard curriculum, harsh schedule, and mischievous behavior for example. In this essay, I will explain these causes in more detail and try to offer some effective solutions to at least lower this problem.

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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country?

keeping oneself healthy is very important. Just physical fitness is not a defination of a healthyness but being happy too. People should follow regular work out and keep themselves surrounded by positivity in order to stay fit and stressfree.

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Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer.

over the last two or three decades, people taset has been changing an enormously due to the technology advancement. However, some like to stay in warm weather places while others prefer to live in cold areas, This essay discuswses both viewpoints for the following reasons, I prefer to live in a clod place than hot.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Global environmental problems are something that every living being is having to deal with, both in the developing and developed world. Some sections of society, argue that it should be dealt with at a global level, whilst others argue it should be looked into from a national level. However, I believe that this problem should be addressed both, at a global and a national level. In this essay, we shall look at both sides of this coin.

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Some people believe academic success depends mostly on having a good teacher. Others argue that it is the attitude of the student that matters most. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Academics form the most important part of school or college life. Scoring well in those tests and excelling in the chosen subjects is a necessity in today's world. Blessed are the students who are taught by a good teacher. So, I think that academic success can only be achieved if a student's positive attitude is coupled with the teachings of an honest mentor.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile app is becoming increasingly common. Does this development are having more advantages or disadvantages?

In the advanced pace world, online transactions by smartphones are boomed up gradually. Some people think this practice brings about a mixed bag of boon and bane,merits overshine demerits.

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Some people prefer to spend time with their own age group while others like to spend their time with different age groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Humankind understands that friendship is an essential part of our lives; however, choosing a friend is a considerable choice. Several individuals feel comfortable with friends of a similar age, whilst others tend to give their time to older or younger people. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foreign country rather than living as a separate minority group with different lifestyles. Discuss both ideas?

The meaning of the culture has been increasingly significant in a fast moving and dynamic society. The question here is whether people who foreign settle down should adopt with new cultures or live with fellow citizen in a small group. However, I state my view that accepting new cultures is a must.

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Most employees do job interviews before offering position to a person. Do you think this is the best way to do it or are there better alternatives? What is the best method of choosing employer in your opinion?

The functioning of businesses has changed drastically over the past few years and so does the recruitment process. Some believe that the best approach is interviewing potential employees while others have arguments against this method or practice. In my opinion, job interviews along with initial training are the most effective methods.

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Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

Violent scenes in the film industry appear more and more and it becomes actual theme over the world. This essay will examine that inclusion of violence episodes damage psychologically and mentally sides of audience by increasing criminals in our life and possible overcome of this social problem by introducing strict rules and declaim the cinematographers with this type of unusual thing.

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