IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1460

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

band

Many people put their personal information (address, telephone number,...) online for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In modern society, personal information required for everyday tasks are usually saved on the Internet. From my perspective, it is no doubt that this trend is proved to be convenient in various ways, however, there are serious technical risks that need to be articulated.

band

The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

Increase in obesity is an alarming issue as it has adverse effects on health and fitness and it is putting people at risk of chronic diseases. While, the sedentary lifestyles as well as easy access to food are the prominent reasons behind it, there are certain measures that can address this problem to some extent.

band

Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some advocate the view that the government should not promulgate income tax for its citizens. To the best of my knowledge, I totally disagree with this statement inasmuch as the funding from taxation can be used to contribute to the benefit of individuals and the society as a whole.

band

Q. Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.

It is argued that using cultural traditions as a touristic attraction will destroyed them,whilst some people believe that it can be the only choice to keep these traditions.This essay will discuss both arguements and explain that why this method could be beneficial.

band

Some people believe that the age limit for the drivers should be increased to ensure road safety. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

On the one hand, in this machine-oriented life, not many people place a high value on essential rules of driving, which is not related to the drivers’ age. This way, stricter laws and measures, such as revoking delinquents driving licenses, controlling the speed of devices and redesigning poor roads rather than heightening the age limit can be a key step to decrease the rate of car accidents. Moreover, not only can community education enhance individuals’ awareness, but also they can become familiar with traffic laws, providing road safety.

band

some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools, others however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Either mixed schools or single schools is a hotly-debated topic that often divide opinion.Nevertheless,some say it is of preference to educate boys and girls in distinct schools while it is imperative taking part in mixed schools.I will el

band

Many people believe that it's better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, collaborating study is a new teaching method, where students can share their ideas with small group of people and also help them to improving understanding level of difficult topics and communication ability. I partially agree with this notion. In, the forthcoming essay, I will articulate some pros and cons of this method.

band

Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What may be the root cause of this behavior? Discuss the reasons and possible results.

It is true that these days people are spending a bigger proportion of their money on beauty care than ever before. Although there are some negative consequences to this, men and women can take certain steps to reduce the potential problems caused by this.

band

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or to travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss and advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Education is important in everyone life's and it's show ray of hope to get success in future. In few countries people motivates youth to do job or travel annually in mid of completing higher education and in the intial stage of the University. This essay will discuss both the Advantages and Disadvantages of the young generation who accept this challenges.

band

Nowadays many people choose to be self- employed rather than to work for a company or organisation .why might this be the case? What could be the advantages and disadvantages of being self-employed?

The employment desires of people have been changed. Consequently, the majority have of people have chosen the self-employment over salaried jobs. In my view, this trend will reduce the number of job seekers in the market. Although, this option beneficial people with a considerable freedom and a higher profit, even with the significant risk and responsibilities.

band

Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are many educational institutes compel students to learn foreign languages to make them multiple language speaker and help them to defeat their competitors in the future. Certainly, as the world is becoming a global village, and the significance of global languages is becoming greater, it becomes the need of students to learn such languages, but I strongly agree with the statement that a child shall not be compelled to study foreign language, especially when they are too young.

band

To some people studying the past it is the best way to help young people function well in the modern world.

Every year the world is developing and that we need educate ourselves to learn and take action, as it can help the younger people to adapt and work freely in the modern world. There are several ways that we ought to study about so then we can lay the base for them.

band

Many people Today find it difficult to balance the demands of their work and personal life what are the causes of the situation and what kind individuals and employers do to reduce the problem

These days work life balance is such a difficult issue to people in this era due to the fact that the rising cost of living and also the atmosphere of competition at work place. However, we should seek a solution for this problem by saving more money and make relaxing vibe at the company.

band

Many people believe that the government should encourage industries and businesses to move from large cities to the countryside. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people feel that it is essential for the government to provide incentives for industries and trades to relocate from urban areas to rural sites. In my opinion, the merits exceed the drawback.

band

Some people like to try new new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

Experimenting new things give a sense of excitment most of the times but also backfires at times. While, a few people would be creative in their ideas by trying new things like visiting various locations and tasting new food, others adjusts with what they are already know. In this essay, I will discuss both views and supporting examples to opine the former statement is more interesting to lead a happy and meaningful life.

band

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether children should be taught to be competitive or co-operative. While a spirit of competition can sometimes be useful in life, I believe that the ability to co-operate is more important. On the one hand, competition can be a great source of motivation for children. When teachers use games or prizes to introduce an element of competitiveness into lessons, it can encourage children to work harder to outdo the other pupils in the class. This kind of the healthy rivalry may help to build children's self-confidence, while pushing them to work independently and progress more quickly. When these children leave school, their confidence and determination will help them in competitive situations such as job interviews. It can therefore be argued that competition should be encouraged in order to prepare children for adult life. On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to prepare children for the many aspects of adult life that require...

band

In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

During the fourth industrial revolution, technology has become not only a crucial part of life but also has a significant impact on human’s career path. As opposed to the past, people nowadays use more modern devices such as laptops, phone and 4G to start working at home, we no longer need to travel to the workplace.

band

The environment problems facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Governments and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

To begin with, individual awareness of the natural law of cause and effect must be nurtured. All levels of education, especially primary and secondary schools, can be a good starting point to develop the realization that whatever we do to the environment, it will return to ourselves. Moreover, the mass media are also responsible for raising the public's ecological consciousness. Instead of persuading people to buy those new products that only serve to fuel the existing environmental problems, one of their unavoidable obligations is to instill the urgent need of taking care of our natural environment into the psyche of each and every member of our planet.

band

Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Other say that having a friendly relationship is better. Discuss both points and give your opinion.

Teaching is not the only duty of a teacher but dealing with them itself is a big responsibility. Now , we have people who think friendliness is the right way to treat students whereas others think that teachers should be strict. I shall discuss both views in this essay.

band

The Growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Significant growth in E-Commerce has revolutionised the shopping practice around the world. Although it is considered an innovative method to purchase things, yet it’s commonly argued that it has an adverse impact on the shops around various cities and towns. I concede with the later argument and would like to elucidate some reasons for the same.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.