IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 162

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

band

Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate about whether school should be responsible to fostering children habit on healhty diet or it should be parents roles. While some advocate that school have essential role in navigating children habit others believe that parents are holding the responsible as the first place to learn. This essay will explore both perspective before presenting a reasoned conclusion.

band

Too much emphasis is given for the education of students. More government money should be spent on free time activities for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate about whether government should prioritize educational funding or invest more heavily in recreational activities for young people. While I agree that leisure activities play an essential role in development of the youth, I firmly believe that education should remain the top priority for government spending. In this essay, I will elaborate on why education is crucial while acknowledging the benefits of free-time activities.

band

Some prents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys ?

Busy life styles of majority of the global population has become a reason for parents to keep their children entertained by providing them with their desired toys. This essay brings up possible pros and cons of children owning large amount of toys.

band

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also caused problems that did not exsit before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

There is no doubt, that the Internet has changed the way of dissemination of information. However, it caused some issues such as the availability of not correct data and the fraud in the global network. I will observe this problems and find ways of solution.

band

Some employers offer their employees subsidizedmembership of gyms and sport clubs , believe that this will make their staff healthier and more effective at work . Other employees find no benifit doing so. Discuss both views .

CEOs often register their workers on gyms and sport community refrain them to have sedentary lifestyle and stay effective in their job. Some workforce argue that it is beneficial because it can lessen the financial burden and support their annual habit. However the others see the program is useless because of unstoppable workflow and damage their well-being.

band

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addiiton to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all thier time qnd attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There has been an ongoing conflict about whether university students could take not only mandatory couses but also addiitonal lectures during their education period. This phenomenon can be regarded as both favorale and unfavorable and it would be discussed throughout the essay. My opinion will be reflected the latter.

band

Some students take a year off and going to university in order to travel or to work. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Undeniably, A large number of high School graduates choose to traveling or working instead of directly entering school. Which is with more positive effects and negative influences.

band

Some people say that that working at home is beneficial to the worker and the family while others believe that it is stressful to both the worker and the family. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that employees and their families are getting benefits from working from home scheme. However, others argue that it can cause work related stress for both parties. This essay elaborates the two sides and I agree with the former since its benefits outweigh the latter.

band

Some people believe that the environmental impacts of air transport outweigh its benefits in food importation. To what extent do you agree? Provide reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.

A considerable number of people think incresed use of air transport to import fruits and vegetables from one nation to another where habitation is not good to grow such vegetation is a good option while others opine that it is a bad idea. According to me, it is a good idea to import vegetables to other countries will provide global trade their people have the excess nutrition that they need but it has a bad impact on local marketing and the environment.

band

Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruot and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some consider it a good idea, some are not. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

A considerable amount of people think enlarge usage of air transport to import fruits and vegetable from one nation to another where habitation is not good to grow such vegetation is good option while other opines that its bad idea. According to me, it is good idea to import vegetables to other countries will provide global trade their people have excess to nutrition that they need but it has bad impact on local marketing and enviornment.

band

Many people used distance- learning programs to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefits as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world that we live in to day changed dramatically in just around 2 decades thanks to development of internet. One of the things that also got affected was education, which mostly changed due to people being able to study lectures from thire own place. This essay explores wether it is benifitial or not, based on arguments and different reasons.

band

Some expert believe that ia better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?

In this contemporary era, in every country on the earth, there is disagreement around the topic of learning international languages. On this topic, few consider kids ought to learn new language at primary schools while others contend that children should learn outside language in grade 11 and grade 12. There are several upsides and downsides regarding this matter.

band

Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook)have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society?To what extent do you agree? In the current world, The usage of technology is constantly on the rise.

These days a lot of people argue that social media have a negative impact on both human and society. I completely disagree with this statement. Firstly, using social media help people to connect with each other. Secondly, social networking help individuals create their own work which make them able to earn money.

band

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the coming future, all car, bus, and trucks will become driveless. Only passengers will travel inside the car without driver. I believe the biggest advantage of this technology is that it will solve the problem of stressful driving in heavy traffic. Whereas, this will lead to increase in unemployment for so many cab and truck drivers.

band

Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays an enormous number of people from all over the world use plastic shopping bags in their daily life. At the same time there are opponents of plastic bags usage because of their detrimental impact on the environment. I totally agree with the point of view that plastic shopping bags should be forbidden.

band

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays some animals species facing challenges to stay alive. Others seem to be very adaptive in these kind of environment. Many types of animals are at risks of extinction for a variety of reasons such as human hunting and natural environment. Figuring out this issue should be starts by strict rules by individuals and governments.

band

Research into medical treatment is essential to improve health and fight disease.Who do you think should fund this research:individuals,private compaines or goverment?

In this state-of-the-art epoch health play a pivotal role in every human beings life as to survive in this stressful era it is mendatory to have healthy and wealthy lifestyle.Some school of thought claim that, in recent days research into medical treatments is crucial to improve health and give majore fight disease.This essay shall discuss every individuals should take part in this survey and it will bw articulated in forth coming paragraphs.

band

Part 2 Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People tend to spend time together, work together, and eventually live together, which seem to be a nature of human-beings.However, an intimate relationship can also lead to endless arguments and fights. That's why it's crutial for us to seek a way to maintain a proper balance between any kind of relationship in life.

band

For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than art. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

In the past, art used to be one of the integral parts of societies, which changed dramaticly duo to advant of technology. people started to move on and choose tech based stuff over art. This essay, explores the possible reasons and gives some solutions that could be useful to make people not forget about arts.

band

Environmental hazards are often too great for particular countries or individulas to tackle. We have arri ved at a point in time where the only way to lessen environmental problem is at an international level . To what extent do you agree or disagree.

natural disasters have became a significant problem for governments as it evolved much in the last century. Moreover, most undeveloped counteries can not handle the cost of rebuilding the loses of it. I totally agree with statement especialy that currently people attention about the world state have decreased.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.