IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 186

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The linegrahp below shows the differences in the consumption of three fast food among Australian teenager. Write a report describing the information shown below.

The line graph compares three types of fast food consumption between 1975 and 2000.

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Some people prefer to live in the same place most of their life, but others like to live in different places. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The decision about where to live is a contentious issue debate, whereas some people prefer live in the same place where they grow up, considering about stability, but otherwise for some people live in different places could be a good option. I think, convenionce is the most important to decide where we should live, it could be in the same place most of their life or in different place.

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IELTS Writing Correction Service / Writing Samples / Band 7 Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A considerable number of individuals believe that marketing compel us to purchase new products that we truly do not require and other opines that, the advertisements provide information about new goods that can be more useful for our daily life. According to me, commercials are more useful for businesses and companies, in a prospective of selling but as a buyer it make us to buy unnecessary products that we already have it.

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Some people have the opinion that big shopping malls are expensive places as they offer high costs for the products which can be bought at much cheaper prices from local shops. On the other hand, some people think that such malls are absolutely the best places to visit for shopping. Discuss both the opinions and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your ans

Having a wide varity of options is one of the blessings of our modern day and age. Shopping is not about buying neccesities anymore, it became a life style and lesiure actvity. Some memebers of a socity prefers shopping malls because they offer wide range of choices while others think local markets and farmer shops are more affortable. In this essay, I will shed a light on those views and give my opinion.

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These days more and more people are going to other countries for a significant period of time either to find a job or study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

In this day and age, becoming an international dweller is a fashionable trend which everybody around the world wants to achieve as a result in the number of people who learn or work abroad increasingly higher. Although its popularity, it also has both pros and cons. The essay below will point out some arguments about this topic.

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Putting criminals into prisons is not an effective way to deal with them. Instead, education and job training should be offered. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,some of the individuals prefer to take the criminals into prisons,and the others tend to provide some educations and job practices.From my own perspective,I agree with part of the point of view,and I will demonstrate the reasons.

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Some people believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other at work, at school and in daily life. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

I believe that cooperate is the most correct way to work. One person can not know everything, we all have only one brain, the same body and our imagination about world without full view.

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Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economics around the world.However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals claim that although the tourist industry is one of the most burgeoning fields and brings positive economical consequences, its negative influences on indigenous cultures and environment are minimally evaluated. In this essay, I elaborate on the reasons why I totally advocate this view.

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Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

At the present, architecture has a significant factor to show modern buildings. Some people believe that the ancient buildings in urban areas should be replaced with modern ones, while others think differently; they believe that old buildings show the city's heritage, so they have to protect them. From my perspective, both ideas are right because every rose has its thorns, so there is no wrong idea. This essay will attempt to shed the light on both perspectives.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).

It is true that some people agree that unpaid community service should be a mandatory part of high school programmes. I think it has some advantages and some disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss about advantages and disadvantages.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

While it is widely debated that we should emphasis the requirement of large public outdoor spaces like squares and parks in all towns and cities more, others suggested that this scheme may not as crucial as development of economical related infrastructures like department stores. Hence, I strongly support with the former statement as it induce city dwellers to become more healthy both physically and mentally will be discussed further in this essay.

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Topic: digital communication technology such as email, instant messaging and social media has improved communication and connection between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In modern times, the technology used for communication have vastly changed and improved the interaction of mankind. In this essay, I will discuss why I strongly agree on the instant modes of media and its positive implications towards exchanges.

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Some people say that it is impossible to live comfortably in big cities. What problems are faced by the people living in big cities? What steps can be taken to solve those problems?

It is believed that it is hard to live comfortably in big cities because people have to face many problems, which come along with the benefits of living in major cities. There are many measures that need to be taken to stop or solve these problems.

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Most modern family have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What problem can this cause?

There is no denying the fact that most modern family have both parents working. It is possible to say this will result as children spend less and less time with their parents. This essay will explain the reasons behind this as well as problem can this cause.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discus both sides and give your opinion.

Some people believe that completing university education is the best way to secure jobs, while others believe that gaining experience and soft skills are more important to get satisfactory jobs. I personally believe that while university qualification only helps to get jobs, achieving experience and soft skills help to get jobs more faster.

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In many countries, people are not taking care of their elderly relatives but seeking help from professionals to look after them. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowdays, It has become trend of sending elderly relatives to old age homes to get looked after because of the busy life of today. I think it is a negative development as everybody is busy in building their career.

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Should media networks such as newspapers publish people'as private information?

It has been a matter of dispute that newspapers should use people's personal information or not?Because in this era of compeition,each and every news platform wants to stand different,so that their channels can get as much as TRP is possible to get, but, in this rat race they forget about other people's emotions and knowingly or unknowingly invade their privacy without their consent which can ruin other people's life or carrer for a lifetime and because of which some people have commited suicides. As per my opinion, i do not believe that it is fair to use other people'life just for the sake of their newspage success,but, if it is published with their permission,then it is not wrong.I am going to support my point of view in upcoming paragraphs.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing

It is true that improving medical care means that people are living longer and their life expectations are increasing day by day. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is considered that most important goal of science to make individuals life better. I agree with the statement, Because science play a very important role in people health, without proper medical science will be very difficult to safe anyones live. On the other hand, developments in technology also plays a great role in making person life easier.

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Some people say that watching TV programmes and movies related to crime are popular. Why do you think it is popular and how does it affect society?

Nowadays the old stories of serial killers and their innocent victims are in vogue, especially since big companies like Netflix began producing TV series and films about this topic. Why these are so popular and their impact on the society will be discussed in this essay.

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