IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 184

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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An increasing number of people choose to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why do people want to change the way they look? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the modern era, physical exercises have a great impact on the human development. Few masses tend to do little and no physical activities that lead to health issues. This essay will analyse reasons for above statement along with solutions in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some believe that children nowadays have too much freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, some individuals argued that children usually take a lot of time to do freedom activities. In my point of view, i disagree with the essay because with the advancement of technology, parents are able to control their sons or daughters to have a positive impact on their children's lives. Moreover, they will protect their children in safe areas for their children from criminal activities. So the children do not become criminals or victims in the future.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Pesronal development is a must for children growth, for which children needs to learn the difference between right and wrong. Many people believe that punishment is necessary for them to learn the difference while others believe that time and experience will help them understand this difference. Using this essay I will try to explain my reasons to believe that punishment is sometime necessary to help children distinguish the difference with specific examples.

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Nowadays many people prefer to study or live in foreign countries. While studying and living abroad brings many benefits to individuals, it also has a number of disadvantages. What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?

In this contemporary epoch, a large proportion of individuals choose to live and study in foreign nations. This essay will delve into the various pros and cons that people face in their lives while living abroad.

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Some people think that team sports prepare children for work life but others think individual sports are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some people think the best way for children be nimble, leader is to through in different team sports. It is undeniable that doing sports and interaction become an essential part of our life. Personally, I tend to think that it is not necessary to send your child to a sports section for his interaction with people.

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Topic: Obesity is a major healthy problem. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, A primary health issue is Obesity there are many causes of this problem. I personally believe, a behavioral diet and lack of exercise are the main roots of this problem. However, this point can be improved by the government and community.

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Present-day schools are as effective as it needs to be. Also, teachers at school do not attach enough Importance to the classes they run. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern era educational facilites are so efficient .As well as ,teachers at school do not pay attention sufficiently to the class .So ,I tend to agree with the 1st opinion because of some convincing reasons,but I can not go along with the 2nd idea for plausible reasons.In this essay I will touch the reasons of given statements whether I agree or disagree.

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Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make greater contributions to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many argue that the people who are employed in the most significant branches, such as medicine and education, should earn more than those who busy with sports and entertainment sectors as their importance is more. I totally disagree with this view. I believe that funding amusement and sports are also important for people's mental health and they contribute country's recognition.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry payment and land. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Despite the improvements in farming , a myriad of individuals are still hungry. Due to the poverty, many people faint from hunger all around the world. The best method to solve this issue is to give humans jobs that they are able to do.

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Some people believe that students should be required to study a broad range of subjects, while others argue that students should be allowed to specialize in a specific field from an early age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

From past decades to now, the aim of school education is developing awareness of self, and teaching diverse subjects to students. While some have an attitude that it is necessary for pupils to learn a wide range of contents, others believe that the area of studies should be chosen by students themselves from very young ages. I agree with the first group and both viewpoints will be argued in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think history has little or nothing to offer, while others say the study of the past helps us understand the present

History is an essential aspect in providing information about current decades. Although we can explain our modern life through the history of evolution, it may not be supportable in modern occupations or provide exact information.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can indeed pose both social and practical challenges. Do you agree or disagree?

Residing in a country where you have to speak a foreign language may be both challenging in terms of social and practical way. I agree on the statement regarding the difficulties a non-native person encounters when living on a country where the language being used is not their first language.

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Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than rural area. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?

The criminal level in the majority of countries is surging in cities rather than in the countryside areas. This essay will discuss the cause of this and what measures should be taken to decrease the level.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Being a home owner or a tenant has always been a controversial issue and the decision definitely depends on personal preferences and the financial situation of the housing market. Many people regard the ownership of their living place as their life priority due to the security it provides. I am of the positive view considering owning a home since it brings about peace of mind.

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Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

According to some people in near future digital money will gradually substitute physical currency. While this form of payment has some benefits, there are several drawbacks. Both views will be discussed in this essay. Personally, I think that in everyday life, debit and credit cards are much more convenient than cash.

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Studying the english language in an english-speaking country is the best but not the only wat to learn the language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Generally, learning English is best done by studying on English-speaking nations yet, there are other alternatives to learn the language. In this essay I will discuss on why I agree on other ways to learn the international language but believing that the best way to know it is by first-hand experience of living on English-speaking countries.

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Fewer students are studying science at schools and universities, favoring more computer-based subjects. Is this a positive or negative development? What are the reasons for this?

In the modern era, technological innovations have a great impact on the learning of learners. The majority of students choose computer-based courses over science at schools and colleges. This essay will analyse the reasons for above statement along with positive development in the subsequent paragraphs.

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While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, academic study for university has been popular among the majority of people while other groups of people suggest that the young generation should be encouraged to vocational training so there are a lot of opportunities for workers such as electricians and plumbers. In this essay I will write about how we can help people make the right decisions in their lives.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The assertion that average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in future that is now a considerable topic of discussion. I agree with the statement to an extent as there are several negative factors that could impact the public health.

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details of politician private lives should not be published in newspapers. to what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Publishing information regarding private matters of politicians in the media platforms such as newspapers, and newschannels depends on the severity of the news. However, I believe personal news of politicians being published on the newspapers is breach of privacy.

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