IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 185

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals think they should be exempted on paying tax to the country where he/she belong and save all his/her income to himself/herself. I completely disagree with this statement because it will affected mostly the health sectors and educational sectors of the government.

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some people say that the environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People held different views about whether the loss of certain species in fauna and flora is more important or other environmental problems are more urgent. Although, there are serious agruments in both sides I believe there are more important problems such as global warming that inlfuents directly humanity in several ways, as well as, species of plants and animals. This essay demonstates firstly the impotance of natural diversity and consequent results of loss this diversity followed by an analysis of global warming from other environmental problems and how it effects on both humanity and other life forms.

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Obesity in children is a serious problem in a number of countries. What are the causes of obesity in children? Discuss the possible alarming effects of this problem in the future.

Nowadays, children are prone to have a serious disease. Even, the disease should attack the adults one, but because of unhealthy lifestyle, children must aware of many kind of illness. One of crucial problems that children facing today is obesity. Obesity can lead to many other healthy issues, such as diabetes. This essay will discuss how unhealthy lifestyle make children become overweight and diabetes as the most negative impacts of it.

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People in many countries do not wear their traditional costume. Some argue that they would forget their history and tradition. Do you agree or disagree?

In many nations, people do not put on their traditional clothes, while others believe they may forget their history and tradition. I firmly agree with the statement that if people do not practice their tradition, eventually their cultural tradition will fade away and foreign culture will take place of their traditional costumes.

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In some countries, students live at home with a family while they study at university, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do the advantages of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that there are many countries where the younger people who study at university, and they are living with their parents,whereas, some adults who are living abroad and studying there live without their family. So, there is a problem with choosing one of this kind of education where you need more experience.

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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, gender- related roles have changed, and men stay at home to take care of their children, and women are more active outside of the house. This matter, which I think is completely positive, could have some reasons like the equal view point to both sexes in the societies, and women increased desires for progression.

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In many cities, private cars are banned from city centers. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In some crowded cities, banning private cars from entering to the city centres has been run. This matter could have some advantages, like less air pollution and less traffic jams, and some disadvantages, including harder accessibility to the central places.

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

Two maps illustrate the differences between Porth Harbour in 2000 and Porth Harbour today and how this harbour has developed since 2000.

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Some people think eating meat is bad for health. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, we live in an era of dramatic environmental changes. For that reason, today’s society has undergone significant changes and multiple new movements somehow have resulted from this. One of them, a controversial topic, is vegetarianism. A lot of people, today, call for refusing to stop eating meet, considering this as an integral part of a healthy life style. Meanwhile, the others conversely believe that the trend takes numerous side effects on our health. In this essay, both viewpoints will be revealed comprehensively.

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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

Exercise is beneficial for everyone, especially young children and adolescents. Therefore, physical fitness and games should be made important subjects in all educational centers. I totally agree with this statement because they enhance students’ intellectual skills and help maintain a healthy life.

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some people think that having a set retirement age of 65 for everybody, regardless ocupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retaired and receive a pension at an earlier age do you agree or disagree

It is thought by some that having a fixed age of retirement at 65 years old for everyone in relationship with their's occupations, it is not fair. They think that some kind of professions should deserve to retire and obtain a pension at sooner stage. I totally agree with this statement and I will argue the reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some that it is not fair to be allowed to be retired just when turning 65 years old. They believe that some of the employments should be done until an earlier stage of life. This essay completely agree with this statement, I will argue the reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or dis agree?

A lot of millennials believe that government should not spend money on the arts , but it should be used on something more valuable to the society. I partially believe with the statement, government should try to maintain a striking balance while spending public money for the welfare of the society. In this essay, I will shed light on both views and put forth my opinion on the matter.

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Some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern word, most of people argue that male and female are equal. Both gender has same ability and can do everything they want. In entrance of university, it is debatable whether limiting gender portion is necessary or not. Some argue it is needed to make them learn from each gender and others disagree that since students should be evaluated by their own ability.

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In many countries around the world , rural people are moving to cities ,so the population in the country side is decreasing Do you think it is a positive or a negative development

These days many people are migrating from small towns to the metropolitans, resulting in a decrease in population density in the towns. Therefore, many of us opine that this is a negative trend, whereas, other thinks it is a positive trend. However, I found the latter viewpoint more persuasive and reasons to support my stance are elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better for children than watching TV or playing computer games.’ To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Reading is a very good habit that one needs to develop in life. Good books can inform you, and lead you in the right direction.It argue that books increase the creativity and imagination for children than catching a movie on TV or playing electronic games.I believe that stories can help children learn about important values , exercise their creative thinking ,support their cognitive development and improve their language skills. In fact,book play a significant role in children life regarding knowledge , it help them improve their skills and lead to a successful achievements in school . According to a recent study from the American Academy of Pediatrics, reading aloud to your child from birth helps build key language, literacy and social skills.Furthermore Reading requires focus and concentration which can improve attention for children.Moreover reading enhance the vocabulary expansion which supports the child in writting.As well, studies have shown that reading helps reduce stress b...

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Most of the people in older time used to stay in the same place. Now many people keep changing places and move to various places during their life time. What Are the reasons for this? Do u think that it is a positive or a negative development?

It is an wide spread phenomenom moving to diffrent places. There are many reasons for moving for sure, I think people's interest is the main reason among them. For example some people who have interests in caring would move for give better educational envorionments for there child, while someone who likes farming would move to suburban.

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Some people think that visiting museums is the best way for children to learn history, while many others think there are several better ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Visiting museums are often considered an effective way for children to learn history, while others believe there is better alternatives. Both views have valid points, and it is essential to glance them before giving an opinion.

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【2023.02.04】Some people think they have the right to use as much water as they wan. Others, however, believe that the government should control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most controversial issue today relates to Use of water resources.While many individuals consider that people have the unrestricted right to use water as they wish,,some people tend towards the viewpoint that water resource should be controlled by the government due to its limitation.In this essay,I am going to examine both points of view and provide my own opinion.

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Some people think computer and internet are important in children's study , but other think students can learn effectively in school and with teachers . Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

A downright variance of view has been observed among the masses regarding effective tools for studies. A segment of the society contends that having instructive guidance are vitally important for adults for their academic work,opponents meanwhile,adhere to the notion of utilization of internet for the same agenda.The ensuing paragraphs will proffer an insight into both the doctrines and explain that why it is important to considering internet for their academic work acts as foster tool to learn about studies

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